A great continuation. I really enjoy the slow burn change. The subtle nods to the main character drinking cum to speed up the change without knowing it is also fun. The reality rewrite is also done really well. "Just like any other day". And we all know what happens in detention, don't we. There can't be too many humans left in the school at this rate. Maybe just the checkers club. :)

This is so good, man, really reminds me of Knothole High and stuff like that. Not many stories here that combine anthros (especially canines) with jocks and masculinization. This story is hitting all of my buttons, from the massive bulking up to the mental changes and jockification. I don’t know what you have planned, but I always enjoy seeing the transformation spread out over a longer period of time rather than one event, but this is still awesome.

Can't wait to read more!

Time for an updated summary of everything that is going on here: 1) Base Nick - Your classic straight* himbo: big, dumb, and kind. Can be a little full of himself, but kind to his friends, teammates, and roommate. Has a magic* dick that women are attracted to, and when fucking puts both partners in "the zone" and they black out/go on automatic; we don't know if this effects dudes. Listens to dudes (he respects/ with authority?) To such an extent that they can make him cum or change his way of thinking (though there is a chance something else magnifies this). Wants Darius to be in control of him. Might be into pup play. 1.1) Hypnotized Nick - Gwen's computer program has hypnotized him and is making him a douchy gay jock bro. He's becoming ruder, more controlling, and much more critical of everyone around him. Thinks he knows best and everyone, including Darius, should just listen to him and do as he says. Much more "dominant". Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.2) Cursed Nick - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a dom top. When he us assertive he gains muscle. Teammates, opposing players, and his coach feel sick when they oppose him and are much more willing to back down and follow him. Ill effects might go away when they listen, and they seem more inclined to do so. Darius hasn't gotten sick from him yet. Still wants to be with Darius. Unaware 1.3) Puppy Nick - Gets joy out of listening to Darius, wearing his collar, and doing what he says. Generally kind and more willing to try to be a better person. Often says this is exactly what he wants and has consented to, but Darius has doubts. Can (currently) override alpha douche king. Aware 2) Base Darius - Gay guy, decently in shape with some muscle tone. Attracted to his roommate and worried about having so much control over someone. 2.1) "Hypnotized" Darius - Intended to make him a submissive gay beta. Broken from a combination of him already being gay and his father calling during the first dose. Immediately sends his computer away, so doesn't fets the 2-3 weeks of dosing Nick got. No known lasting effects. Aware 2.2) Cursed Darius - Deborah has cursed him, possibly to be more of a submissive bottom. She thought it would force him to listen to whatever she asked him to do, but doesn't seem to. He loses muscle when he is submissive to Nick, and Nick can force him to change his mind, including forgetting things. Unaware Am i missing anything so far? Looking forward to future chapters and being utterly shattered when Nick goes full on Alpha douche and loses himself, probably hurting Darius and effecting his mind as well.. (Hopefully followed by a happy ending, of course.)

So hot! Looking forward to more!

Great idea for a story! I hope to see where this grows; I mean goes.

Someone that can't be deceived is a nice textural variation. I love how distinct the dynamics and situation is with each different target and family in this story. No characters feel interchangeable at all. Really enjoying it.

Great story, looking forward to see where this goes. Thanks

I didn't like the structure at first. But it started winning me over. I think you took some story telling risks, and some writing risks too. In the end, I though it was a well told and unique story.

. > _"Fuck, it sucks that we won’t remember,” said Aidan as he stood up and stretched._ Oh, buddy, I don't think I will be forgetting this any time soon! :laughing: I guess I must be one of those in the audience who _"really paid attention"_ What to say. This was **so damn erotic!** The sheer unawareness, the mindless following, the relishing of power, the public display of sexual dominance and the normalcy of it all. Everything was exuding sex and domination. I'm sure Tanner knew **convincing Jiang would be fruitless and dissatisfactory**, so that's why he decided not to give that route the slightest of attempts. I like how the enigmatic pastor messed with the poor presumptuous boy making him the only person fully aware of this **nonsensical and depraved show**. I'm positive that it was not only to feed on Jiang's disconfort but also to send him a clear a message on who's in charge. It has to be a powerful display of authority when you are made to stay on your seat while a whole auditorium is forced to become **obedient puppets**, sexual exhibition included. As for me, I was fully excited and in complete awe at the whole scene! **Teacher/Student** relationships are close to incest in my ranking of kinks so this hit all the right buttons. Also, I love the insinuation that both Duffy and Mr. Sparks will be having uncomfortable and inexplicable fantasies about each other even after they forget the event. Now, I will be eager to see what Tanner has schemed for Jiang. The mysterious man has a brilliant mind for the wicked. But I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment. Good things are meant to take time, and I'm gonna use plenty savoring this hot scene you gave us :grin:

Another great addition to the series and a great setup for Jiang's story-line. As always, a fantastically hot piece that sets us up for even higher stakes. Keep it up!

Just now trying to read through this story, it’s really hot! It seems like Tanner’s M.O with Jiang is to influence everyone around Jiang, rather than brute forcing him into sexual situations. (Both here and in the sacred circle he coerced him into accepting the changes through peer pressure.) Interested to see if that also comes into play when Tanner gets Jiang and his dad together.

This was one of the hottest things I've read in a long time. Sorry you had a bad experience and are not finishing it. I'd love to read more of this.

so happy to see this series again! really interesting continuation. i can clearly see how much care you put into developing the characters and their perspectives, since the word choice and what they notice is so purposeful. curious when darius will hear from may, or decide to reach out to her.

It's sexier when Nick is a good boy for Darius. Much more fun when Darius is in charge.

You don’t even know how excited I was to see an update of this story. I check your profile literally every day! I really enjoyed this chapter! Darius’s awareness and realization of the situation was both exciting and haunting. I felt his feeling of helplessness throughout the story too…gave me chills! So many factors playing into the story. Who’s in control? What’s the source of the changes and control? It gets me excited to see how your story plays out! I hope we get to see more of Nick as a good boy. Alpha Nick is low key super hot but Darius in charge and Nick as a himbo sub top is what I came here for! I definitely can’t wait to see more smut too hahaha

What a Revelation! And definitely my favorite kind of apocalypse, when the spiritual upheaval leads to such heights of insight and pleasure mingled together. And here I was, feeling for poor Talley all the time. It’s been quite the phantom release for me too! Thanks for the gift, as ever

OK, damnnnnnnnnnnn bro! I loved the first chapter of this and put in my comments how it made me dump 3 loads before I made it all the way through. Then I got to this part. I was going nuts for this through the whole thing, and largely because of the first story. I had anticipation for the transformation and what was going on, so the fact that you seemed to really draw things out with him being at the party and running into a ton of the jocks. The changes start slow and as I'm reading I'm looking for every clue and asking myself "Is it happening? Is it speeding up?" Since I had the info from the first story I was on the edge of my seat. Then I got to the game of beer pong. He's oblivious to the "conversion juice" he's been given. I love that. He thinks he's doing well. He's changing as the game goes on. Getting cockier. I loved when he walked in and they were breaking up their huddle around the beer pong cups and pulling up their jockstraps and shorts. FUCK. I want to guzzle that juice down. So it's no surprise to me that the effect of the beer pong is what made me nut first in this chapter. I got that far, though, cuz it was such a slow burn. Then after a break I come back to the story and pick up where I left off. Now it's the two of them going at it in the bedroom and I'm right on the edge of cumming thru all the transformation and all. Your descriptions are amazing. It's so well done! As he's changing and his cock is transforming, a couple of times he makes a comment that something is happening in the base of his cock. But it just gets left and other changes are described. How his cock turns deep red, then how it's growing and thickening and he's pistoning in and out, and there's some cocky talk back and forth, and he's noticing that the base is changing again getting thicker and veinier, and you just keep teasing it along -- which drove my own cock nuts cuz i'm obsessed with knotted cock, myself, and so I'm in total anticipation of this. And then it happens. His knot forms. And it's like the final change that completes him. And that's what made me dump load #2, right along with him pumping his own jizz into Anthony and bloating his belly, and Anthony is cumming but he's drinking all that "brotein" down right as it is being squirted out. Thank you for this amazing story. I am definitely going to revisit it and I won't be surprised if I cum in all the same places.

I was reading this story got to the end and was like damn that was a great story. I'm enjoying it more and more. I personally can't wait for the next chapter.

Always fun to have some Himbo Sun in my day 🌞

This story was AMAZING. I blasted out 3 loads in the course of reading it all. The character establishment in the beginning is well done and thorough, which makes the transformation so much better cuz we see so many changes. The description of the physical changes is unbelievable. So hot. I was hanging on every sentence. Thank you so much!

I actually really enjoyed how he turned into a bully :)

Woah so sexy. Don’t keep us waiting too long for more chapters. Scalding hot.

What an unexpected chapter. You keep coming up with amazing new and different ways to show Tanners corrupting influence. I love it. When I first read the summary I expected that Tanner would influence the debate itself making the debate teams discuss unsuitable subjects like sex, masturbation, exhibitionisme, male body appreciation, Farther-son relations and so on. With Tanners help the debate teams could have reached some interesting conclusions that would have had the assembly agree on quite disturbing behaviours. So I was surprised to see the story pick up at the end of the debate. But the ritual was a fun addition. I am a little bit sad that it was just forgotten. I am generally not a big fan of the "When I snap my fingers you will forget everything that has happened". I think I would have been much hotter if everyone in the room would just consider this the normal way to end a debate. Or at least that the mantras the teacher repeated will stick with him and form his personality. He will think of himself as the master of debate and exposure without remembering the actual ritual. But on the other hand I do love the part between Jiang and Aidan at the end, where the other guy just completely accepts that of course they are gonna forget as soon as the leave the room and that Jiang is the weird one for not understanding that. It is so deliciously absurd. Please keep up the good work. Every week that goes by without a new chapter is agony.

Nooooo. You were one of my favorite authors. I’m sad to see you go

Really excited for another part

Damned,this was hot stuff. Tanner is so perverted and bad,he's so good. Nothing hotter than dark,''bad'' and perverted beating goodie goodie wholesome hero,every little once in a while

Subscribed to this story, got the email of a new chapter, dropped everything to read it, hard as a rock and cumming in seconds. This is one of my favorite stories here. Kudos!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!

It was an interesting chapter but to say it is BDSM is wrong. Like with Luke the coach is having issues in my opinion coming to terms with whom he is sexually speaking. Then again I could be wrong only our beloved writer can say I am right or wrong. But what is true he is most gifted author.

Holy fuck this is the hottest thing I have ever read. I am in awe, I wish I could experience this. Could I donate somewhere?