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Zai
11/2/22, 10:26 AM
Holy Butt Fuck'in & Cock Suck'in, Dude! This is one H🔥T and 'Sin'tillating tale of debauchery and hidden lust revealed! The way you've written Superman's dive into the world of wicked passions since chapter one for me reveals his truest, innermost self concerning his sexuality. Superman, aka Clark Kent is a natural born cock craving, cum guzzling bottom boi. Lex has brought out the Superhero stud's need to be dominated; both with words and actions. The once clean cut Kryptonian hero is now a dirty, turned out slut whore submissive, a true BITCH! Superman, aka SuppaFag, aka SuperQueer, aka Supercocksuker, etc, etc, etc, is now and will always be Lex Luthor's prime, grade A turned out Slave! I cannot wait for more of this orgasmic AU! Are you planning on bringing Batman into the story? I'd love read about Lex capturing the Caped Crusader as the superhero is snooping about. Then, oh then, the bald, supervillainous stud makes Batman his next hero to Be Bitched! I sooooooo imagine Batman in his classic physique hugging body suit with those Skin Tight briefs! And Lex eventually fucks Batman's mouth and ass with wild abandon. Unlike stripping the Superman out of his costume, Lex slits Batman's Speedo-like briefs right over his hole and then plows the sexy hunk hero into Neverland. Forever! As the hot villain bitch's Batman, he uses Batman's penchant for calling items Bat-? Like Bat-mobile or Bat-arang, etc. But as he's conquering another hero ass, Lex uses terms such as Bat-pussy/Bat-cunt, etc, further cementing his new, dominating hold on the Caped Crusader. Plus, Lex will then be able to gain access and control of Bruce Wayne's companies, holdings and monies. Thanks for sharing, Dude! You Rock!
11/2/22, 8:35 AM
It was an interesting concept, without a doubt and well-written as always, but the sexy part of it felt like an afterthought and rushed, as if making sure you fulfilled a checklist. Honestly would have been better had it not been specifically featured, but implied.
Flamefox23
11/2/22, 4:52 AM
Kinda wish he kept the double peen but o well. Good story, fun read.
11/2/22, 2:55 AM
THANK YOU, Darby!! Appreciate your comments & encouragement!! I am humbled to deliver a storyline that you & the other readers/group members can/will ENJOY!! Believe me, I've got MORE in store for SUPERMAN!!:wink:
Chriscam
11/1/22, 11:35 PM
Congrats and THANKS!! For your work. I'm a big fan. Just hope see the chapter 4 in the Halloween party today or so... ;)
11/1/22, 9:07 PM
Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your positive comments & encouragement-- I've been a HUGE Superman fan since I was a kid, but when seeing some of the original films & he was "matched up against a villain", I've always wanted some of the movies/storylines to "push the envelope", i.e., withh him being feeling more dominated & humiliated --so I hope I'm satisfying you/the other readers with this series!! :innocent:
11/1/22, 5:59 AM
What a pleasure! May these two dorks be very happy. And if one day the Price-Milagros household happens to have a poolboy with a whiff of sulfur...well, I'm sure a cum price can be negotiated. Seriously, though, tremendous work! It's remarkable how light you kept it while still bringing all the fun of demon magic.

Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 5:38 PM
@[Ganymede and Co.](/user/show/956270) Thank you so much! It was fun to try something a lil' different, so I'm glad others enjoyed!
PotatoSlices
11/1/22, 3:00 PM
Take a shot every time someone says "fuck". No seriously :joy: Other than that minor detail, a nice ending and everyone's happy... except maybe Vic's wife lol
billi
11/1/22, 9:46 AM
i... dont get the ending - if it is the ending :D
11/1/22, 9:15 AM
I love a good cock shrink story especially when he’s a jock. Loved it. More please.
11/1/22, 4:21 AM
This was really excellent, you split the difference between porn, fluff and prose perfectly. Definitely one of the best I’ve read on here, this one is a story I’ll remember.

11/1/22, 8:14 AM
Thank you! It’s the first time I’m doing smut, actually, but I thought this Halloween challenge would be a great opportunity to at least try; it was a lot of fun to write, and I’m really glad you liked it so much! @[11037](/user/show/13616)
11/1/22, 3:26 AM
Faaaantastic lead up, but damn I wish Pa would have had more fun with him.
11/1/22, 1:53 AM
You captured an ethereal quality so effectively - it really infused the entire thing, start to finish. A bit of a departure from the zanier stuff I usually associate you with, but a welcome one. It’s exciting to know you have this gear in you!

11/1/22, 2:23 AM
@[Noam de Pluma](/user/show/1403470) Thank you! I tend to want to write either moody occult stuff or slapstick romps (and the romps are usually more appropriate for smut). Halloween seemed a good a time as any to engage the other side of my creativity.
10/29/22, 7:30 PM
Yes please. More defeat and humiliation for Superman.

10/30/22, 12:33 AM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Thanks, Darby!! Appreciate your comment & there's DEFINITELY more humiliation & subjugation on the way 4 Supes!! :innocent:

11/1/22, 1:41 AM
I love this story. Superman being a gay faggot has always been one of my favourite tropes. @[supaboivsvillian](/user/show/10027379)
10/31/22, 8:40 PM
I loved this story! Love to see Soren Fitz's hallmark belly inflation kink on full display. I loved the wah that you take up the theme of queerness tying into magic and otherness with such appreciation and care. I also loved the concept of the nympho sprites in particular. The repeated thread/idea of letting the magic/cock/cum/new experiences in and Aaron's openness made this a fantastically hot read. Thank you for this.

11/1/22, 1:06 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) One of the major ‘ohh’ moments when I was coming up with this sorry was the realisation that queer people might just be _better_ at magic, at least throughout history, because they pursued sexuality for mutual pleasure instead of a biological imperative like reproduction. It was an easy step after that to suggest that their past demonisation was in part due to their connection with magic and the threat that posed to power. The nymphomaniac spirits, I feel, breathed a life into their story that it needed especially in act 1–and I was thrilled when I came up with the idea for human-ghost double penetration. It just started naturally happening and I was like “fuck, this is perfect!” And, yeah, as much as I threatened an ominous spell, Aaron’s ‘falling’ is meant to be a really wholesome, exciting experience that has the same magic as, say, stumbling into Narnia. ‘Let him be Lucy’ was my homage to that classic fantasy trope. Thanks for reading! I’m glad you enjoyed.
11/1/22, 12:50 AM
Thank you for giving us a hot short guy. Short guys don’t get enough love in these stories
11/1/22, 12:04 AM
Sweet, loved all the references (many of my favorites, Narnia included :P), and a great ending. Great job!

Sebastián Apollo
11/1/22, 12:11 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Thanks! It was something definitely different than what I'm used to - so it was fun to let loose!
10/31/22, 11:56 PM
I'm back. I just wanted to add something extra for the author. This story is truly spectacular in your quest to make me a fan of transfiguration, I just loved it. I thought about it last night after I fell asleep. For him to find love, then have to accept such a drastic change, a loss of his individual identity to see what possibly develops. Ugh. Thank you so much. I can't wait to read more about ALPHA.
10/31/22, 5:50 PM
This story is great. Hot AF. I like all the names from the Ikea catalog. No assembly required but you do use your hands.
10/31/22, 11:22 AM
I'm so curious what would've happened with the demon. Very hot story!

10/31/22, 2:54 PM
@[Braindrainme](/user/show/10018131) Trying to figure out what the hell demons do was a major catalyst of many of the magic system developments that made the worldbuilding in this story possible! … uh, but I’d still be writing out of my ass if I said exactly what that demon would have done right now. Rest assured there would have been knotting, and maybe even some transformation. Glad you found the story hot!
Sebastián Apollo
10/31/22, 4:59 AM
I'm always amazed when people make these worlds and universes and can write stories that seamlessly fit into them - I'm incredibly envious. As A Possession a Day noted, the worldbuilding you flowed throughout the story along with the mystical elements really serves the work well. Great job, and a very worthy contender!

10/31/22, 2:52 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) It gets easier as the world grows and fills out! The world of Consummation is two years in the making, and still evolving. I actually did a fair amount of history and magic system work to construct the game of questions in this story, at least its original iteration (the draft I finished Friday). I’m glad you enjoyed what I built here! Feels good to know that I’m accomplishing the themes and feelings I intended. And I’m looking forward to reading your most recent story, too…
Anonymous
10/31/22, 4:50 AM
the theme isn't specifically for me but like, dude as a gay enby it's so fucking awesome to see trans positive content on this site. keep it up man!

10/31/22, 2:21 PM
It’s certainly hard when intersections of intersections of intersections of kinks and interests narrow things down, I’ve certainly experienced it myself—but thanks for still reading! I have a few trans friends that I frequently run things by to ensure that my representation is positive and respectful. It’s a joy to do it and I’m always hoping that trans readers will feel safe reading my work. I do have a slow burn romance one-shot coming out soonish with a trans guy as one of the two main characters. No mind control or magic or anything, though there’ll certainly be some smut. Keep an eye out for _Late Night Beers on the Beach_, maybe?
10/31/22, 3:05 AM
I mean, it said possession on the tin so I had to click 😌 Hope you're not tired of me saying this but unfortunately this story was not for me. By no means does this make a _bad_ story in any way, I just have annoyingly niche tastes 😅😅 Still, I enjoyed your worldbuilding, your passion, and indeed the mystical vibe you wove throughout Aaron's journey into depths unknown and I appreciate a lot of the skill that went into your writing, thanks for that hit of magic! 😘

10/31/22, 2:15 PM
@[A Possession A Day](/user/show/1060663) Yeah, sometimes you just have something you’re looking for that isn’t everywhere! Besides, I don’t know any of the tropes and I just saw ‘possession’ as a tag and was like “hmmmm what can I come up with from literally just this word?” Still, I’m glad the story elements stuck out to you! I had a lot of fun with the worldbuilding and magic on this one, so it’s great to know that it shone through.
10/31/22, 1:34 PM
As someone who's a sucker for love stories, I absolutely adored this one. Thank you for writing this story :)
10/31/22, 12:00 PM
Fascinating concept, the basic transformation itself is something that's very hot to me and you've wrapped it up in a very intriguing premise. The idea of changing your identity so drastically like that, giving up so much but then gaining in return, what you would or wouldn't do for love... there's a lot to explore there.
10/31/22, 8:51 AM
Unff stop it. This is inspired. Sweet but very sexy
10/31/22, 5:23 AM
Totally loved the seduction of omega. I think the story is beautifully told, and you created a new world I hope that you explore more of. We need to learn about frat guy beta, gamma, and kappa. Who gave which piece of the perfect body, smile, and ass. The sex scene was so hot. I loved it. Really, I enjoyed the werewolves explanation. That's the brilliant guy I see online. 😃
10/31/22, 4:10 AM
You have such a unique point of view and the creativity to make it shine. Another great story with heart. You could have approached the same idea from many viewpoints but chose the more interesting and heartfelt one. Kudos!