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2/28/24, 12:56 PM
Great story bro
2/28/24, 11:37 AM
One of the best stories I 've ever read.
2/27/24, 6:32 PM
So hot. Those mindfuckery is so hot.
2/27/24, 12:45 PM
God this story is pure perfection. I'd love a spin-off about Jiang working through the laws, lobbying politicians and political groups, and then being successful at changing laws and spreading Tanner's religion across the US. It would be so epic!!
2/27/24, 4:44 AM
Your story’s push all the right buttons for me they’re absolutely perfect. I’d love to see more or even a part 2
2/27/24, 4:15 AM
So hot with daddy James being a Slut!
2/27/24, 4:08 AM
I am definitely going to be rereading this once it's fully posted. It's so fucking hot and the twists and turns of the different mind control devices have been incredible. Looking forward to the epilogue!
LuciferSam
2/27/24, 1:47 AM
Wonderful work as always, looking forward to seeing more from Jun
2/27/24, 12:54 AM
Fuck me that’s hot! Got my cunt hungry as hell. Love your writing. I want to live in a world like this. Thanks for the nut.
Fuck, this is too excellent, how do you keep writing such phenomenal stuff?
2/26/24, 11:08 PM
Lol poor Jun waddling back to the hotel sloshing with all those loads blasted into him from both ends. Maybe he's gotta incorporate more twerking and splits into his routine on his international tours ;)
2/26/24, 10:26 PM
Great work with unpredictable plots and mind games. I liked the possibility that Jayson could still be under Will's manipulation without knowing. As Will requested, he did not control Sam despite finding him hot, and he sent Kenny to his clinic when he did not really have to (which resulted in him planning to send more of his teammates). I will be waiting for your future stories on Dr Altman!
2/26/24, 10:42 AM
Awesome and super-hot story! But it does feel finished.... confused about that "to be continued"

2/26/24, 12:19 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Alan needs to take control of his school and become the ultimate master while Marc pull all the strings

2/26/24, 3:19 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) This was actually the planned ending, since the main conflict was resolved, but I wanted to write a smutty epilogue… and then that epilogue grew into a full chapter and inspired maybe some continuation. So the next chapter is a pseudo-epilogue that will be the last for the contest, but may set up a sequel down the road.
2/26/24, 2:08 PM
I love this story - read it at least 3-4 times - try to savor it and give time between to make it fresh again. It is creative, hot, well-written, and makes me smile so much while I get wrapped up in it. Happy ending is cherry and leaves you feeling good in such a pleasant, nice way - totally different from most of the stories I typically find and enjoy. Thank you for this and your many other fantastic works! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
2/26/24, 2:00 PM
Wonderful, thank you~!
2/22/24, 11:21 PM
This story has a hold on my heart. Please continue.

CasualWanderer82
2/23/24, 6:39 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) I will! Thank you for commenting.
2/21/24, 10:25 PM
I check for a second chapter regularly. CANNOT WAIT. Please post it!

CasualWanderer82
2/22/24, 5:58 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) I'm so glad you're invested. I've only just started writing it, though, so I hope you stick around!
2/22/24, 5:34 PM
Say goodbye to your cherry dude. Now that’s how to lose your virginity. So hot!
2/22/24, 5:10 PM
Cool twist. Love it.
2/22/24, 3:22 PM
so awesome thank you
2/21/24, 8:09 PM
Oh hell yes. Loving it.
2/21/24, 7:29 PM
What a great foundation you’re laying. Definitely got my attention.
2/21/24, 3:54 PM
Loving this series. Hoping Daddy Keller has a machine or two that could make Erik’s dream to have kids come true…
R P
2/21/24, 5:05 AM
Fuck, this is somehow even hotter than the previous chapters. I’m torn between hoping Alan comes out on top, and hoping James gets what he’s been craving…
2/20/24, 5:05 PM
Absolutely mind blowing. The series keeps getting better. Good job!