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11/6/23, 12:18 AM
The love and care that you have for your characters and the world are one of the things I love most about this series. Getting to re-read it with your revisions has me falling just as much in love with it all over again. Adrien's backed into a corner and it all getting too much along with Rhys and Lemon's sympathy for 'Jasper' really ends the chapter on a powerful moment. I really love the juxtaposition between them that Adrien points out. Normally, becoming a pet and all of the joining the household and various fittings and check-ups and what not are an excitement journey towards being a pet for a Coin. But, for Jasper, it's more of a daunting gauntlet of trials to hammer him into a shape to keep him out of jail, in a way. The attitudes of the two sides of the arrangement start so far apart. Adrien seems to pick up where Rhys is coming from, but I'm not sure Rhys does the reverse. There's a 'for his own good' sense to it, and that he'll come around. It is. Jasper could more easily escape Rhys than a prison. But, the longer he waits, will he want to...?
11/5/23, 10:12 PM
HOW you keep getting better and better?
11/5/23, 10:10 PM
The best in the business is back! Such a good chapter. You are so good at this trope! Manipulative bottoms are the best IMO.
11/5/23, 7:07 PM
can't wait for all the following updates! your story is always a go-to when I need to get off. you rule, bro!
11/5/23, 11:05 AM
I love this story, such a fresh idea, and so brilliantly told. The characters are believable, the sex is hot and I’m loving the world building. Can’t wait to read more.

11/5/23, 5:08 PM
@[Jason249](/user/show/10022512) Thank you so much and thanks for reading through such a long segment.
11/5/23, 1:19 PM
I'm really enjoying this story. Like others have said, I really like the two characters and their blossoming relationship. Although they both profess not to be gay, I'm still enjoying what they're doing with each other. Looking forward for more to come!
Anonymous
11/5/23, 10:08 AM
just when i think you can’t get any better you top yourself more than these tops fuck fuck the shit outta theo. this continues to be one the best stories on this site and i look forward to every update. the new characters are exactly what i’ve been waiting for and the set up of these jocks basically competing who can fuck theo the best is such a welcome turn of events. especially loved how teddys mischievous personality basically instigated the sexting towards the end. really hot stuff. completely assumed this story was done but this chapter not only surprised me but exceeded my wildest expectations. cannot wait to see how theo deals with all these competitive hung jocks. always love your stories.
11/5/23, 6:40 AM
Omg, and update - thank you for posting! Top-tier writing as always, keep it up and have a great day!
11/5/23, 3:19 AM
Hot dumb jocks are so sexy. Such a scene. Love the rimming. Too bad the jocks aren't bottoms and the gay guy is a top But yeah so fucking hot!
11/4/23, 8:49 PM
Theo is just living the dream. Hope you come back to this soon.
11/4/23, 7:35 PM
This is a fun series. I like the relationship between the two main characters. They're friendly and working together. The exhibitionist aspect is also very hot, particularly in this chapter. Hunter kind of introducing his roommate to it and finding out he's into it too. Hunter took things to a new level in the end. Post nut too. I bet they got a lot of tips for the blowjob on stream. Where will things go next, I wonder.
11/4/23, 7:19 PM
Nice story, very sweet.
Anonymous
11/4/23, 6:55 PM
Enjoyed the story. Can't wait for the next chapter
11/4/23, 12:36 PM
I love this man, thank you~!
11/4/23, 12:33 PM
Fuuuuuuuuck!
11/4/23, 11:50 AM
Oh wow, a very sweet and romantic story.
11/4/23, 7:02 AM
AMAZING!! 😍😍🤩🤩😛😛😛😛
11/4/23, 5:30 AM
Amazing story. Hope it has a follow up
Oct 31, 2023
Martin
11/3/23, 9:21 PM
So beautiful... That scene reminded me of one of the most intense and most beautiful scenes in the VN "Straight?!". Do you know it?
Curious
11/3/23, 9:04 AM
Came for the smut - stayed for the worldbuilding. This is some next-level sci-fi thriller that I didn't know I needed. Can't wait for the next chapter!

11/3/23, 6:49 PM
@Curious Thank you so much. That's a great way of describing it now that you've pulled out that freezing. Queer Sci-Fi thriller. Yeah I like that.
11/3/23, 6:37 PM
And now for raving fanboi-ing: Jesus Christ, I loved this. I've loved all of it from the start. But twisting this so that Sean is hoisted on his own petard, in a way that may ultimately be beneficial to him, with a teaser of a Big Bad elseworld, well. This is erotica in an epic sci-fi story and it's exactly what I've always wanted without quite knowing it. God. I love it so much.
11/3/23, 1:31 PM
Very cute story!
Anonymous
11/2/23, 9:05 PM
Goodness! You get corporate himbo down to a “T”! I’ll be selfish and hope we get to see a self aware muscle freak in a future installment (e.g. someone who’s disgusted yet turned on by the changes they signed up for)

11/2/23, 9:08 PM
@Anonymous Oh... You will probably like Remanufactured. I personally feel that my entire niche is a more realistic take on the typically extreme fantasies that you see on this site. But I think you're going to enjoy what that story does.

Anonymous
11/2/23, 9:20 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Oh! Your realistic take is very much noticed. The previous chapter is layered in it in a way that left me on the edge of my seat. That paired with what a real sales pitch would look like in the first chapter. Really great stuff! Guess I’m just a sucker for “be careful what you wish for” tales

11/2/23, 9:52 PM
@Anonymous Oh that's an awesome comment about the previous chapter. Honestly that would have been a great comment to leave me because I really wasn't sure what people thought of that part. I kind of assumed it was just too weird for everybody. It only got about 1/3 of the ratings of the previous chapter. Anyway I agree with you about the careful what you wish for trope! In this particular case, I see the cost of Patrick's wish kind of being canceled out because Sean tried to take more power than he was given. The whole thing rebounds, and Patrick ends up getting off without paying a heavy price for his wish, but instead Sean pays the price for his wish. Well for both of their wishes really.

Anonymous
11/2/23, 10:38 PM
@[Nocturne13](/user/show/263497) Yup, it’s so hard to gauge people’s reactions. Just know you’ve made at least one reader very happy with your work 🙂. 2nd Chapter was probably pretty dense for most. You do you, but I feel like 4K words per chapter is the sweet spot. Not to mean you should shorten your work, but maybe release it in smaller chucks. For me, I (pleasantly) drowned in Patrick’s mindpalace. The contrast of the peaceful mind as he slowly becomes a monster? So good
11/2/23, 10:01 PM
Wow. This is so much better than I ever expected. Just brilliant. Worth the wait.

11/2/23, 10:02 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) 🥰😍🥳
11/2/23, 4:56 PM
I want more! Thank you:)

11/2/23, 5:30 PM
@[hexleyosx](/user/show/910583) I'm glad you liked it! It was such a long segment I really wanted to split it into two but I kind of promised everybody that sex would happen in part three so you get something huge, just like Sean's dick.
Oct 31, 2023
11/2/23, 12:19 PM
The swimming metaphors are so beautiful here, and the wistfulness of this piece is nearly musical. I dearly loved this. I often have a very hard time reading homophobia these days -- whether it be the casually toxic masculinity of sporty types or ingrained behavior of boys brought up to unthinkingly act that way. I lived that life in central Texas and it was deeply destructive to the psyche. And I think it's destructive in both directions. So the fact that you transcended that with a sort of love-at-first-sight, damn-the-odds love story really blunts that. I don't care if it's realistic or not, it was palliative. Thank you.
11/2/23, 4:31 AM
We need more of that incredibly hot story! A new chapter please!
11/2/23, 2:28 AM
Whoa. I love ur writing . This is brilliantly done
ite
11/2/23, 1:37 AM
woow! this is a hot one!
11/1/23, 12:03 PM
Loved this, but shouldn’t the kinky category be mind control instead?

11/1/23, 4:17 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Can you try hard-refreshing the page, and let me know if that solves the issue? (This story was initially posted as uncategorized, so I updated the site categories for the story shortly after it was posted. I think they should be showing up now...)

11/1/23, 5:17 PM
@[Philip K](/user/show/10022196) Yep. All good. And Romance too! Perfect.