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2/15/22, 3:47 PM
I am loving the series so far. I really hope to see Trevor join his friends in latex bliss.
2/15/22, 1:21 PM
i Really look foreword to a big twist of trevor taking over simon and "inheriting" all his friends. or to simon taking over trevor as a latex servant next to brad. either way works, and either way i want more.
Jonanator
2/15/22, 3:01 AM
Love the story. can't wait for more.
2/14/22, 9:49 PM
Clever and well written - many thanks.
Martin
2/14/22, 8:40 PM
Wow, that was some kind of hot sex you've written! Animalistic and wild doesn't begin to catch this. I could almost feel myself how Garret breached that inner hole of Owen. And how he slid in... so hot. I really hoped that he would rip that damn condom. Such a fun-killer... :) This series is categorized as Coming-of-age. Well, I hope the next chapter will be concentrating on Caleb again. Some cute first sex where he breeds his first love and puts Garret's and Owen's grandson into him... 💕

2/14/22, 9:05 PM
@Martin! Broken condom mishaps!? On this oh-so-wholesome kinky erotica site!? For shame! /s More seriously, I'm intending most of the rest of the series to be from Caleb and Brett's perspectives. Never fear, we're gonna get both smoldering chemistry and frequent, wild sex out of this series in due time!

Martin
2/14/22, 9:38 PM
@Dace I can't tell how much I look forward to this!
2/14/22, 5:51 PM
Thank you fir taking the time to write this story! Nice job!
2/14/22, 6:35 AM
This was sweet. Thank you for sharing. Left me feeling better after a really shitty day.
2/12/22, 2:40 PM
Is this a repost?

2/13/22, 4:38 PM
@astrologus Yes, I originally posted these on Gay Demon a few years back, and it's posted on FurAffinity

2/13/22, 5:52 PM
Wow, it's great to see you again @Taiga Star. Probably from FA. I remember some of the lines from this one. The beginning is a bit triggering but the rest is really beautiful, therapeutic, and hot.

2/13/22, 7:09 PM
@astrologus For starters, I'm sorry for the triggering. I'm glad you liked it enough to keep reading it and to remember it from elsewhere!
Anonymous
2/12/22, 11:13 AM
Cute and hot, but the ending is far too abrupt, this needs a second chapter!

2/13/22, 4:39 PM
I've been wanting to add one for a long time, but this never got much traffic until now. I guess I'll have to get to work!

Martin
2/13/22, 6:06 PM
@Taiga Star You just have to publish on the "right" outlet :)

2/13/22, 7:07 PM
@Martin I think I found it, then!
Anonymous
2/13/22, 4:59 PM
I'm impressed he started practicing law at 15. A prodigy!

2/13/22, 5:17 PM
I probably just wrote the wrong number.
2/13/22, 6:03 AM
This is off to a great start! Really sexy premise and I can't help but wonder if Steve isn't taking advantage of the situation a little bit. I hope you decide to write more!
2/13/22, 4:02 AM
Very well done! I was secretly hoping that Steve was really the original guy and this was his elaborate scenario for getting the narrator to accept his new life.
2/13/22, 2:06 AM
Liking this so far.
2/11/22, 10:20 PM
i have only cried on this site once before and this would be the second time. really good read sir.

2/12/22, 1:23 AM
@Brody Glad you enjoyed it. ❤

2/13/22, 12:39 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) I've never had a story stay with me all day and make me contemplate my existence.

2/13/22, 12:53 AM
@Brody I'm honored!
2/12/22, 9:55 PM
To think I almost skipped by the first chapter because it was about monsters! I have to echo the previous comments and say that this story totally blew me away. It moved me in a way that I don't expect - especially from an on-line monster story. It was a pure joy to read, Bro. And I think you ended it the way it had to end--not happy, but hopeful. Thanks so much for this. Truly... Cheers, LLOYD

2/12/22, 10:24 PM
@Lloyd311 Thanks for the excellent message. Yeah, this one was an all consuming task.
2/12/22, 7:41 PM
I hope he transforms more homophobes!
2/12/22, 3:56 PM
this is a really cool story, I hope you end up doing more chapters of it!
2/12/22, 2:08 PM
Incredibly hot and well written. It has to continue ...
2/12/22, 5:35 AM
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Here or on any gay story site. Please continue it.

2/12/22, 6:12 AM
@Android_1 Wow, thank you! Unfortunately, the challenge rules state that I can't without being disqualified, but I did have two more chapters planned!

Martin
2/12/22, 8:56 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) You can continue the story, but outside of the challenge. I.e. start a new series (not using the same series name as one story in the challenge). You can link to the story challenge manually as the "origin" story if you want to.

2/12/22, 1:41 PM
@Martin that's good to know! I don't think I want to do that though. I'm already working on a new story. I'll keep that in mind for the future! Thank you!
2/11/22, 4:57 PM
Thanks Absman. I pre-ordered my copy. Looking forward to the hard ons it will inspire.

2/11/22, 10:36 PM
@TexMuscle I'm dying to know what people think of it. So far, only three aside from me have read it: my INCREDIBLE editor @paradoxbear who's comments littered my manuscript (153! I'll sing a love song to him in a couple of days); A friend who edits gov't manuals -- a lawyer -- who enjoyed it but worried that the "average" reader might think there's too many subplots; A dear friend who's a composer/ lawyer (by day) who loved PHOLUS REBORN enough to sell a bunch of copies for me -- said, "This book makes you a real writer." (I don't know what that meant, but I accepted it.) Please read it quick and let me know!

2/12/22, 2:38 AM
@absman420 you know I love all your sub plots. Your green thumb has pressed my button over the years offering up a sticky thank you. I'd even start drinking milk again if I could pick the source. Are you thinking about a third book? I still want to see your take on my thought of a "Quantum Leap / Orgasm" story. Propelling the reader into a character of a favorite story. Maybe they don't gain full control of the body until he reaches an orgasm then can bend the story. Classics or standards never go out of style. You have inspired many. Some maybe one hit wonders but we want you to keep hitting it.

2/12/22, 11:28 AM
> @TexMuscle Are you thinking about a third book? > Yes, I'm already outlining the plot. I CAN tell you the title: TRANSFIGURATION
2/12/22, 11:06 AM
Very well written story
2/12/22, 10:44 AM
What an excellent story
2/12/22, 9:51 AM
bravo. so sexy. dying for a part 2.
2/12/22, 4:39 AM
Please tell us what the name of the sequel is!

SC Walker
2/12/22, 4:40 AM
@randy7869 I'm working on the follow up as we speak!
2/11/22, 9:27 PM
Hi there! any idea when we could read the third chapter? Is a great story, and I'm dying to know what's happen next! Best regards!

2/12/22, 12:10 AM
sorry for the lack of update i am working on it. it is just that i have been really buisy with school cramming a lot of projects and essays but i will try to upload it ASAP@Plymouth58

2/12/22, 12:23 AM
@Hypnobot no hurry, buddy, I totally understand. I've had some terribly busy days (or full of other stuff). It is not my intention to be impertinent, I just wanted to let you know that you have fans waiting for your work :)

2/12/22, 1:05 AM
oh i appreciate it i will try to make chapter 3 worth the wait@Plymouth58
2/11/22, 11:30 PM
Holy shit this story was amazing from start to finish!!! Luke's utter obliviousness combined with his fat ass bouncing around for his friends is so hot, and I can't even imagine how he fits that juicy bubble butt into a pair of baseball pants. PLEASE tell me there will be more to this!
Zeke
2/11/22, 10:49 PM
omg i loved it cant wait to read more
2/11/22, 3:56 PM
I don't know who posted this, but this story is from <*censored by admin*>.

SC Walker
2/11/22, 4:24 PM
And I would have gotten away with it too if it weren't for you meddling kids! lol yeah it's me, don't worry @Pillowy

2/11/22, 10:42 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thank goodness! Amazing story BTW. Love the dynamic between good bros like Sammy and Luke!
Kyle Cicero
2/11/22, 12:19 PM
I enjoy your stories. I just wanted to say thank you for posting such amazing stuff throughout the years.

2/11/22, 10:28 PM
@Kyle Cicero Thank you, Kyle! Hopefully I'll continue posting amazing stuff for years more. Shhh, don't tell -- I'm working on a short story right now. Should be ready soon. Forcing myself to keep it short.
2/11/22, 10:08 PM
this was very lovely and romantic