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11/15/21, 10:12 PM
Two chapters in and I am totally hooked on this story. Martin, I don't know how you do it. Stories like this AND run the site. Kudos sir.

Martin
11/16/21, 3:03 AM
@Beaner Thank you so much! It's what I like to do and nothing is more rewarding than seeing that people are getting something out of what I'm doing! 😘
11/15/21, 2:50 PM
The fun of discovery here is lovely! I liked how you described his new experiences as an incubus, and how he began to adjust to it out of need and hunger. Life as a sex fiend will certainly be interesting, with its differing daily demands from being a human!

Martin
11/16/21, 3:01 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you so much Soren! I think this is a criminally underexplored viewpoint, with most stories putting their focus on the incubus's victims only... never even seeing the other side of the coin! I have so many ideas which want to come out, I just can't type fast enough and I struggle to find the time. But I'm really happy that you and so many others like to share this fantasy with me 😊
11/15/21, 2:42 PM
This was such a fun ride!!! I loved the world-building; I loved the banter and how you built up their relationship; I loved Will, just, because he’s Will, lol, this is my first glimpse of him (unless he was the guy when Derek gets turned into a cocksleeve); I loved the subtle homoeroticism everywhere which really kept the tempo up. Also, the little touches are so interesting! Do you have a background in French? You seem to know how much they care about the accent. And I adore the physics—dimensional travel limited by the speed of light, the idea that extra dimensional art has cool symmetries we can’t see… And of course, how Derek analysed his own feelings and understood why Razz wasn’t manipulating him. This is so cute and feels like a really truly *gay* romance.

11/15/21, 7:17 PM
@Soren Fitz ahhh thank you! yes, Will did have a "cameo" in the Cocksleeve story. i do have a degree in french and studied abroad in paris. i don't get to use those skills IRL too often so, oops, it's leaking into my writing! and thanks for nerding out with me on the physics. i actually have all sorts of headcanons for how razz's magic works in this universe. im trying to find little windows in the stories to trickle those details in.
11/15/21, 12:42 PM
have been waiting for this to be released and it didn't disappoint. great story so far and keen to see where you go from here with it. nice mix between plot and sex. curious if tyler gets a mention again now he is free from his poorly worded curse.

11/15/21, 3:55 PM
Thanks! I have notes on Tyler's fate, but they aren't important to the main plot. I'll see if there's a logical place to slip a mention of Tyler in future chapters. @Ganymedes
11/15/21, 6:12 AM
bro?

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
BRO. @Tkhon
11/15/21, 5:51 AM
i literally came 3 times reading this story. ... I do hope theres a happy ending that ends with them as a throuple! i feel bad digging into the specifics because others will do a much better job than me, but i want to say its a fun balance of fun, magic, plot and fun. and while your characters might get bossy or whatever its always for the better and no one seems cruel. though i hope crop tops come back!

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
Thanks! No spoilers, but there's a happy ending planned for all three characters. I'm glad the balance of different elements worked! @Thexshxboi
11/15/21, 1:45 AM
So hot. I love the backstory added via Chad learning about being an incubus via a website. Chad figuring out his powers and what he can do with them in the moment was great, too. I'm looking forward to more of his adventures and transformations into various hot men.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@Proteus Yeah, I tried to put myself into his shoes and went from there. Reading instructions from a site (which he's only scanning, as most people would) was another way to explain the boring details... while leaving enough room for him to learn by doing and being surprised every now and then, too. I really love the idea to see an unsuspecting, somewhat clumsy guy being thrown into this situation...
Oct 30, 2021
Anonymous
11/15/21, 12:49 AM
this was so well written. i really enjoyed it

11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@ Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
11/14/21, 3:19 PM
This is great! loving the story

Martin
11/15/21, 6:34 AM
@Razz TFs That's great to hear, nothing is more rewarding than knowing that there are people who enjoy my stories. I would love if some of you were to lose some of their protein while reading it... :D
11/14/21, 12:58 PM
really enjoying this so far. looking forward to seeing where you go with this

Martin
11/15/21, 6:32 AM
@KnightStone Me too :) I'm glad that you like it!
Willie Cici
11/15/21, 4:52 AM
Great story, Martin! I can't wait to see where this goes. You can do a lot with an incubus.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:31 AM
@Willie Cici Yes, that scenario has a lot of potential for all kinds of hot events and scenes, I hope I can make something worthwhile out of it. I hope you like the second chapter I've published yesterday. Currently I'm on the third chapter, which starts quite different from what you'd expect (I hope). And this praise coming from you, Willie, means a lot to me!
11/15/21, 3:42 AM
Amazing chapter. Well worth the wait and the length didn't bother me (giggity). I like your Chekov's gun finally getting fired. Tyler is an interesting character. Sure, he was an asshole, but you made him relatable with his wanting to see his parents and being unable to. And honestly, the sex between him and Sam was pretty hot, especially after Sam made his questionable edit. Sam is always getting in his own way with his edits, although his last one did get him closer to learning more about the black suits. Speaking of, the black suits are intriguing. It looks like the old dude is the leader of them. And maybe that old man and the shawl brigade are enemies? I don't know where that is going to go, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Most especially, I like that Marc has become the savior of Sam and Gabe. Marc having the willpower to overcome the influence of Tyler's texts was brilliant, and I'm glad that Sam and Gabe brought him into the editing the textbook club. And really, I just like how wholesome Marc is. He's adorable, and I just want to cuddle him like a big ol' teddy bear. Great work. I'm excited to read more when you have time to continue. By all means, take your time. Your writing is worth the wait.

11/15/21, 4:25 AM
Thank you! I'm glad the slow-burn plot stuff is coming through! No spoilers, but you're definitely on to something... More soon! I have a very rough draft of the next chapter. Maybe early next month? @Proteus
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:18 AM
Kind of in love with how slutty Sam is becoming

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
This story has changed a lot since the first idea, but Sam being an (ethical) slut for well-hung gay guys has always been a key feature! @
11/15/21, 3:17 AM
I LOVE this so fucking much

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
Thanks! @revenge88fics
Anonymous
11/15/21, 2:02 AM
Incredibly wholesome ending! 10/10!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
I never expected to be writing smut, much less smut with wholesome endings! @
11/15/21, 12:18 AM
I was worried for a bit there but the ending was great!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
Oh thanks! Nutiper suggested "happy ending" as a tag to let readers know that Tyler doesn't win here. @Cutlerfan
11/14/21, 11:46 PM
It was so worth the wait to finally see Sam getting his brains fucked out... the entire chapter was super hot, and I loved how long it was! I also loved the little bit about Milo being Marc's dad, that was such a sexy and funny easter egg! Now that Sam already had Tyler's magic dick, I can't wait to see when he will finally hop on Marc's magic dick too. I have a feeling that Marc's magic and talent for fucking might be even better than Tyler's. Cheers man, can't wait for more

11/15/21, 4:19 AM
Thanks! I'm glad the extra time spent on this chapter was worthwhile. Gabe's the main star of the next chapter, but Marc is still around to tease Sam. @Elmara
Anonymous
11/14/21, 8:10 PM
This was such a fun and wild new installment. Lowkey disappointed that we didn't get to see Gabe bottom. Overall, Gabe's lucked out a lot more than Sam when it comes to unintended side-effects or misfires of the edits. I kinda want him to get some sort of comeuppance the way Sam has lol. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for all the characters!

11/15/21, 4:17 AM
Thanks! Both guys have had unexpected ripples from edits, we just see more from Sam. And Sam's pretty pleased with most of the side-effects so far, or he'd find ways to change them. @
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
Another excellent chapter! The deftness of the writing in the last scene really impresses me. Sam and Gabe chilling for once in bathrobes and Sam acknowledging Marc as his friend was really sweet. And well-paced after all of the hot sex earlier in the chapter. And I loved that Tyler, mentioned in passing in one of the first few chapters, came back into the story. He was such a lazy, hot d-bag. And I loved that Marc had to help Sam and Gabe out in order to resist the spell of Tyler’s dick.

11/15/21, 4:16 AM
Thanks! Credit where credit is due -- Nutiper wrote a lot of the last scene. @MonsterMash62
Anonymous
11/14/21, 2:30 PM
woohoo! so hyped to get to continue this! youve made something great here man!

11/15/21, 4:09 AM
Thanks! Couldn't have done it without help from editors and beta readers! @
11/14/21, 10:50 AM
Definitely worth the wait!

11/15/21, 4:08 AM
Oh, thanks! We definitely put a lot of work into it! Hopefully the next chapter will come sooner. @italianstalian1987
11/14/21, 11:11 PM
I already told you I reread this earlier, but I just had to leave a comment to express how much I loved your description of Seeders and what the "pregnancy" terms mean in this world. You manage to pack in so much fun along with intriguing world-building!

11/14/21, 11:50 PM
I’m really happy about this! I’ve worked hard in this world for a long time and I’m glad it shows—and that it’s hot, too. I’m glad I’m keeping it fun! @Razz TFs
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
As always, your transformations are so clever and fun! You didn't drag it out or make it overly repetitive; their dynamic really helped keep it fresh the whole time. And I enjoyed the times that you waxed romantic on their relationship dynamic; it really upped the romance factor of the story. This was wonderful!

11/14/21, 11:14 PM
@Soren Fitz you're too sweet!! and i can't help but fawn over their relationship. i'm super excited to post the "conclusion" of this little episode at the end of the month
11/12/21, 12:26 PM
that was super hot Martin! love the straight boy control. hopefully our protagonist learns to take advantage ;)

Martin
11/13/21, 8:51 AM
@Mrdick He certainly does, but he has a lot to learn. The second chapter is close to be finished.
11/13/21, 1:40 AM
The timing of that ending is very suspect! The natural development is that dad will fuck him, but I think there's another twist coming.
11/12/21, 7:26 PM
this was soooo sweet

11/12/21, 8:36 PM
@Razz TFs Awww thank you!
11/12/21, 4:17 AM
Beautiful.

11/12/21, 5:34 PM
@Beaner Thank you!
11/8/21, 7:11 AM
You know it's a good story when you check for the next chapter multiple times a day :) (not trying to sound impatient, just a compliment)

11/8/21, 9:21 AM
@italianstalian1987 same

11/8/21, 11:20 PM
Thanks! It's written, just needs another round of editing. @italianstalian1987

11/9/21, 4:04 AM
@bluesuedewho Nutiper and MonsterMash told me to tell you that no edits need to be made :)

11/12/21, 4:14 AM
@bluesuedewho if anything, Sam and Gabe have only shown us how important it is to edit before you publish something :) and so sorry to hear real life has been rough, but hope things are getting better!
11/11/21, 9:44 PM
Ooooh, nice! I specially loved how you successfully wrote against our expectations. The path you took was refreshing without compromising the coherence between the characters' goals and their actions. I was awed by Tanner's change of attitude once Devon left the house. That guy sure gets intense when his pleasure is at stake! He seems adamant to not let anyone ruin his fun time among mere mortals. I also really liked how his gift to Devon and his father became a trap, both figuratively and literally. I only wish Devon had been more reluctant to get naked and to get a massage. It only seems fair given he's in front of his father who until a mere few hours was a complete wreck. I understand he might have been affected by Tanner's suggestion of showing off his hot body at the lockers, but not having any reference to that on the massage table scene made me feel confused. Yet, Tanner talking through the ear pods while the most perfect anilingus was being performed made any possible confusion dissipate from my brains. What a hot sex scene! Seriously, great chapter. I'm super happy every time I see an update from this series.
11/7/21, 4:09 AM
might not have updated yet as there are still out of place perspective changes. otherwise great story

11/11/21, 4:20 AM
@Human Dragon Fruit I did some more work on it. Thank you and everyone for the feedback.