Recent Comments

1/26/22, 1:42 PM
Fucking amazing. The detailed descriptions are so damn hot.
1/26/22, 12:40 PM
Oh my god.. So good to have you back on this story. It was perfection
1/25/22, 10:36 PM
Oh, yes, yesss! Excellent! it was great, and I'm wishing to see what's next for the idol with all of those changes! It's going deliciously, I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!!

1/26/22, 9:29 AM
thank you for enjoying my story more to come @Plymouth58
Anonymous
1/26/22, 3:41 AM
Nice to see one hot stud being brought down. I enjoyed Sunghoon's awareness of how wrong things were but inability to disobey. Looking forward to what happens to the rest of the group.
Anonymous
1/26/22, 12:15 AM
I love it! Cant wait to read more
Anonymous
1/25/22, 9:33 PM
Amazing! This series is my favorite.
1/24/22, 7:49 PM
Aww, I was expecting him to be erect inside and have a monster dick for Yarif...

1/24/22, 10:16 PM
@naturallyInconsistent he should be so lucky!
1/21/22, 2:48 AM
I love this series. I hope for a positive outcome but what a sweet and poignant story. The innocence and love fear is palatable. Well done!!

1/24/22, 10:15 PM
@Stroppy Author We got some bumps in the road incoming, but hopes noted.
1/24/22, 7:17 PM
Fantastic writing in this series, as always. Worth the wait to see this pay off!

1/24/22, 8:29 PM
@amul Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback. Took me a while to get to this point in the story, many false starts. There will be a final short chapter rapping up the story.
1/24/22, 6:58 PM
I really like how you have specifically made the sex scene itself the character progression for both Killian and Tobias, and that both of them actually want the baby. I also want the baby... mpreg meow tooooo!!!
1/23/22, 11:58 PM
would live to see more of this

1/24/22, 2:40 PM
Glad to hear that you like it Chapter 2 is coming so stay tuned @EvanIshihara96
1/23/22, 4:28 PM
I hope it doesn't take you long to post the next chapter, I really what to know what's gonna happen next!!!! the tags seem sooo promising! I hope the whole band to be stripped of their good looks and status.

1/24/22, 2:39 PM
Chapter 2 is on the way hopefully within the week it will be published stay tuned hehe. @Plymouth58
Jonanator
1/23/22, 2:33 PM
I'm assuming there will be another part to this? Because this is a posted on here, is the plan for this figure to also manipulate the relationship between Sunghoon and Changmin?

1/23/22, 3:15 PM
yeah it will be an ongoing series as it has lots of possibilities just checking the waters if many would love me to continue the story. @Jonanator

Jonanator
1/23/22, 3:22 PM
@Hypnobot Well, I look forward to see how this goes, and whats in store for Sunghoon and Changmin next. Can't wait for more.
Anonymous
1/23/22, 2:18 PM
The story could use some more editing, but I am glad to see sexy K-pop lads get put through the wringer. The scene certainly has plenty of possibilities to explore from their carefully controlled life being upended to having their lives even more strictly managed than it already was. Meticulously trained bodies can be "ruined" for their career or deformed into even greater exaggerations than they already were. I am curious about where things will go.

1/23/22, 3:17 PM
Thanks this would be an ongoing series and more is expected to happen.@
1/21/22, 9:23 PM
A story mixing Pokemon and gay erotic seems to odd.
1/20/22, 6:37 PM
While the story itself is simple, I like the expertly crafted the way it jumps in time to reveal information not before it is needed. It does a lot of world building without explicitly telling us everything, just welcomes us to accept this reality and enjoy a slice of it. And I always enjoy a good dom-bottom story.

1/21/22, 1:29 AM
This is super helpful for me! Knowing that this is something I did well will help me focus on improving it in the future. I think I started to comprehend this after chapter 5 of P&FB thanks to a comment by time.to.occur. It’ll definitely be a part of my next editing pass for the follow-up to this story. @Josh Slater
1/20/22, 5:51 PM
Well written, second story now for me that has shown me that it is possible to inject a tenderness and variety to sex scenes to try to keep things interesting. I did find the characterisation of "I would *never* loose this much cum..." a bit odd when just sessions earlier he was saying that he was ready to let it all go, not telling his husband that he was close

1/20/22, 6:16 PM
Ooh, I’m really glad that I was able to show you something new in that sense! I’m always trying to make sure that my scenes aren’t just repetitive. I’d like to think that what he thought earlier on was a result of Tobias’s powerful edging, and once Tobias cowed him he became a little more sensible again, but I understand if that rang kind of strangely after all! @A Possession A Day

1/20/22, 6:41 PM
@Soren Fitz Yeah that does make sense, I guess people are rarely going to be fully rational in the middle of a wild sex romp and everything haha. Just a minor thing
Archer19cm
1/14/22, 11:59 PM
Delightful read. And I am Team Eddy the Monster in some form. Kudos!

1/20/22, 1:27 PM
@Archer19cm Allegiance noted. ;)
1/11/22, 12:32 PM
Eddy could be monsterised, maybe on a part time basis where each is monster or human but cannot control the process e.g. They wake up each day as HH HM MH orMM

1/20/22, 1:23 PM
@Morph some interesting ideas. I think lore wise human to monster would be almost impossible ('never say never' with magic, but, regular human into a semi-magical beast? truly difficult). However, I hadn't considered the scenario of letting Yarif "spend a few days" as a human until I read your comment, and this would be no problem for a decent wizard or witch. With appropriate motivation, the mayor would probably do this for Yarif. The idea also appeals to me, because it would be akin to a 'walk in the enemies shoes' scenario. I have a potential chapter coming up where Eddy tries to bring Yarif to "the gay village", claiming "well, we're gay; we're as much magical beings and we are gay so these people are our tribe too, these *human* queers; and they're well used to being afraid to walk down the street alone for fear of danger". Maybe they meet a drag queen, (maybe like a "shock" drag queen, or some gruff but friendly looking bears).
1/19/22, 5:53 PM
@bluesuedewho, hope you're doing okay!
1/18/22, 9:51 PM
Some later world building exposition would be welcome, even if not sexy~

Martin
1/19/22, 6:03 AM
@naturallyInconsistent Rly? I thought my "instruction manual" was enough boring text already :)
1/18/22, 9:54 PM
Am quite lost reading this. Isn't he said to be an incubus? But without reading the manual to the succubus part, he is a succubus in this chapter. But this makes meow hard!!!

Martin
1/19/22, 6:03 AM
@naturallyInconsistent You mean because he bottomed? For me I didn't draw the line between inbcubus or succubus at whether he's dom or sub. He's male, so he's an incubus by definition. The great thing about his new sexual awakening as an incubus is that he can and will accommodate every man's sexual desire. So if his 'victim' desires a sub as a partner, Chad will be the perfect sub slut for him. And vice versa. For me, that would be the greatest achievement. Being the best sexual partner you can be, having no issues adapting at all and while still enjoying it to the fullest!
1/18/22, 12:33 PM
Wow! So happy to see the series continuing. It was very hot! I loved the idea of the game, especially all the sex scenes. It was hot seeing Jasper in action, especially bottoming. I would love to see him bottoming for his Owner. :D All the political intrigue was very well written too; I could tell you out a lot of work into it, especially with all of the characters playing roles. It was a very interesting way to present Rhys' pet to society. Can't wait to see more of Jasper being a pet and hopefully some intimate sex scenes between Owner and pet. The tender moments of Rhys holding his pet after the argument for very sweet and erotic. Well done! Such a good addition to the series. :) Can't wait for more.

1/18/22, 8:57 PM
@Henry Wolf Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts! Cuddle-switch and I think that the game might actually be playable at like a dungeon or sex party with the right invitees and are...kinda looking forward to trying that one day. Really glad you enjoyed the sex scenes and the intrigue -- we were both hoping that it would be fun to intersperse! We're looking forward to sharing more, and I think you'll get your wish on some intimate time between Rhys and Jasper.

1/18/22, 9:22 PM
@time.to.occur Wow that would be one hot sex party. I mean, the sex parties I've been to are hot already but adding that game aspect would take it to another level haha!
9/10/21, 6:01 PM
I loved that story !! I can completely understand Martin's wish to go back to the submission ! I'll read you again with pleasure ! ;)

Martin
9/10/21, 7:36 PM
@Elgæ75 Yeah, I think it's no coincidence that I gave him my own name ... ☺️

1/18/22, 9:09 PM
@Martin Is that why you made it such that the only way to submit is to be blanked? Naughty Martin!
1/18/22, 6:39 PM
looking forewords to part 4
fry
1/18/22, 5:50 PM
Please, Please, Please continue the story!! It's very erotic!
Oct 30, 2021
1/18/22, 11:13 AM
love this story!
1/15/22, 4:39 PM
I check on this every day to see if the new chapter is up, I can't wait!!!

1/17/22, 1:48 PM
@Elmara Me too!
1/17/22, 9:24 AM
Hey S.Q. Neemie. Any update on when the next chapter hits? I can't wait to see what Tanner has planned next for both the sons and the Pastor.
1/8/22, 9:18 PM
The character developments are absolutely dizzying, but I love how everything is turning out!

1/8/22, 11:28 PM
@amul I'm having such a blast. I want this story to just get more and more absurd until i've reached the limit, and then for it to go even further! I get told that my stories get confusing and this one is going to make no sense by the end, whenever that ends up being 😂