Recent Comments

11/14/21, 11:11 PM
I already told you I reread this earlier, but I just had to leave a comment to express how much I loved your description of Seeders and what the "pregnancy" terms mean in this world. You manage to pack in so much fun along with intriguing world-building!

11/14/21, 11:50 PM
I’m really happy about this! I’ve worked hard in this world for a long time and I’m glad it shows—and that it’s hot, too. I’m glad I’m keeping it fun! @Razz TFs
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
As always, your transformations are so clever and fun! You didn't drag it out or make it overly repetitive; their dynamic really helped keep it fresh the whole time. And I enjoyed the times that you waxed romantic on their relationship dynamic; it really upped the romance factor of the story. This was wonderful!

11/14/21, 11:14 PM
@Soren Fitz you're too sweet!! and i can't help but fawn over their relationship. i'm super excited to post the "conclusion" of this little episode at the end of the month
11/12/21, 12:26 PM
that was super hot Martin! love the straight boy control. hopefully our protagonist learns to take advantage ;)

Martin
11/13/21, 8:51 AM
@Mrdick He certainly does, but he has a lot to learn. The second chapter is close to be finished.
11/13/21, 1:40 AM
The timing of that ending is very suspect! The natural development is that dad will fuck him, but I think there's another twist coming.
11/12/21, 7:26 PM
this was soooo sweet

11/12/21, 8:36 PM
@Razz TFs Awww thank you!
11/12/21, 4:17 AM
Beautiful.

11/12/21, 5:34 PM
@Beaner Thank you!
11/8/21, 7:11 AM
You know it's a good story when you check for the next chapter multiple times a day :) (not trying to sound impatient, just a compliment)

11/8/21, 9:21 AM
@italianstalian1987 same

11/8/21, 11:20 PM
Thanks! It's written, just needs another round of editing. @italianstalian1987

11/9/21, 4:04 AM
@bluesuedewho Nutiper and MonsterMash told me to tell you that no edits need to be made :)

11/12/21, 4:14 AM
@bluesuedewho if anything, Sam and Gabe have only shown us how important it is to edit before you publish something :) and so sorry to hear real life has been rough, but hope things are getting better!
11/11/21, 9:44 PM
Ooooh, nice! I specially loved how you successfully wrote against our expectations. The path you took was refreshing without compromising the coherence between the characters' goals and their actions. I was awed by Tanner's change of attitude once Devon left the house. That guy sure gets intense when his pleasure is at stake! He seems adamant to not let anyone ruin his fun time among mere mortals. I also really liked how his gift to Devon and his father became a trap, both figuratively and literally. I only wish Devon had been more reluctant to get naked and to get a massage. It only seems fair given he's in front of his father who until a mere few hours was a complete wreck. I understand he might have been affected by Tanner's suggestion of showing off his hot body at the lockers, but not having any reference to that on the massage table scene made me feel confused. Yet, Tanner talking through the ear pods while the most perfect anilingus was being performed made any possible confusion dissipate from my brains. What a hot sex scene! Seriously, great chapter. I'm super happy every time I see an update from this series.
11/7/21, 4:09 AM
might not have updated yet as there are still out of place perspective changes. otherwise great story

11/11/21, 4:20 AM
@Human Dragon Fruit I did some more work on it. Thank you and everyone for the feedback.
Martin
11/10/21, 11:06 PM
This has been a very lovely experience. Cute and really well written. A bit long for my usual taste, but I'm really looking forward to the second chapter!

11/10/21, 11:39 PM
I really appreciate that! Thanks for trying it even despite the length, haha. I’m not sure I could have divided it any further without having no-sex chapters, but hopefully people will still read it! (And thanks for advertising mine and Diego Blue’s Cupid exclusives on Spiral!) I hope you enjoy chapter 2. Chapter 3 should come out in a week or two! @Martin