Oh my sweet Lord, that was fantastic. I'll admit, I only read to the end of the bath scene (I couldn't make it any further it was so good. I'll have to finish the rest later haha) but I wanted to share my thoughts on what I've read so far. Incredible. This chapter really blows it out of the park in terms of eroticism and intimacy. It's exactly what I was looking for and you really exceeded any of my expectations, so well done both of you! The bath scene was so intimate and sweet. Your language was beautiful from the descriptions of the warm water, the cleaning, the muscles and the different body parts. It was a world of sensuality. I loved how tender the interactions were between Jasper and Rhys, and I appreciated how you slowed down the pace and gave the prose time to explore the characters being with each other. It made me want to be in that bath haha so soothing to read! Of course, I mentioned before, my favourite part is hearing Rhys call Jasper his pet, so to hear Rhys doing that a lot in the first part really pressed all the right buttons for me! It was great that you showed Rhys as the Owner exploring Jasper's body as his pet, showing that he owned him but also that he had the right to caress and tease different parts of his body. Incredibly sexy and a great symbolic of ownership and dominance. I particularly enjoyed when he scratched Jasper's head (whether intentional or not, it was a slight nod towards pup play. I appreciated it!) I was also impressed by Jasper's declarations as being Rhys' pet. Although he was in a slight trance, I think it was an important symbolic moment for him to accept himself as a fucktoy, pet, etc. The lines in particlar, "Yes…your willing f-fucktoy…ahh…" / "I’m yours…you know what is best for a pet like me…your pet. Please – please keep making me yours, Rhys, Sir, Owner" were sooooo hot. A powerful symbol of power-exchange and showing the hierarchy between the two. It's quite erotic that Jasper and getting enjoyment out of giving himself willingly to Rhys. It's a grand gesture in his journey into submission. Well done! Also, I like the little self notes Rhys makes to himself to try and prune away any Dom behaviour from Jasper so as to steer his pet into further submission. Sorry for the long comment! It's honestly one of my favourite series I've ever read and I just want you both to know how wonderful the writing, characters, plot, and world-building are. I hope you continue the series as long as you're satisfied with writing it! Well done again and I'll give my thoughts on the rest of the chapters as soon as I can. Thanks so much.

This was such an achingly sweet story in the best possible way -- all of that need and yearning, with Levi unable to deny his need for cum or his need for romance. Like other folks, I thought your writing of Levi as a trans guy was great rep -- respectful, hot, appreciative but not creepy in a chaser way -- it was just a feature of him to celebrate and enjoy. Great buildup and great handling of time -- I thought your time compression was very well-handled in the relationship because the question really was whether Peyton would be affected by the pheromones. Beyond that, I think you hit some excellent sweet snapshots of their courtship. Actually, for me, the one thing that made me pause was the off-handed mention of the cause of Levi's blessing. It was a moment of "What the hell kind of ritual did *his parents* do to make this happen?" -- without further context of whether it was a botched ritual that was meant to do something else or whether something else was going on, it felt a little out of place. This story was so, so lovely. Thank you for sharing it.

Jay-sus, what a good read. Very tender and sweet. And blisteringly hot. I love how you left so many details unspoken, like where the curse came from, why cinnamon fixes it, why nobody reacted to or needed explanation about the curse, why Levi's parents can 'lift' it or whatever it was Peyton alluded to... just very nicely done and had a lovely, lived-in feel from top to bottom. (ba-dum *tsss*) From a writing perspective, I'd try to find a few more alternate adjectives - you used the word 'pleasure' a lot towards the end, which mildly jarred me out of the fantasy. I'm also dying for more details on their courtship, which for my taste was a litte glossed over. Overall, I loved it. Reminded me a lot of Frecklman64's *Curse of 100 Bottoms* story, which also was such a sweet blend of romance and magically induced need-to-fuck-right-now horniness. Fantastic work!

great storyline. had to keep reading all chapters before getting off with the newfound friends

I need a Part 3 NOW !!! Kenny and Terrance are so sweet together. I just hope, his girlfriend doesn't see them together. But calling it now... shes indeed a lesbian. I mean, she's dressed as Wonderwomen and has trousers on .....

so so hot🔥

so hot. next time some post orgasm torture pls.🥵

I also like the trans representation. And I empathize and appreciate the mental calculus and against Levi was under.

This was a really sweet story! It hit so many of my kinky itches, while also being wholesome and romantic. It's such an inspired idea: a guy with uncontrollable pheromones finds love with a demisexual guy. This fusion of kink and romance is something that I aspire to myself. Also the trans rep was amazing, there aren't enough stories about trans guys. Levi was extremely hot, even besides his horniness and I loved how you described the wombfucking. Peyton was sweet and adorable too!

Continuing to enjoy this story. The world-building is superb, and the characters are well developed. I liked getting to meet Marin in this chapter and would love to know more of the history between Marin and Rhys. Keep up the excellent writing!