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10/19/21, 11:15 PM
Hot, funny, and disturbing. Kinda conflicted about this one, obviously I knew there was something pretty sinister going on with Xander but it turned out to be pretty bad. I hope Allan can save Cody from becoming a zombie, he's such a sweet guy he just doesn't deserve that.
Conversion Enthusiast
10/19/21, 4:43 AM
I'm intrigued by the snake scales! it seems like rejection of the light automatically makes one an enemy of the pharaoh although i also cant tell if he just imagined it. i suppose ill have to wait and see but i liked this chapter! the army grows!
10/18/21, 10:07 PM
I keep coming back to this one. Tanner is a really great antagonist. Definitely a wolf in designer clothing. My favorite part of this chapter is him disappearing from all the Argyles while still taking in and influencing the show. I do have to say that I wasn't a fan of Kent. It's totally my own issues rearing their ugly heads, so take my opinion with a pinch of salt. I, personally, would have rather seen him taken down a peg or two for being a less than ideal father. Overall, though, I'm liking how each chapter gets a little bit more intense, as if Tanner's power is growing. Your descriptions of environment and characters are very well done. And I'm definitely intrigued as to what the other force that visited Blake in the other chapter is up to. (Also, I see what you did with Tanner's last name and it makes me chuckle.)
Anonymous
10/17/21, 5:07 PM
i love this story so much
10/16/21, 10:02 PM
Super excited to see this romantic dom dynamic get spicy, thanks for posting!
10/16/21, 5:26 PM
this is great, keep going please
10/16/21, 3:03 PM
You said I'd like this chapter and, yeah, that was hot as fuck haha. Can't wait to see how Robert fits in (hopefully literally) with the boys. Thanks for posting!
leonardo
10/16/21, 12:20 PM
Great story, an unescapable fate for Robert
Anonymous
10/16/21, 11:24 AM
scorchio!!!
boi98229
10/16/21, 8:15 AM
Wonderful! My favorite focus for mind control stories is the seduction, the inexorable loss of control one step at a time, with the submissive often well aware but unable to effectively save himself. i am happily off to read the next chapter!