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Anonymous
11/23/21, 11:35 PM
i love this series so much!
11/21/21, 5:48 AM
This was a hot story I'd love to see another chapter

11/23/21, 12:39 PM
@ThatGayGuy Thanks for the feedback! Not sure what another chapter would look like other then these two moving out and a new "couple" moving into the house to be changed.
11/23/21, 8:46 AM
I love this story, I love the stories where a small young person dominates a muscular man, keep it up
11/22/21, 8:35 AM
Oh man, love to see a responsible use of mind control to help a homophobe skip a couple years in therapy! This was really hot and I'm loving the concept more with each revelation!

Martin
11/23/21, 4:23 AM
@Dace Thank you, Dace. If I'd be an actual incubus in real life, I'd also go around to fix all those closet cases which make our lives (and their own) so difficult...
11/21/21, 5:46 PM
Cum inflation 😍 I really loved how even though the roleplay was deliberately imperfect, the hotness still seriously shined through. It feels very much like real life (except there’s a hot incubus who can fulfil all your sexual fantasies…) Although I bet Chad’s going to get better and better at the roleplay thing as time goes on, and feel less cheesy and more into it. This incubus has places to go!

Martin
11/23/21, 4:20 AM
@Soren Fitz Chad has still a lot to learn about his new demonic self and that playing a role is not everything :)
11/22/21, 2:30 AM
you should make it so he always has to sit in a guy's lap whenever he sits down. like, he can't use chairs

11/22/21, 2:11 PM
@MrSirTurtle Thanks! I really appreciate any and all ideas I'm at a bit of a loss.
11/21/21, 10:24 PM
I'm really glad to see this return. Can't wait for more :)

11/22/21, 2:56 AM
@Hargoni I wish I had more time and energy to write! I'm likely to do Caron next, then I *hope* to have a two or three chapter arc from Kean's perspective.
11/21/21, 2:05 PM
Awww, that was so cute! Loved it! Glad to see you returning to this story, and I love Emrys's writing!

11/22/21, 2:56 AM
@BobbyBlobfish I'm glad you like the writing style! I wanted to make the perspectives of each if the werewolves very distinct as more and more about their culture and personalities is revealed. I'm glad that Emrys resonates well with you guys! He was a lot of fun to write as a perspective character!
11/18/21, 5:42 PM
This is great! I had memories of the original reading some parts, the characters are all interesting and the build-up is unpecable! Could you please add the name of the POV characters? They were time I had no idea who was thinking what before several paragraphs. Was a bit confusing.

11/18/21, 8:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish agreed

11/18/21, 10:57 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Yeah, this chapter has been done for a while. I actually forgot I hadn't put it up here, and gave myself a small heart attack when I came to see how it was doing and couldn't find it. I was afraid someone was going to say that. I was trying to have the last line before the POV switch direct the reader to who was going to be next instead of breaking the pace of the story with "(Character) POV"s everywhere. Were their specific transitions that caused confusion, or did the idea just not work at all?

11/20/21, 9:14 PM
@BobbyBlobfish @darkblade2814 I made an edit to hopefully clear up the POV switches. I'd be grateful if you guys could go through this chapter again to see if the transitions are better now.

11/21/21, 2:09 PM
@Johntheedoe Sorry I took so long to answer. For some, it was easy to figure out who it was, but for exemple, the first switch was about the football team. Without precising who amongst the football team we were following. The fact that there is such a huge cast mean it's really easy to lose track of who's who and where. Thanks for the small edits! Really helps to no end. =)
11/21/21, 4:36 AM
Very excited to see the next installment of this! Well done, man!

11/21/21, 9:31 AM
@Dace Thanks!