Recent Comments

1/28/24, 2:08 AM
Fun read. I had this bizarre plot twist idea running through my head half way through that the end of the story would be a cut away scene to the dad spying on the two boys and laughing at his experiment of "what would happen if my sons forgot they were brothers and one of them forgot he was my son?" Question. All. Reality. lol
1/27/24, 7:02 PM
Found it really hot. Can't wait to see what happens with the dad.
1/27/24, 3:40 PM
Man that’s so hot. I love them helplessly watching the other resist and eventually give in. I want to see them become fully enslaved after resisting with all their might. Well done!
1/27/24, 1:49 PM
Really hot. Why do I feel like using the X-1207 was the dad's suggestion in the first place lol, they've already been drugged before this story started
1/27/24, 11:16 AM
Love reading ur stories edging myself picturing ur toy
1/27/24, 6:40 AM
I’m hoping this ends with the dad submissive, but will have to wait and see. First story of the new challenge and it’s already amazing.
1/27/24, 5:53 AM
If this doesn't end with both boys submissive to daddy James Keller... Hard to imagine.
1/27/24, 3:41 AM
Oh my oh my oh my! Fans head. Sooo sexy. So hot. Wow. Nerdy dom top and subby jock bottom. Loved it and the rimming. So good! Such a hot set up. Also the idea of the son dominating his father is hot too. I hope that stays true. Such a sexy story!
1/27/24, 3:11 AM
Really enjoyed glad its to be continued
1/26/24, 9:27 PM
I think my brain just melted.

1/26/24, 10:33 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) That's the goal ;) I do have more chapters planned but those are going to have to wait until I have more time, so I hope you enjoyed what little I've written.

1/27/24, 12:31 AM
@[kshinagawahypnosis](/user/show/1196143) Enjoy is too mild a word. Unfortunately my brain is still a little gooey so it will have to do. Hope you are able to find the time. I’ll just go sit in my closet and wait. 😵‍💫
1/26/24, 6:36 PM
So, so hot. Thank you for writing this.
1/26/24, 3:03 PM
Great story I love it
R P
1/26/24, 11:24 AM
They’re so cute together ❤️
abc
1/26/24, 9:01 AM
This was great, so excited to read the next instalment!
Martin
1/25/24, 11:07 PM
Fuck guys. Now I just read this myself. This is one of my new favorite stories. Simply amazing. Such a tame story has such a fucking mind-blowing finale. Too bad you guys have to wait a couple of days longer to be able to read this. No, I'm not mean at all ... Hehehe.

1/26/24, 1:10 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thanks Martin! And I did do everything I could to hint to you guys where this was going. Is it a spoiler if it’s the story and chapter titles? ;)
Martin
1/25/24, 10:23 PM
To enclose the tale of J's journey into those hot descriptions how it's ended up being your perfect toy is really great. Please continue!

1/25/24, 10:39 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! And don't worry, there are a few more stories down the line! I hope you enjoy those too :)
Martin
1/25/24, 10:13 PM
What an amazing start! I love how you switch to "it" at the end... To be your toy for just once...

1/25/24, 10:38 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Ah well, you'll see it more throughout the series! When I'm talking about J, I use he/him. When about the toy, I use it.
Martin
1/25/24, 10:18 PM
Love it! Such a good toy. I envy it!
1/25/24, 6:15 PM
This is a great concept, looking forward to the next entry!
1/25/24, 4:47 PM
I love your experiences u sound dominant would you be able to hypnotize a guy online very submissive but strong willed don't believe I can be put under tried with spirals and hour long recording listening to them going to bed
1/25/24, 11:30 AM
This is that type of story where before you are fully satisfied, it ends, leaving you with a semi-hard and aching eyes for more of it with your mind cursing : Why was it so short?!

1/25/24, 2:43 PM
@[HypnoFreak](/user/show/10043513) Thanks! But don't worry, there are more chapters, so you don't have to torture yourself staying just semi-hard
Anonymous
1/25/24, 2:59 AM
I love how you’re detailing Monty’s inner idlings and his slowly increasing want to covet his friend. Also, I am enjoying the resilience Justin has, compared to your other JPS-afflicted characters. Don’t get me wrong, I love the slutty ones who cave the instant they see big cock, but the ones with a bit more self control are a nice change of pace. It’s also very satisfying to see them crumble eventually lol
1/25/24, 1:07 AM
Glad you continued writing this series! Have been looking forward for more chapters.
1/24/24, 9:11 PM
Cute simple Idea but it works.
1/24/24, 7:20 PM
I would love to be hypnotized by you and be ur mindless toy
1/24/24, 7:17 PM
Great story. Can't wait to read the rest.
1/24/24, 6:20 PM
Loved it. Please continue.
1/24/24, 1:43 PM
Ugh, I fucking love a skullfuck. But I’m also excited to see the pathos you’re clearly(?) building up. Monty may not be able to see it, but it comes through clear in the diegesis. Looking forward to more!
1/24/24, 1:23 PM
This story is too hot and perfect 🔥
1/24/24, 1:21 PM
Oh my fucking god I love this. A story from the top POV, but the bottom is an expert with JPS? It makes the world feel so lived in to see someone who already knows what he’s doing, knows how to deal with his symptoms, literally swipes up some lube from his ass to deal with his buddy’s dick… good shit.