Recent Comments

Martin
7/3/22, 5:38 AM
Hot and cute!

7/3/22, 10:41 AM
thanks for the support @Martin :D
7/3/22, 4:59 AM
I look forward to every update! Love this series!
7/3/22, 2:14 AM
I met a few of your friends on the server today. You came highly recommended. I concur in this judgement. This story is not my normal fetish. However, it was well told and I can not wait to see what you do for an encore. Hope to see you on the server soon. Thanks.
7/3/22, 2:09 AM
I met you on the discord server. This story is very good. I smiled that a smiled worked. I agree that a transformation is not necessary here. I’m glad I don’t have to wait a month to see how this story progresses. Xander I’d say is very trusting. What other unknown creatures do you give your spare room too. 😂
7/3/22, 1:47 AM
I met you in cyberspace today. This story is intriguing. I like the mystery of Himbo. I’m waiting for more interactions with the other characters. Waiting for what comes next?
Martin
7/2/22, 9:24 PM
Such an amazing story! I have to admit, I rarely take the time to read stories which don't promise that certain reward, but this has been such a worthwhile exception. It's all Soren's fault that I took note of it. Heartbreaking, sweet, realistic, distressing and granting an insight into one of those many souls who have to struggle with depressions. We, who aren't affected usually, can only begin to guess how it feels - or NOT feels - and it's stories like this that can help us understand. Which is so important if you want to make a difference. Michael is a wonderful person and a wonderful boyfriend. Even though this is just a story, I want them to be able to mend and start from scratch. This time with Michael being aware of Sabin's demons. Thank you Brad! I hope you can deal with your own demons, too. You absolutely deserve it!

7/2/22, 10:17 PM
@Martin Now I’m twice praised by you. I feel spoiled! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my piece. I wanted to write something different that had a depth to it. I’m working on my own demons at the moment, but doing fiction like this, and getting good feedback, makes it all worthwhile.
7/1/22, 4:56 PM
I revisited this story and I'm astounded how this hasn't received the best of all categories and become one of the top stories on this site. Your Pathos and style are the classic and legendary

Anonymous
7/2/22, 2:11 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you so much, man. I’m delighted to hear from you. You were gone a while there. (Hugs and such)

Martin
7/2/22, 4:33 AM
@Stroppy Author The story has gotten excellent ratings in both idea and writing, but just not enough of them to produce a badge... :(

7/2/22, 6:31 PM
@Martin I've made peace with being an atypical author in this space. My stuff will always struggle to pull it's volume of ratings, but it doesn't matter to me either way. What matters is we're sharing a big and vibrant community with a depth of creativity and I'm part of that (if even as an outlier on the bell curve).
7/2/22, 8:56 AM
This was heart-wrenching. You wrote the experience of severe depression so well, and I was on the edge of my seat constantly, wanting to know what the characters would do, and how things would end, positively or negatively. This is an amazing addition to the site.

7/2/22, 3:22 PM
@Soren Fitz Thank you! I didn’t really know how this would be received, but I appreciate you seeing what I was going for.
BigBroDick
7/2/22, 3:19 PM
Damn!! I think I nutted like Mark on this one. Man that was good.
Blufur
7/2/22, 12:17 PM
This story is awesome. I love the slow progression and the insight into the mind during the submission. Gets me hard. Keep up the good work

7/2/22, 3:09 PM
@Blufur thanks for your support! i'll try!
7/1/22, 2:31 PM
I was wondering how on earth Himbo would handle attending school, but everything went better than expected! I did enjoy Himbo blissfully blundering his way through every obstacle, him passing the test with flying colours was particularly amusing. An excellent comic farce. Himbo can read, write *and* count to six, he's very accomplished! Himbo's... unorthodox tactics for winning battles were fun to see as well, I particularly liked how he dealt with Bully. Himbo's 'uniform' was indeed a delightful image as well. It's often simple but your dialogue, particularly Himbo's often gets to me as well. For some reason I really enjoyed this line '“I’ve never built a house before, but I’ve built lots of sandcastles!” Himbo added helpfully.' I think it's the 'helpfully' bit that gets me every time. This was probably my favourite chapter so far actualy, it was just really *fun*

7/2/22, 7:43 AM
@Zhuge_Lin What a lovely message to wake up to! The pillow fight is my favourite scene in the whole series :grin:
Evan
7/1/22, 4:45 AM
A beautiful chapter. And way to go Pete! Such an observant and wise himbo. And there it is. I we hoping we would hear about Mark soon. This was a lovely take on a gift for a day and how Phil took it when it wore off was lovely. His desire to take away Felicia's pain was nature and noble too. I love these characters and Justin is fun. The romantic and caring aspects of this story are so wonderful. I can't wait for another chapter.

7/1/22, 1:24 PM
@Evan Glad you enjoyed the latest chapter! Clearly, Pete is wiser than anyone knows (probably even himself :P), but what exactly does he know? Phil is a standup man, who, like Sam, has had to deal with a lot of pain and hurt, but when it comes down it, he makes the choice to spare the pain he caused on others before anything else. That's what makes him a great doctor, and a really good guy. Both him and Sam deserve each other. Justin was fun, a much needed help for Sam, who's getting busier and whose life gets more and more "exciting"? Now to work on more romantic, fun and caring, and hopefully in under 30k words. On with the circus!
7/1/22, 5:07 AM
I’m glad to learn you’re writing again. Your stories are always great reads. I hope to read the next chapters of this and maybe Casey’s Dog Life too!

7/1/22, 9:36 AM
@Rspark thank you very much! I had twenty chapters planned for Casey's Dog Life but I don't know if I'll ever revisit.
7/1/22, 12:16 AM
To have such maoepulations with such positiveness; such pathos and reciprocal love in a Cinderella/Evil Queen story makes this just a delight to read. It's not "Out there" requiring a map and reference guide. Good on you!

7/1/22, 1:52 AM
@Stroppy Author Thank you so much for your comment! I'm actually thrilled to see you reading my stuff, I've read so much of yours! I'm glad the positiveness, and the fun and the love shine through, it's all about that and sharing it in the end. Thank you again, and I'm glad you're still around GSS, best of luck!
6/30/22, 5:32 PM
Very good and fun and sexy. I like Justin too and hope he joins the group. The mystery is fascinating. Lots of cool stuff here. Oh and the reality altering magic is fun.

6/30/22, 5:42 PM
@Heru Kane Heru! Thank you for commenting! Justin is def the Personal Trainer / Nanny now, ha. He'll be around. The reality altering has been fun and consequence free but now Sam knows that with great magic power, you better not fuck it up. Lots of crazy stuff still to come, happy you had fun so far.
6/30/22, 4:46 PM
Himbo truly is a delight. Nothing phases him, not even the oddities of the Pokemon world. Plenty of exposition in this chapter that will have completely bounced off Himbo's skull :relieved:
6/30/22, 4:31 PM
Interesting and fun direction. The growing magic is hot. I'm glad nothing super bad happened to the twinks. This was fun. The growing magic is cool.
Jonanator
6/30/22, 4:11 PM
Love the story. Can't wait for more.

6/30/22, 4:29 PM
thank you @Jonanator for the support!
6/30/22, 4:11 PM
Himbo has a truly beautiful worldview, doesn't he? Nothing can beat the power of love :triumph: I'm glad the two cute cat(boys?)(pokemon?) ended up happy together/ :)
6/30/22, 3:47 PM
Okay wow interesting. And sexy. I like how Sam is a Dom. Its too sad he didn't get to Rim the wolf.
6/30/22, 12:54 PM
This keeps reading like such a mystic, dark, fairy tale, I loved the ending!

6/30/22, 12:57 PM
@Twan Andersen Thank you Twan! High praise coming from you, and I'm glad you liked the ending. We'll see what happens next!
6/30/22, 6:27 AM
Damn so freaking hot. Can’t wait for the little school girl to learn their place.

6/30/22, 10:33 AM
@Mrdick thanks for the support :D and he's gonna!
6/30/22, 9:11 AM
Wow, there's a lot going on behind the scenes here! ...That Himbo is blissfully unaware of :relieved: Himbo had a lovely day, a new friend *and* his first victory in a Pokemon battle! I do like the ongoing ambiguity over what's going on with Himbo and his interactions with people. Whether there's something deeper going on here or if people are always just *really* happy to see him.
6/30/22, 5:50 AM
Obmih is the greatest ~~spy~~! Certainly up to ~~no good~~ taking on challenges with Himbo! also Daddy/Himbo/Obmih (+glowing eyes) was actually kind of hot 😳

6/30/22, 6:59 AM
@A Possession A Day Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm really happy you've been enjoying the series :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
6/30/22, 5:34 AM
ok i also have a weakness for mind controlled daddies 😩
Mac
6/30/22, 1:27 AM
This is amazing. Love the build and all the elements. Can't wait for the next chapter

6/30/22, 1:36 AM
@Mac thanks so very much for the support!
6/30/22, 1:10 AM
Nah cause I'm really into this and I have to wait for chapters to come out:smiling_face_with_tear: But it's absolutely amazing!!

6/30/22, 1:17 AM
@Rehehe thanks a lot for the support! i don't know what 'nah cause' means but I appreciate it, i think!
Anonymous
6/29/22, 11:53 PM
this series is great so far! it isn't normally the kind of thing i'm into, but the way you're writing it is really clicking for me. i'm excited to see more!

6/29/22, 11:54 PM
@Anonymous thank you so very much :3
6/28/22, 2:39 PM
An absolutely _amazing_ start.

6/29/22, 10:50 PM
@Norismo omg :D thankies
6/29/22, 10:43 PM
Absolutely excellent! Very awesome tone and loving the slow reveal and take over. Can't wait for more!

6/29/22, 10:49 PM
@Faberi thank you so much! i hope you'll look forward to where it goes from here!