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Ab3
3/31/24, 10:58 AM
It's damn hot story... Please continue where william and his Father spread this pleasure to whole world... Peoples resisting in start and falling for it and asking for more

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:42 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) I'm really glad that you like the story! And of course, our horny demons will not rest until every man in the King become as depraved and horny manly demons like they are. Currently, I'm planning four more stories for this series based around kinky fantasy scenarios; being taking place during a feast, a tournament, a war, and one big finale. I hope that you will find the rest of the story as enjoyable.
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

Hey
4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
Hey
4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out
Anonymous
3/31/24, 6:06 PM
I love how Mike is slowly becoming a whore and still dominates his friends :yum:

4/1/24, 2:25 AM
@Anonymous Mike is a great captain both on the field and in bed. But her fat ass make it inevitable to want to eat those buns :tongue: :peach:
3/31/24, 7:50 PM
I echo the other commenters thoughts. This is becoming my favorite. Its blending hot and sexy and well written story into one. And i also am a sucker for good or happy ending. But a bad ending makes me curious too. Its your choice on how you will post the branching finale but im looking forward to read all the remaining chapters.
3/30/24, 9:16 PM
This story is simply amazing. I'm almost sorry it took me so long to discover it... now for the next chapter (my dick leaking...)
3/30/24, 7:22 PM
Matt you better come back to your boys especially to Jared. I like it that he is more knowledgeable about his powers that he could temporarily control Mark. I cant wait to read the next one. Hope theres no other Hunters coming. (Maybe he could control and add Josh instead so theres no death involvement. But i just hope theres nothing bad will happen to Matt and Daniel.)
3/30/24, 5:29 AM
Keep up this amazing story premis. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes
3/30/24, 5:18 AM
Right to the point. Loved it!
3/30/24, 2:41 AM
Take a little longer. Your writing is good. People will appreciate longer chapters! Hot story!

3/30/24, 4:10 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you, I will take time to write longer chapters for you guys, and I will try to sync the other websites I post this on (except patreon who'll read it the minute I'm done writing) so online publishes might get delayed from time to time. I will try to make it fair for everybody tho and in the end all The Fates canon chapters will be out and public. Thanks again for the support <3