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Anonymous
12/28/19, 11:56 PM
Hope for more soon I've jerked off so much to these stories
Apr 4, 2017
turbo2600
12/20/19, 8:39 PM
Man, what a great story. I wish this would happen to me! Maybe in a way it is... I like how he was traumatized at first with the thinning hair, then accepted it. It's happening to me. I get turned on at the thought of going bald now. i just gotta pack on the pounds and have the fur grow in elsewhere!
Anonymous
12/9/19, 6:51 PM
Story arc looks like Topher is moving in with the Daddies. That's where you can have Topher narrate what's happening to him. It'll be hot, for sure. Blonde, shaved and boyish, while clearly being an adult.
Anonymous
12/9/19, 6:41 PM
Hot story!! Predictable, but hot!!
12/8/19, 11:36 PM
Not sure how it might work, but as bak2jak suggested, hearing a little from Chris's point of view might be really hot. You could use an expression of this thoughts to highlight his confusion, and his mental transition from skater boy to gay houseboy and hypnoslave. Chris is experiencing a change of mental focus from downtrodden teen skater boy to a prized and loved gay submissive whose new focus is worshiping his new Daddies, relying on their guidance, and slavish obedience to their commands and needs. That process, which you have already established is incredibly hot for me. I fantasize about experiencing this myself, so elaborate on the process, including Chris's murky thoughts and feelings, so this story which is already enthralling might get even hotter. Thanks so much. Looking forward to more - in whatever way you see fit to extend the story. ~david
Anonymous
12/8/19, 3:10 AM
great job
Anonymous
12/7/19, 3:48 AM
this was super hot, i cant wait for him to be topped by both of those daddies like a good boy
Anonymous
12/6/19, 5:51 PM
This is so sexy! It got real dramatic there at the end. . . But so sexy! ! !
Ruanraykung@me.com
12/6/19, 3:30 PM
Really hot. I loved to be good boy for those 2 Daddies
12/5/19, 7:42 AM
i am a sucker (literally and figuratively) for man scent, mind control, hypnosis, slow entrancing seductions, Dominance/submission, and alt/emo boy style. So as you might guess, i found your story enthralling, and like Chris i am ready for he next chapter.
Anonymous
12/4/19, 4:03 PM
One of the hottest newest stories hope to see more! Love to see Chris become a loving daddys boy.
Evan
12/3/19, 7:49 AM
i really loved this story. great slow burn and seduction. use of musk and hypnosis elements. Just hot. Great work.
Anonymous
12/3/19, 3:51 AM
LOVED the subtle exchange of control and the name change. my favorite is friendly daddies who ignore their prey. hoping we see a part 2 where Chris's hair is buzzed off :)
Ruanraykung@me.com
12/2/19, 5:32 PM
insanely Hot. I love this story. can't waot for next!!!
Anonymous
12/2/19, 4:58 PM
best damn thing I've read in months. thank you!
firesix
12/2/19, 12:30 PM
Insanely hot - as always. I missed you when you were on hiatus... am so glad you're back. The heat of the skin, scent stuff... good shit. Can't wait for more. Mwah.
Apr 4, 2017
Papa Werebear
12/1/19, 9:30 PM
You're welcome Dave! It's a pleasure to write these types of stories! 🐻 I like turning men into Bears and Werebears. 🐻
Apr 4, 2017
CigarDave
12/1/19, 12:37 PM
This story is fucking amazing. The cigars, the hair growth, the muscle growth. Pushes all of my buttons. Thank you for posting.
Anonymous
11/6/19, 8:46 AM
I love this so much, itd be really interesting to have an immobile charles do to weight gain but that's just a personal thing! I'm curious do you have a liking towards bearish/older men?
Anonymous
10/29/19, 11:18 PM
It's out of left field but very curious too!
Martin
10/24/19, 8:38 AM
Thanx Moby, glad that you like it! I'm currently working on a new story which should get published within the next two weeks. And at some point I plan to revise and continue 'Liberty', too. I really want to get it to a conclusion.
Moby
10/23/19, 6:27 PM
This is a really good story man! If this is just community service, I wonder what other people who commit crimes are turned into. I hope you keep writing, cuase this and your other series, Liberty are amazing!
Martin
9/24/19, 9:06 AM
Thank you.... While rereading and wanking to my own story (how weird is that?!) I just felt that the passage about Martin using the Colin-drone needed to be a bit of more spicy, so I edited that part, made it a bit longer and much more kinky. I hope you enjoy it!
Anonymous
9/24/19, 7:34 AM
Beautiful! A great story with rubberization, drones, great sex AND a bit of romance for those of us who are softies at heart.
Martin
9/23/19, 9:09 AM
Thanks. Knowing that people are turned on by my wicked fantasies is always making my dick twitch. Please don't stop! And feel free to add your own chapter or just give me ideas of things you'd like to read about in this universe and/or about the characters. If there's anything I like, I might come up with a nice follow up myself.
Anonymous
9/23/19, 7:34 AM
Wow! Excellent quality writing! Enjoyed this very very much. Wish I could be upgraded into a sentient rubber muscle drone complete with a functioning rubber cock!
LongtimeFan
9/23/19, 5:21 AM
What a fascinating story! It's a great exploration of this world and the notions of masculinity--how ridiculous that even in a society where men become hyper-muscled drones, homosexuality is still "wrong." And I can't resist a story about love. Those are the best stories. :) Thanks for a great read!
Lusty Stallion
8/24/19, 9:11 PM
Perfect
8/24/19, 5:05 AM
Great story! How about an insecure guy becoming a confident muscle man and a gay basher becoming a devoted twink boi for his former victim?
Lusty Stallion
8/23/19, 9:03 PM
Thanks guys. I'll keep the muscular power bottom in mind. you'll have already seen a bit of that so far in the series, but more will be fun to write. Your comments make this worth