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7/30/22, 2:14 PM
Well, how do you manage to make sex THAT suspenseful, even when the title of the chapter gave away the ending? Can’t wait to see where this goes! Poor Ari, though…

7/30/22, 6:55 PM
@Yunnick I’m really happy with what I accomplished in this chapter—it’s about the atmosphere you build, and other uncertainties surrounding what’s otherwise inevitable. Yeah, Ari’s got his struggles. Nate too. This story is a long one in the running, but I promise there’ll be positive payoff and happy endings for all of it!
7/30/22, 5:23 PM
Hey man, you created a great custom file for me a while ago that encouraged me to have short hair and be clean shaven, I love it so much. This wasbr a cool story I'd love to see you write one focusing on going from shaggy bearded hippy to clean shaven/ clean cut jock, if you're ever into it ;)
Apr 4, 2017
7/29/22, 11:15 PM
Fuck, this was so hot, and also so sweet. This is my exact fantasy, so you better believe my nuts were churning out precum the entire time I read it!

7/29/22, 11:33 PM
@BeefyCub Hopefully you finished with a nice mess! :)

7/30/22, 3:04 PM
@Papa Werebear a very nice mess! Licked it all up, though, can’t waste the protein!

7/30/22, 4:24 PM
@BeefyCub :+1: awesome! I have done my job then! Let's talk privately. I'd like to discuss stuff. Papawerebear65@yahoo.com. :bear:
Good boy
7/29/22, 10:01 PM
Is that what happened to me?

7/29/22, 10:03 PM
@Good boy hmm, are you fucking your roommate on command? When your roommate says "who's a good boy, who's a big strong top?" are you going "woof woof I am!" and then fucking harder? 😉
7/28/22, 11:21 AM
This series keep getting better and better. I love that this becoming a journey of sexual self-discovery, and not some Darwinian view of sexuality. There’s both the wonder of opening up your mind and the sheer mysticism of sexual power all wrapped-up in such powerful physicality. Thanks for this well-written journey you’re gifting us!

7/28/22, 4:13 PM
Thank you! I am so proud of the eroticism I was able to accomplish with this chapter. Blending the physical and the spiritual and trying to make it hot was a challenge I’m glad I took. I’m curious what you mean by a Darwinian view of sexuality—what were you originally expecting, or could you elaborate on the contrast between what I’m doing and the Darwinian thing? @Yunnick

7/29/22, 7:15 AM
@Soren Fitz Hard to explain. Sometimes in some stories you get a sense that sexuality is a curse, like being a bottom is being at the bottom of a pre-ordained, rigid hierarchy in sexual roles, and that there is no fluidity in sex at all. And that’s a worldview I don’t quite like. You’re on the contrary feels to me like a story of discovering and exploring your deep desires in spite of socially-constructed norms, in that wonderful universe you’re creating, and I’m digging this. (I hope this makes sense)

7/29/22, 4:17 PM
@Yunnick It makes perfect sense! You hit the nail on the head, honestly. I love subverting traditional sexual norms through characters who buck them—in this case, Talley faces off against a norm he created himself. It’s also why I use top-to-switch and not top-to-bottom (although I probably should add both for people who read those stories). I hope the last chapter is a satisfying end to Talley’s journey! And if you want another story in this universe you might want to check out The Prince and the Frat Boys.

7/29/22, 7:20 PM
@Soren Fitz Really looking forward to the the final chapter(s)!
7/28/22, 3:48 PM
So atmospheric. Great character development. Such excellent building of erotic energy. No notes.

7/29/22, 4:18 PM
@Noam de Pluma I’m really happy with the build-up here. For not being a non-stop sex scene like the last one, I think it still holds the homoeroticism close while making room for a lot of story. And the atmosphere was my favourite thing to pull off here.
7/29/22, 4:21 AM
Fantastic!! Please continue!!
WillingSoldier
7/28/22, 9:52 PM
I'm loving this. When will it continue?
7/28/22, 3:14 PM
I really love how immersed we get in Talley’s POV. The insight we get into his thoughts, feelings, and overwhelm in the moment is fantastic. Plus it’s a super-hot (non-stop) sex scene, and you handle the pacing really well. Great work!

7/28/22, 7:26 PM
@Noam de Pluma I felt that work on this story really helped me improve my ability to flesh out a character into a whole, immersive person. I think it paid off with Axel and Tao in _Curse of the Werebull_, but I still have more work to do. I'm also glad my non-stop sex remains hot, haha, I strive for edging a _little_ more than climaxing but I can usually rub one out to my scenes at certain spots.
7/28/22, 8:53 AM
Oh, this twisted story of the father-son bond really excites me. I liked the way the protagonist's despair was combined with the happiness of seeing his father again.