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11/7/21, 3:39 PM
That was a great turnaround, and you paced it really well. I felt very comfortable with the apparent(?) straight-to-gay, rather than existential angst, so that’s always a plus for me. And it was hot! (All it needs is cum inflation. Ahem, ahem.)

Martin
11/7/21, 4:12 PM
@Soren Fitz Glad you liked it! Let's see how much cum an incubus can produce ;)
11/6/21, 8:03 PM
Wonderful descriptions of growth. Glad karma finally got around to someone.

11/7/21, 1:35 AM
@Cutlerfan Oh karma was just waiting for Whit to just push it too far. Trust me, I haven't changed ANYTHING in this story due to comments, though I do appreciate them SO very much. The story is coming together as I had envisioned from the start. I think you'll like where it's going to end. Karma and the amulet ain't done with anyone yet.

11/7/21, 3:02 PM
@Uncle Arctos Awesome! [Yeah I was a kid in the 80s, lol]

11/7/21, 3:49 PM
@Cutlerfan so was I! Awesome dates me. 🐻😁
11/7/21, 8:32 AM
Today I learned the word mouthcock. I enjoy a nice, bizarre story and I do love a happy ending. I did find Leandro's dialogue a little off-putting. I had to keep stopping to work out what he was saying, but the payoff... "Glone glundred per cent" is a +1 in my book. Very happy I read this.
11/5/21, 10:27 AM
Glad to see Jimmy become an active character again! Whit's ongoing transformations have been and are incredible.

11/7/21, 1:32 AM
@amul Jimmy was never out of the picture, but sometimes you have to let other actors have center stage for awhile... so they can get enough rope with which to hang themselves.
11/5/21, 2:41 AM
yup. loved this. more immobile stories! I'll be adding some myself but damn i wanna see more from you too haha : tight stories

11/7/21, 1:31 AM
@Annon I thought Whit deserved to discover what greed gets you the hard way.
Jonanator
11/6/21, 6:56 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more. great story.

11/6/21, 7:53 PM
@Jonanator Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
11/6/21, 5:04 PM
Thanks for the feedback peeps. I made more edits to keep it in third person and hope I fixed the issues.
11/6/21, 1:51 PM
I wanted to like this but as Razz TFs pointed out above, the change of perspective (1st, 2nd and 3rd person) was really distracting and made it quite hard to get into the flow. It’s a shame because it was otherwise a great premise.

11/6/21, 4:45 PM
@Ruffcub let me see if I can make some more edits. Sometimes things get missed in the editing process. Thanks for pointing it out.
11/4/21, 9:53 PM
I agree with Martin it would be hot for him to be accidentally turned into an Incubus as well.

Martin
11/6/21, 10:01 AM
@master1 Hold it... I reserve that idea for myself! I think I'm going to write a story with that theme in December :)
11/6/21, 3:10 AM
This was so good that I want to call the seduction "believable" except it's a literal demonic creature using literal seduction magic. Very hot, flirty, and fun to read. Thanks for posting!