Recent Comments

3/3/24, 11:47 PM
I love the trope of the straight guy (an alpha stud, no less) becoming corrupted. Did such a good job with the characterization of Brad as well, making him douchey but not to the point of being too unlikable, and making his comeuppance so much sweeter. I concur with the other commenters, what a hot story! Great job!
3/3/24, 11:24 PM
As always Charlie, another great addition to the JPS Universe. Your big booty boys always get my mouth watering, and I concur with the assessment with how JPS affects the mind. Looks like Jun got a vacation he's never going to forget! ;)
Martin
2/27/24, 6:11 AM
One question: Why don't you at least cross-post your story to GaySpiralStories? That might increase the visibility, and as your story contains hypnosis, it would be very appropriate on GaySpiral. Let me know if you need assistance with that!

3/3/24, 8:00 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Hi, thank you for your suggestion. I will do that after I have completed the first volume. :)
2/29/24, 4:54 PM
I am enjoying this story big time. Cant wait to read more from it.

3/3/24, 7:59 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you, I think this is either a deconstruction or a reconstruction of my favorite tropes in the site :)
2/28/24, 12:40 AM
Thanks for the excellent chapter, it is clear that the quality of chapters and letters has improved.I also like that the story has become longer, which allows you to better understand it.I'm looking forward to the new part.

3/3/24, 7:58 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Thank you! I have written the next few chapters too. Expect regular updates!
Anonymous
3/2/24, 11:48 PM
love it
3/2/24, 10:43 PM
Fucking amazing story! Can't wait for more of Jun's adventures.
RM
3/2/24, 10:36 PM
Such a great exploration of how the JPS influences thinking and the mind while also getting great descriptions of the torrid sex. Great fapping material.
3/2/24, 9:50 PM
Hell fucking yes!!
3/2/24, 3:24 PM
that was a very fun ride, thank you for sharing it with us
DD
3/2/24, 11:23 AM
Woof, what a read, that was great. Keep going please 🙏.
Controlme
3/2/24, 11:06 AM
"But no matter how many times I fuck myself silly over the next few days, I’ll be completely back to normal when I get my body back." What a stupid slut. He just trained his mind that his purpose is to service cock, that he is a submissive hole. And, he's about to spend the next week reinforcing his mind's new self-image. I can't wait until he discovers what he's bringing back to his own body. He may never use his real body to be a dom top, but he's going to spend the rest of his life as a submissive muscle slut. I loved reading this and jerking off to it. Terrific idea, well executed and very hot.
Anonymous
2/29/24, 2:45 PM
Is this story abandoned?

3/2/24, 10:50 AM
@Anonymous It seems that it is
3/2/24, 7:21 AM
Pwang! Wow this is so hot, something I can only fantasize about
3/2/24, 3:24 AM
This was genuinely such a great story. All the different inventions were all super hot, and while it was only a couple parts, you somehow managed to make it all flow very well without going too fast or feeling like too much. Can't wait for that next part!
3/1/24, 11:02 PM
Ooh hot body switching story.
Anonymous
3/1/24, 4:04 PM
im crying and gosh Ill have to wipe down my keyboard from the salt but damn this was an amazing story
3/1/24, 12:36 PM
Not my usual story, but wholesome, sweet, serious and bittersweet. Writing genuine relationships is a struggle for me, but its easy to get wrapped up in the star-crossed lovers. Massive Kudos to you.

Martin
3/1/24, 1:44 PM
@[Neon Demon](/user/show/10023852) @Cockatrice Both of you please finally honor the PMs I've sent you months ago where I asked ago to get in touch with me. I'd like to give us a chance to clear up misconceptions and misunderstandings of the past. I simply don't want to have to interact with people who hold me in contempt (to put it mildly). If you prefer not to give us the chance to find a reasonable basis to work on, I'd once again ask you to stay away.
3/1/24, 12:03 PM
Absolutely loving it! You're a fantastic writer
3/1/24, 9:13 AM
Incredibly hot and fleshed out story. I love the depth and length of this story yet so vivid and intense throughout! Truly a genuine treat for all of us. Such an excellent read from a cool premise. We’re all very thankful. Can’t wait for more!
3/1/24, 7:03 AM
Really hot story and really enjoyed the concept so far. You've got me hooked.
3/1/24, 5:51 AM
That was so hot.
Anonymous
3/1/24, 4:22 AM
Can't wait to see more!
3/1/24, 3:49 AM
Damn! What a great start and interesting premise! I feel like there is so much room for unexpected twists and turns!
3/1/24, 2:01 AM
Damn. That was hot
2/28/24, 8:18 AM
Great start, well written !!

2/28/24, 8:21 PM
@[Orientalism](/user/show/10020050) Thank you! I’m only just starting to do my own stories, and I had a few that I’d already finished. Feel free to read some of my other finished stories and tell me your thoughts!