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4/7/22, 6:55 PM
Can't wait to see what Casey and Brother David get up to
4/6/22, 3:52 PM
The concept is fun and original, and the twist that these men can never find companionship within their fraternity adds a poignancy that deepens the story beyond what could have been an enjoyable but straightforward fantasy about scent play, mind control, and masculinization. I like that you didn't give Tony an easy answer to his problems.

4/7/22, 5:31 PM
@ParadoxBear Thank you for the very thoughtful comment. Life has no easy answers. Struggle is the only thing we all share.
4/1/22, 12:44 PM
This was really cute! Usually I get kind of squeamish over hypnosis, but something about their caring relationship with each other made it seem less scary. And the vibe was pretty sexy, honestly. Well done. And great translation by Blob, of course, kudos to both of you.

4/7/22, 2:50 PM
@Soren Fitz - thanks!!! :see_no_evil: :see_no_evil: :see_no_evil: well it's kind of the vibe on most of the series, but at the end things got out of rails a little bit :sweat_smile: but all will be solved ;D
4/7/22, 1:37 PM
I did not expect to ever read about a human Tauros being milked. Keep up the good work!

4/7/22, 2:21 PM
@Twan Andersen I'm glad you liked it! A chapter a week for the next 50 years!
4/7/22, 2:19 PM
This is exactly what I wanted! Amazing! Tender with a hint of danger.
4/7/22, 9:32 AM
Really interesting and creative idea. Definitely go me excited to see the whole story unfold
4/7/22, 4:46 AM
Hope you're doing okay, Blue! Sending you a million and seven hugs!
3/30/22, 2:35 PM
Wow! What an awesome direction to take this. The world building is excellent. I love how the genies work, and finding out that much about them. I love the warnings about how Rada is doing things, and the hint that he might fall in love with Jack. Can’t wait for more!

4/7/22, 2:13 AM
@MonsterMash62 Thank you so much! I was honestly a little bit worried that I was doing too much lore building but I thought the idea was really really interesting. I mean who hasn't wanted to romance Dorian etc al., in Dragon Age Inquisition and have more than one sex scene right?
4/6/22, 9:34 PM
This is … simply delightful! So well-written, extremely sexy without coming across as just straight-up porn, and a very interesting exploration of concepts. As to the question above about the second wish.. Jack is pretty self-effacing and enjoys being submissive/agreeable/accepting... what if he were to work out a deal with Rada to wish to make of himself a better/superconductor partner/client/host in exchange for the genie's goodwill and sticking around longer? Or perhaps wingmanning/Cyrano-ing him with Finn, not realizing he's already got his hooks in him? Risk and slippery slope for Rada, in what seems an innocent and harmless diversion.

4/7/22, 12:40 AM
@wmmoller Well thank you! This is a particularly fun and nice comment to get. By the way when I was asking about the second wish I just was curious what the other commenter had in mind since she didn't specify. I actually do know what I'm doing with that if Jack should _happen_ to ever make another wish...
Anonymous
4/7/22, 12:26 AM
Soooo good. Some grammatical errors but it was easy to take in. I loved the idea about different colors of the hypnotic rings inducing different emotions/sensations. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter!
4/6/22, 3:10 AM
What a sweet, hot story! I loved this.

4/6/22, 10:02 PM
@Noam de Pluma I trade in sweet and hot! I'm glad you enjoyed.
4/6/22, 2:05 PM
Loved this concept man. So hot.
4/6/22, 1:55 PM
Super hot! Love the body hair appreciation. Can’t wait to see what happens to Tony!
4/5/22, 12:20 AM
Cant wait for the next installment. Please give some emphasis on the facial hair development. Very hot so far!!!
4/4/22, 10:10 PM
That was one hot read thanks!
4/4/22, 9:00 PM
I have to say, I really enjoyed this story - each chapter has been really great. I look forward to seeing where Sammy and Luke end up, and yeah, the feelings are working for me lol. I especially appreciate Luke's narration - he's missing cues but still such a sweet, warm character. I hope he clues in soon enough about Sammy's feelings.
4/4/22, 7:51 PM
Truly enjoyed this story. Would love to see what happens to Tony and if he just happens to, by a quirk of fate, hook back up with Jim.

4/4/22, 7:55 PM
@Uncle Arctos next part, Tony's Struggle is being reviewed right now... :)

4/4/22, 8:12 PM
@MostlySalt that is completely awesome I eagerly await the next part. Thank you so very much!
4/4/22, 4:29 PM
Incredibly hot!
4/4/22, 3:35 PM
I was getting super invested when Jake started to merge into Chazz, being a discordant but one entity, but then read about Chazz suddenly taking over. I was so excited to see Jake and Chazz merge and the new person love Quinton and be aggressively lovely. I wonder if Chazz's undesireable traits could have been tempered by Jake's, that sudden ending with a climax of Chazz being trapped didn't happen. I wonder who it could be when both Chazz and Jake just melted into each other.
4/4/22, 10:34 AM
I loved this!! Thank you for writing it!
4/4/22, 8:00 AM
_Furiously takes notes on how Naga stories should be written._ This is such a fun series, I'd love to see more overt naga-eye hypnosis, but I love the audio style of the hissing too.
Sexcrab
4/4/22, 6:01 AM
This is the kind of story that is always good to follow: Simple, sexy and intuitive. You don't even need to reread the old chapters to get the new one, but you do it anyway because the narrative and characters are so good to follow. I hope it doesn't take months like now, I can't wait for the next chapter.
4/4/22, 2:21 AM
I like where this story is going. Thank you for writing it.
4/3/22, 5:25 AM
What a trip. 5’s across the board.

4/4/22, 12:01 AM
@Beaner Thank you so much for taking the time to rate and comment! It's hugely encouraging. Hope to share more soon!
Jonanator
4/2/22, 5:23 PM
Interesting. loved it. can't wait for more.

4/4/22, 12:00 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much for the encouragement! Can't wait to share more with you!
Anonymous
3/31/22, 1:31 PM
A story about dad and son's relationship is hot, especially when dad is regressed into his son's young boyfriend. I like to read these kinds of story too much!!! So, I look forward to your next story.

4/3/22, 4:51 PM
Thank you so much for the feedback. I have a few stories here.
4/1/22, 9:51 AM
Hooray! I’ve been waiting for a new chapter of this, and it did not disappoint. :D Everything about this story is achingly hot. I particularly love the descriptions of Luke and Sammy being close enough to kiss, and wondering about each other…I hope Sammy confesses his true feelings soon. And finally, I want to commend you on making Luke a perfect himbo! He has that perfect mix of cluelessness and sweetness that makes him great to read (at times I wonder how he can possibly miss what’s happening with Sammy, but you do a great job making his obliviousness justified by the text). Fantastic!

SC Walker
4/1/22, 2:34 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you! One of my goals with this story is to make Luke’s dumbness plausible - sometimes I feel like dumb jock stories are too far fetched. When I figured out that he was on the spectrum everything just clicked. I’m also glad you like Sammy and Luke’s burgeoning feelings - I was nervous about including the romance elements but people luckily seem to like it.

4/2/22, 9:25 AM
@SC Walker Hmmm…this is interesting. By “spectrum” I am guessing you mean the autism spectrum? I must admit that raises some questions for me. On the one hand, Sammy and the other guys’ actions feel a LOT creepier if Luke is literally unable to process what’s going on around him: being clueless is one thing, but someone whose brain *can’t* analyze information and cues is another. Obviously this site is infamous for questionable consent, but a story where characters have diagnosable mental health conditions…well, it pushes it into a much more complicated area. At the same time, though, being on the autism spectrum doesn’t inherently mean that someone doesn’t experience sexual attraction; to write such characters as asexual or “too childish” to have a sex drive can be infantilizing. There’s a good deal to think about here…

SC Walker
4/2/22, 12:02 PM
@Feed Your Head I understand your concern but I am particularly suited to writing a story about a character on the spectrum. Yes, the teammates are borderline sexually harassing him, but the important thing to understand is that Luke ALWAYS consents to sex. I make sure to stress that part. Luke is oblivious to his own feelings; he doesn’t realize (yet) that he WANTS to get felt up and fucked. I appreciate your concern, though, and I sm going to keep it in mind when writing future chapters.

Anonymous
4/2/22, 10:00 PM
@SC Walker i wanted to throw in my two cents as an autistic person and say that although it's definitely a tricky thing to write, luke as a character is absolutely clicking for me. i was actually kind of delighted to scroll down here and see that he was on the spectrum. the relationship between him and sam is also absolutely wonderful, and i'm really excited to see how it progresses!

SC Walker
4/2/22, 11:59 PM
Thank you, that means a lot to me! I'm glad Luke is resonating.

4/3/22, 12:10 PM
@SC Walker Thank you so much for taking the time to reply to me, and for being so frank about your writing background and experience. I hope I am not coming across as too prudish or pedantic. It is rare for a work to give people the opportunity to think about consent and discuss it, and your story is doing just that. I’m particularly intrigued by the idea of wanting something without realizing you want it…Thank you for the opportunity to share my thoughts. :)
4/2/22, 3:56 PM
Where is chapter 10 I need it so bad 😭
4/2/22, 2:55 PM
Oh man, this was hot! :fire: I like how horny Mateo, Gino and Nino got, to the point of losing control over his desire and craving for sexual release. They couldn't stop themselves and they didn't even want to. They had to keep defiling him until reaching climax. That was so hot! And as hot as it all was, I wish Tanner had some more to do with it. Like when Gino kisses his twin brother, or when he fantasizes about them two rubbing cocks mocking a penis length comparison. Those were hot but they caught me by surprise, since Tanner hadn't said anything to corrupt Gino's mind that way. I get Tanner was very happy with the idea of twincest, but he doesn't say much to trigger those reactions, I think. Still, Tanner had great moments to shine, like when he guides Tony to lick and suck his father's oversized cock. I also chuckled when he said he'd brought cake :laughing: that was hilarious. All in all, it was yet again a very hot chapter! Thank you so much for writing it! :smiley:
3/30/22, 2:50 PM
This is such a fun world! You’ve really fleshed out the characters, and now they have motivations, plans of action, ideas… they feel real, and this world feels full of possibility. I’m excited to see more.

4/2/22, 5:06 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I have some fun angles to this world I have yet to reveal as well!