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Martin
2/19/24, 9:19 PM
Very direct, right to the point, but doubtlessly hot as hell. But if it's really properly assigned to GaySpiral (mind control) is something future chapters have to proof. Are you sure that was correct?
dmc
2/16/24, 9:49 PM
Awesome story! I hope it continues..
Elm
2/15/24, 3:08 PM
So hot!!!😍
2/15/24, 6:42 AM
really good build up and development. Equally strong capture of the audience and hold making you want to read more. Not at all slow in fact could have been longer once they got back to the cabin (greedy ready lol) with what happened the next morning. Jackson Stock is a valid hypnotist with actual skill, so it is good to "hear" it come across in his written work. He does other niche specific headings so I'd love to read those headline stories. Alpha Findom, Dom/sissy, role reversal, Alpha brothers and a family sissy brother. Am I greedy to ask for ideas because he can do it? No, I don't think so, because he is skilled when very few are.....
Anonymous
2/14/24, 1:52 PM
Worth the wait and I'm glad there is still a to be continued on this story
2/14/24, 4:59 AM
I love your stories where there are "special" clothes.
2/14/24, 3:07 AM
Holy wow! Loved this so much, too bad its over haha, would have loved to read more.
Anonymous
2/13/24, 9:59 PM
Loving this series! Love how infatuated Jon is now at this point, can’t wait to see everyone else joining the Harem so Theo can keep his boys happy and do his best to drain all those balls! Love seeing all the new ways for the jocks to accidentally end up in Theos holes
2/13/24, 8:56 PM
I’m strapped in and ready for Victor’s tale. Damn this is hot.
2/13/24, 7:45 PM
Damn. Hot monkey sex indeed. You almost made me blow a load reading this chapter.
2/13/24, 5:07 PM
Fuck me that’s hot. Got my juices flowing. More more
2/13/24, 10:58 AM
Very hot story
2/13/24, 9:26 AM
Can't wait to see how they turn daddy into a cock hungry sub bottom
2/13/24, 4:32 AM
Natasha is insufferable. Can he ditched her already. Wait nevermind, i think i like this slowburn tension between him and Thomas. I mean we could have less of her and more Thomas. Thats better

2/13/24, 8:56 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) She won’t be in this series that much. Try to bear it a little. Slow burn… well tell me in a few chapters 😏
2/13/24, 5:45 AM
This story is so hot, I love how it's been progressing. The layers of mindfucking all the characters go through as they inadvertently (or intentionally) mindfuck themselves and each other are really good. They pretty much eliminate all sense of absolute morality, since all the characters are bending their own brains nearly as much as everyone else's. This series is definitely one for the "regular rereads" list and it's clearly still building up steam.
2/13/24, 5:44 AM
This story keeps getting hotter and hotter. Looking forward to what happens next…and to more about the NEWI.
2/13/24, 3:21 AM
Great idea. Hope you continue. Really liked the two POVs.
2/12/24, 8:39 PM
Help…….need………more……
2/11/24, 10:23 PM
Thank you very much for this story and this idea.I hope new chapters will be published more often) I like this story with a more (realistic plot) and where the main character is not a stupid and naive blockhead and knows how to act in various cases and use everything to his advantage. And I also like the fact that he does not use people for selfish purposes, treating them like animals and does not rape.This story is kind of like a breath of fresh air.+ I like unexpected turns. I think the Dock is in the trail.the head is in for an unpleasant surprise and he will regret contacting Tony)

Anonymous
2/12/24, 6:07 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you! I keep trying to write them following my plot but they've been acting out of script since the breakfast scene. Expect the update sooner :)
2/12/24, 3:07 PM
Super hot! But … the NEWI. So Daddy Keller has already used it on his son. What other commands have been programmed into him? I wonder …
2/11/24, 9:54 PM
You are a MASTER! WELL DONE

CasualWanderer82
2/12/24, 11:39 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I appreciate the sweet words! 🙏
2/12/24, 8:28 AM
So so hot, can't wait to read the rest. And to see who this author is so I can read everything else they‘ve written ha
2/12/24, 4:07 AM
So freaking hot!
2/10/24, 1:25 AM
Another fabulous story, like always Soren. You can simultaneously entertain, engage, and make me incredibly horny all at the same time, which is quite the feat. Your worldbuilding and your characters only become more fleshed out and lived-in with each installment. Brilliant work! Oh, and by the way... > "Yeah. THOT won’t say no to another cumdump. Just be prepared to get fucked, like, all the time. Uh, and you’re gonna have to room hop for a while. But hell, if you like it, you can ditch the flaggers and stay with us as a full-fledged frat bottom. A THOT baby like you oughtta carry our THOT babies.” That sentence made me so much more bricked up than it should have...

2/12/24, 3:34 AM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) I was especially excited to flesh out Marco in this chapter! It's been so long since we've seen him and I hope I did justice to his dominance from the prelude. And, lines like that? Those are the kind of lines I build this world for, just that pristine vibe of *ultra casual sex*. If I can write a line like that and it hits people the way it hit you, I'm accomplishing my purpose with Consummation.
2/11/24, 6:57 PM
I realized there were some unintentional errors. I hope I have this corrected.
2/11/24, 4:36 PM
I am IN! This story is so compelling. I appreciate the intimacy of course... but the passion is just incredible... AND THANK YOU for all the very personal elements that are provided... like the smells, the queef, the fingering...oh gosh... its perfect.

CasualWanderer82
2/11/24, 5:45 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Writing about gay sex MUST include all that, and then some! I'm happy you're taking the time to discover my work.
2/11/24, 2:15 PM
I love these men! Well written and, as always, I appreciate your consideration of the smells of the room, of David's hair, of their privates... it matters for a full "entry" into the experience. Its masterful. You are such a great writer.

CasualWanderer82
2/11/24, 5:44 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I appreciate the compliment. It means a lot!
2/11/24, 3:06 PM
You're a pro at writing sex scenes. Very tangible and vivid.
Jonanator
2/11/24, 1:45 AM
Hot.

CasualWanderer82
2/11/24, 1:33 PM
@Jonanator Thank you!