Recent Comments

4/16/23, 8:57 PM
There is a fantastic mind control story here, between the truly boggling grammatical errors and malapropisms. They don't do this story the justice it deserves. Someone needs to edit this, because it's an amazing classic hypnosis piece.

autoDream
4/23/23, 7:38 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Apologies, I usually just spit these stories out in one sitting, and don't really re read or edit. Just like getting some fantasies out into the world. More of an idea person, rather than a writer perhaps. Haha. But I do appreciate that you like the story <3
4/23/23, 11:25 AM
This story about Theo and his roommate is absolutely fantastic!! I LOVE it and I hope there will be a lot of sequels. Maybe there will be some other teammates. Or just Jon and Teddy taking turns during classes in the restrooms. Or Teddy has a game and needs some relive... Or a brother (or - quite naughty - a dad in great shape and with a monster between his legs) during the holidays.... Soooo many opportunities...
Anonymous
4/22/23, 5:33 PM
this story gets hotter and hotter…
4/22/23, 1:17 AM
A lovely start ! Waiting to read the rest soon
4/20/23, 7:14 AM
You really do the best classic hypnotism sex scenes, though this one story I didn't quite get how the induction happened.
4/15/23, 9:05 AM
Congratulations. And thank you. This was an incredible ride and the most creative use of branching paths I've ever seen. To have each path be part of the major story and end result was very clever. Lots of hot sex with a variety of types. Incubus and Gerri definitely win from me. Gerri's comment about just wanting Xavier to be happy melted my little heart. I also love that you had some romance in here and that it ended with a poly finale so everyone can share the love.

4/19/23, 11:45 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) I'm so glad you liked it — thank you for your incredibly generous comments! I had a lot of fun coming up with the 'branching' premise and the way it would ripple out and affect all the Xaviers at once, and I'm really glad it's been working for readers. 😄 Thank you!
4/18/23, 4:43 PM
This is the kind of stuff that turned me gay...
Martin
4/17/23, 9:41 PM
I guess the heavy focus on a straight relationship is putting off a lot of readers here, but your writing is impeccable as you've proven in your other stories. And the sexual tension between the man and the boy is extremely tangible. The ending is really surprising and heavy, I wonder where this is heading. Please don't let the slow reaction on that first chapter keep you from posting the remaining chapters!

CasualWanderer82
4/18/23, 8:45 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you for the boost! I'll post soon. I'm actually really proud of how this story as developed.
CasualWanderer82
4/18/23, 8:42 AM
Thank you ALL for the positive feedback!
4/17/23, 6:07 PM
That was strange but fun. You’ve really developed as a writer and there was some genuine comedy in this. Well done!

4/17/23, 7:06 PM
@[Ruffcub](/user/show/21211) Thank you!
Anonymous
4/16/23, 8:28 AM
This opened a brand new fetish for me. I have the biggest desire to be made into a perfect cube now.

4/17/23, 8:52 AM
@Anonymous Must become perfect cube. Me perfect cube. You perfect cube as well?

Anonymous
4/17/23, 3:23 PM
@[grrside](/user/show/10021051) Me cube... Me perfect cube...
4/17/23, 8:41 AM
This captivated me. Beautifully written and incredibly erotic.
4/16/23, 10:05 PM
Great story mate! Congrats.
4/16/23, 12:52 PM
That was fun! I wanna go to that party.

4/16/23, 8:31 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man, I'm really pleased you're comin' on the journey. Hope you enjoy and DM me or comment on any story for things you'd like to see in the future
Anonymous
8/19/19, 2:42 PM
Excellent. A little more development would make it better. Loved the idea!

4/16/23, 8:30 PM
@Anonymous Hope you enjoy the reworked version to answer your comment from 2019 :)
4/16/23, 6:54 PM
incredible. Exceptional. Amazing writing.
4/16/23, 5:56 PM
This series has a lot of potential so far. The MC aspects have been very downplayed, but sometimes I like it when they are secondary to a story, rather than the focus. Independent of those, this is still a very good story that seamlessly blends found family tropes and poly-adjacent fun around a poignant core of sexual self-discovery. Bravo so far, and eager to see what comes next!
4/16/23, 1:25 PM
I love your stories so much and this new one is just PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing stories in the “dumb jock” genre. These are my favorite stories ever and I will never not want more and more stories just like this one and Brocurious. Can’t wait for more, man!!! Thank you!!
4/14/23, 9:02 AM
Excellent work!I read this three times and noticed that coffee could make the emission of Courage caffeined. Does that also mean Dr D make Courage’s cum ego-altering by spiking his tea and since he drink so much cum that he inadvertently change his own ego(become less evil)?

4/16/23, 2:08 AM
@[goodpuppy](/user/show/10023640) Thanks! Yes, Dr. Darkness sets up his own downfall here by trying to poison Courage with caffeine, not realizing specifically what it does in this universe.
4/16/23, 12:55 AM
Too bad Christian chose the miserable route. I was hoping he could be brave and be honest with himself and Jacob.
4/15/23, 9:55 PM
i love this guy. He is so lovable and gullible. Thanks for the great storytelling.. You really are GREAT

4/15/23, 10:45 PM
Thanks for keeping me motivated I’m happy you enjoy Jake’s character. @[MChicago](/user/show/10024403)
4/15/23, 8:11 PM
Love the story! Can't wait for more!!

4/15/23, 10:44 PM
Glad you love it, can’t wait to write and share more! @[Taylor](/user/show/2690062)
4/15/23, 1:32 AM
A very good start!

4/15/23, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the Feedback!@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171)
4/15/23, 6:19 PM
Wow. You know what? I really loved that.

4/15/23, 8:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I was unsure about publishing it on this site but your comment already made it worth it.
4/15/23, 10:18 AM
That was a fun ride, thanks

4/15/23, 6:00 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you enjoyed it. There's a stand alone Fantasy Models story coming shortly then I might move to another or maybe new series
Nutiper
4/15/23, 3:38 PM
I love that the nerds' Magneto-helmet protections against Carter's powers are literally just tin foil hats disguised as cultist hoods. Also, the idea that Carter's going to try turning the entire nerd army into enthusiastic self-lubing buttsluts is somehow very funny to me. That's right, nerds! Sublimate your misguided rage and aggression at the world into enthusiastic power-bottoming!! Aah, brings me back to my college days...
4/15/23, 12:27 AM
I’m so happy to see you continuing this. I love Ig, Brook and Carter, and love the tension between the three of them. Fantastic characters.
4/14/23, 10:48 AM
Great story!
4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!
4/13/23, 11:59 PM
The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.