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4/15/23, 6:19 PM
Wow. You know what? I really loved that.

4/15/23, 8:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I was unsure about publishing it on this site but your comment already made it worth it.
4/15/23, 10:18 AM
That was a fun ride, thanks

4/15/23, 6:00 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you enjoyed it. There's a stand alone Fantasy Models story coming shortly then I might move to another or maybe new series
Nutiper
4/15/23, 3:38 PM
I love that the nerds' Magneto-helmet protections against Carter's powers are literally just tin foil hats disguised as cultist hoods. Also, the idea that Carter's going to try turning the entire nerd army into enthusiastic self-lubing buttsluts is somehow very funny to me. That's right, nerds! Sublimate your misguided rage and aggression at the world into enthusiastic power-bottoming!! Aah, brings me back to my college days...
4/15/23, 12:27 AM
I’m so happy to see you continuing this. I love Ig, Brook and Carter, and love the tension between the three of them. Fantastic characters.
4/14/23, 10:48 AM
Great story!
4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!
4/13/23, 11:59 PM
The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.
4/13/23, 12:23 PM
Amazing writing. It's electric ⚡⚡

CasualWanderer82
4/13/23, 3:54 PM
@[Test](/user/show/10000638) Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
4/13/23, 12:48 PM
What a FUN WONDERFUL STORY!
4/13/23, 6:09 AM
“Luca” feels like a good name for him.

Martin
4/13/23, 9:06 AM
@[RevivedKelsier](/user/show/10003625) :thumbsup:
Oct 30, 2021
CasualWanderer82
4/12/23, 9:42 AM
This was a wonderful read. Great storytelling. Great characters. My kind of erotica!

Papa Werebear
4/13/23, 8:35 AM
@[CasualWanderer82](/user/show/10035964) I'm very glad you liked the story. If you want to read more, Ursus Major And I Have a blog "The writing bear's cave" . https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com/p/blog-page.html Hope you find more stories there to your liking.
4/13/23, 6:44 AM
Really good! you definitely have left me hanging desperately for the next revelation.
4/13/23, 3:06 AM
What an amazing chapter! It’s full of genuine excitement and surprise twists. And you’re able to do it all without sacrificing the sex scenes. The moment where Carter—an all-powerful sex god—has a flashback to a D&D game is both hilarious and ADORABLE, which summarizes so much of your work. And finally, I really want to applaud just good you are at representing groups that traditionally aren’t seen on this site. You’re one of the best! :)
4/13/23, 2:43 AM
Incredible. This is distilled shaping slut smut and I LOVE it. Pushes so many of my buttons over and over. The old self resisting and the changes sweeping over him and bringing him to a new need. Desperate need and slipping just that little bit further into being a true slut for these guys. I'm only part-way and so wrapped up that I have been neglecting commenting so I wanted to remedy that before I dive under again.
4/12/23, 7:14 PM
This came across as more of a transitional chapter than anything else based upon it's diminutive position (in terms of length and action) relative to what we have received previously. At least, that is my hope as we have been so previously spoiled in this series.

4/12/23, 7:19 PM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) There’s more! Sorry if that wasn’t clear. Waiting till after the contest gave me time to stretch out the story some. Expect more in the days and weeks to come!
Anonymous
4/12/23, 3:44 PM
This is such a fun series, looking forward to more if there's chapters not out yet!
4/12/23, 12:09 PM
That was hot as hell. Knew what was cumming, but loved that lil bro saw
DD
4/12/23, 11:57 AM
Whoops... what's going to happen now?
Oct 30, 2021
4/12/23, 9:10 AM
Some how I missed the end of this amazing story. It really draws the reader in and makes the climax seem obvious-no spoilers though.
4/1/23, 4:54 AM
Love this action. And my god, this line of dialogue, mwah: “Nah,” said Bruno, “we’re doing the community a service by keeping this slut nice and plugged with fat man-sausage. Otherwise who knows what he might do. Might go crazy with cocklust. Might not be fit to be seen on the street, just rubbing his hole and whining for a big ol’ top to fuck him.” Fucking incredible.

4/11/23, 10:25 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) I just write true-to-life, really... I take notes on what people say about *me* and then into my stories it goes!

Martin
4/12/23, 4:48 AM
@[Philip K](/user/show/10022196) lol. Now I really want to get to know you personally...! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
4/11/23, 11:05 PM
Sweet! Any chance Carter can “delegate “ some of his powers to Ig and Brook?

4/12/23, 4:00 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I agree with Beaner here, i like his thinking. Give his followers and/or lovers some weapons/powers
4/12/23, 12:38 AM
I love Ig so much...
4/11/23, 11:21 PM
It was so good but so short! 😭😭😭
Sss
4/11/23, 1:43 AM
This is great.

4/11/23, 10:50 PM
@[Sss](/user/show/10004965) Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
4/2/23, 4:42 PM
Aw! These two. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

4/11/23, 10:50 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) I'm glad you liked Gerri! 😄 He surprised me by becoming a favorite of mine when writing him...
4/2/23, 4:38 PM
Some possible eldritch color names: _xorange_ , _breedagreen_, _sluturple_ , and _fucksha_ . Also _pre-puce_.

4/11/23, 10:49 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Well, now I know what colors Golbo'bog is painting his bathtub dimension when he redecorates... 👀
4/2/23, 4:32 PM
“Titanic cock” makes me think of Xav and Golgo’bog standing ass-to-groin the helm of an ocean-liner, Xav going “whee” as he outstretches his arm, impaled and completely carried by the ill-fated (but so cinematic) length of demonic dick behind him…

4/11/23, 10:48 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) That's actually the _exact_ image I was going for! I'm so glad it came through! 😄
4/2/23, 4:25 PM
This is my official vote for a spin off series about that unfortunate-yet-ultimately-fortunate dance troupe.

4/11/23, 10:47 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Hmmm maybe that'll be my story for the next Halloween contest... 🕺🕺🕺🕺🕺
4/1/23, 4:59 AM
I love how everyone is experiencing the changes in a way that demonstrates their personalities and the character tensions. It gives added delight to the (also) rather hot scenes.

4/11/23, 10:33 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Thank you! I'm glad you've been enjoying all the chapters of this story. 😄
4/1/23, 4:56 AM
If it will convince either of them to visit me, I would like to just say that *I*, also, am a fan.

4/11/23, 10:32 PM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) They are easily convincible... It's the 'getting them to *leave*' part that's tricky, afterwards...