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12/13/23, 7:17 AM
Incredibly poignant. You can really feel the depth of Talley's emotions here. It shows how special this/these relationships were to him, and how difficult it was to leave them behind. It almost makes you question the old saying "It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all." Because the sadness you feel from Talley is heartbreaking. Of course, it could all be better if Riki and Mads show up for Talley in the future sometime. The sex scenes are incredibly vivid too, and it makes me want to go read the stories with Talley, Riki, and Mads that just focus on the fun sexy times. Also, as a top who is sometimes submissive, we should normalize Dom bottoms. I hope Talley can have some holesome happy experiences as one in the near future.

12/16/23, 6:32 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I’m glad that the feeling of loss came through in full. My first draft of this story had some hollowness behind it, and I don’t think it would have been nearly as good if time.to.occur hadn’t pointed out how much I still needed to do to achieve a natural, realistic depiction of Talley’s emotional state and experience of loss. And I have to thank you, too, for helping me add even more. Honestly, it would have been so cute and romantic if they _did_ show up right at the end. But I’ve already deceived the readers enough with such a seemingly happy ending that I don’t want to give even more false hope, heh. I do want to bring them around sooner or later, though. Talley needs them; that much is obvious.
Anonymous
12/15/23, 10:26 PM
Please continue this
12/14/23, 5:47 PM
I was really impressed with this writing and the development of the character. A slow, and teasing descent, which leaves open many possibilities. Thank you so much. By the way, if you'd like some ideas, do please ask. But I don't want to interfere with your creative flow.
12/14/23, 1:47 PM
I rely hope there going to be a part 2
12/14/23, 11:03 AM
Enjoy the use of a smell post-workout. Some love that effect and smell. Others quickly jump into the shower. No perspirant while wearing a leather jacket with a jeans crotch containing yesterdays jockstrap is very hot.
12/3/23, 12:43 PM
Very hot, cant wait for the next part

12/14/23, 7:12 AM
@[VenomControl](/user/show/538660) Hope the story does you justice.
12/2/23, 6:01 PM
I have come across the view that the narcissist personality is akin to a form of demonic possession - and you describe this very well indeed. As to the question of liberal v conservative views, perhaps Tucker would espouse any cause if he could manipulate people and have his way? It's all means to an end for him/

12/14/23, 7:11 AM
@[Corinthian38](/user/show/38372) Thank you very much for the complement and for the perspective.
Arpágonu
12/3/23, 2:57 PM
The story is following an interesting path, a descent of sorts to the dark side. Maybe a makeover would be interesting, more in the style of a bad boy, in contrast to the normal Johnny. Maybe a tattoo or piercing, although possibly the best thing is to smoke, after all, Johnny is a pillar of good health and lifestyle habits, and perhaps introducing such a bad habit will be a catharsis for the new master of that body. I look forward to the third part

12/14/23, 1:14 AM
@[Arpágonu](/user/show/2723721) Thanks for the comment. I was originally planning on having that be a later change, but decided to move it up in the story because of your comment and like how it turned out.
Arpágonu
12/13/23, 10:07 PM
That fall to the dark and wild side is super sexy. You have left me wanting to see what he does with the car. He certainly seems like a bad boy now. I imagine a camaro style car would suit him, maybe a motorcycle too. I love your way of writing and that you continue to do it consistently. I can't wait for the next part
12/13/23, 12:54 PM
This story doesn't seem to be going anywhere. what was J's issue with D? why didn't the store owner ask them why they were fighting? kind of a strange thing to gloss over.

12/13/23, 8:01 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Hi musclejunky, thanks for the feedback. I know I have to adjust my shot. I was already thinking of explaining some things in chapter 4. I tried to write to you privately to ask for advice, but I can't find you on the forum.