great story!

Brocurious! Chapter 5 out on my Patreon 😉

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A really good story! Would love to see you write more jps stories. :)

That Calvin Klein ad got my closeted self so turned on and got me off looking at the other famous one in the briefs and the one you posted. It was years later when I found out the name of the model. [Yeah well that's what loving outside the USA on military bases does to your knowledge of current trends, etars, pop culture, etc.] The changing of Johnny's body is a needed metamorphosis where hopefully he can be himself, and stick up for himself as well. Hopefully no more bullying! But its an excellent platform to enact retribution, maybe?

Absolutely amazing climax (both literary and physically) to a fantastic series. Can’t wait to read what happens next! You are an amazing writer with great ideas. This series is exactly the kind of story I was looking for when I first got on this site. I definitely agree that there aren’t enough dumb jock stories on this site, which is why I started writing my own stories here. And thank you so much for the shoutout! I’ll have to dedicate a future chapter of SEXTREME just for you! May I suggest a double penetration scene and/or an accidental sex scene in public (either hidden or caught). Maybe Theo can take his jock(s) on a trip where they get “stuck” again? Maybe a visit to a certain gym? :wink:

I would like to say that I was hoping that this would happen! I like it when the ‘good’ side is still ends up with sex and maybe a little sprinkling of mind control! I can’t fully articulate it, but I just think that with corruption comes with this notion that being gay itself is corrupt. You get the straight man and make him the gay slut it’s like heck yes being gay is sinful and I get that sometimes because society at large likes to view gay people as damned that it can be easier to just “embrace it and own it, Queen!” Mind you, I have read so many corruption stories just because of the mind control and the sex but I always feel a little sad when the ending is “and now the man is corrupted to be gay _and_ evil!” Not to turn anybody down, this chapter simply surprised me, made me tear up just a little. I am from the Philippines, and you still see openly queer people with the makeup and acrylics and the extensions attending Sunday service. Sure, many people tolerate but not outright and ferociously support the LGBT but nobody condemns us for practicing religion openly. So this idea that God outright ordered us to hate gay people doesn’t sink in as much to some people. Our most openly queer media personalities still talk about how strong faith help them where they are. So, works like this, though rare, where maybe the ‘good’ side is just as queer and kinky, makes me excited and giddy and happy! This refocus on “Love” and how sex ought to be an expression of love and passion and not something imposed externally by a corrupting factor but instead should we willed strikes a cord in me. I like how you make the distinction with how Tanner is manipulating and warping, forcing essentially, everybody for HIS own gain, while the Cat’s focus is more on how everybody can be a bit more cognizant and really enjoy the entirety of this expression of love. So, to keep it brief, I am rooting for Blake and the Cat!

I'm aware you mean this story directly as presented, but I can't help but keep reading it with the context of 'what if they're not dumb, and just amusing themselves with it as a cover, while the MC's ....enthusiasm....is something they're controlling him into having.', y'know, the 'control the person who thinks they're in control' trope. Mainly because -wow- the level of dumb. But thanks for writing!

Damn, ive been edging for three hours and it was so explosive. My god, thank you so much for this story dude.

HOT story, and very well written. I love your ideas and your writing style! You definitely have the 'accidental' sex scenes nailed, haha. I'd love to see Theo become even more of a twink, leaning toward a femboy style. I can imagine the three of them going to the mall for sports gear and wandering by a sexy panty display in Victoria's Secret so Theo comes home with his first (of many) panties. Or maybe when Theo's birthday comes around, Jon and Teddy each give him some jewelry that will require him to get his ears and navel pierced, maybe his tongue, too. I'm sure whatever you write will be awesome. Can't wait to read more!!

Top tier content! Thank you for posting this - kinda curious what it’d be like if the dumb jocks meets other dumb jocks that they don’t mesh well with. Like rivalry and stuff haha

I check this story every day and what a reward I finally got! And suggestions you say? Teddy needs to get his dick stuck in Theo's ass, Jon and Teddy need to get their dicks stuck in each other's throats (at the same time even!), and Teddy needs to get Jon's dick stuck in his ass!

So super amazing. Like I much prefer dom top pov but I like how he's in control even as he bottoms, cause they are so dumb. Hehe So sexy. So the only thing I would ask as an add is Theo rimming dumb jock ass. I love pov of rimming. Beyond that, yeah, him getting more cock and ass is fun!

Simply AMAZING

Dude, that was fucking awesome as usual! You surpassed every expectation I had for how Jon would finally figure out how to deal with his horniness, amazing job! Only thing I could suggest forward would be for Jon to figure out how he can "take showers" without wasting too much water because he sweats too much during summer days. Wait until he finds out what roomie can do with his tongue!

Like the other commenters I was all ready to see how this tale ended and then vote you Emperor of the Contest. Well, even without that, this is a superb story - hot, sweet, funny, original, delightful in its big strokes and its tiny details! Clearly this is not your first...read-eo...and whenever we get to find out who you are I'll be searching for all your other read-eos, even if they are friggin' accounting textbooks. You, Sir, are a Writer! I'll be standing outside your virtual window cheering each additional chapter!

I found this story really hot and a brilliant use of the story branching concept. I do prefer less wholesome endings though. I'd love an alternate ending where the guy's expectation of a boyfriend is changed such that they're all okay just treating Xavier like a cumdump piece of meat. Something like "Anyone who fucks a slut likes seeing them dominated by other tops and will make sure the only thing the slut has to think about is pleasing cock with their holes." I like protagonists getting their lives ruined in nasty ways haha what can I say?

This chapter is perfect!! Really, I love the way heaven doesn't mind Father-Son sex so much as it's needed to be rooted in love. I'm very excited to see how this will go. Really do hope Blake can save his father with some loving sex!!!

If his ankles are at his ears, his toes wouldn't be pointing at the ceiling. Speaking from experience.

I need a spin off of these characters. The daddy is so hot

Whew. One of my favorite parts of this chapter is the way you've taken a recently-popularized trend on the site—aka, self-lubricating butts—and done a spin on it that feels distinctive and somehow *intimate*. Like, *romantic* butt-lube... The fact that Carter describes it to himself as 'the lube my body had made *for* my buddy Brook'... Or the way Carter shivers and reacts to the feeling of cold air hitting his lubed hole, and seems viscerally affected by the sensations... Or the way its pheromone-laden scent 'bursts into the air like a spray of cologne' and causes Brook to be even *more* turned on and growly as he's making out with Carter... Butt-lube as eros. I love it. Let me put *that* on my next Valentine card... As other commenters have said, I'm really excited to read the remaining chapters when the contest is over! This story is fantastic, and incredibly fun.

Rules of the Game Players: Nick - Straight/Bi himbo puppy; under Hypnotism D, Curse 1, Curse 2a: oblivious to all rules and players except Darius Darius - Gay Handler; under Curse 2b, avoided Hypnotism S; in control of Nick via Curse 1; knows about Hypnotism, all Curses, and all Players except Deborah (?) Gwen - Computer programmer, responsible for Hypnotism; doesn't know about Deborah or Curses, thinks both Nick and Darius are hypnotized, doesn't know Darius knows; doesn't know Darius and Nick are actually dating Deborah - Goth, responsible for Curse 2; messed up Curse 2, having a breakdown that Darius doesn't seem to be effected by curse 2b; doesn't know about Gwen, Hypnotism, Curse 1 or that Darius and Nick are actually dating May - Unalligned friend to all Players; has experienced Curse 1; doesn't know about any of this Trish: Witchy Referee responsible for Curse 1; "fixed" Curse 2 will undo everything but Curse 1 in a year; knows all the Rules, doesn't care about the Players Rules: Curse 1 - Cast by Trish to get a good fucking; when Nick and a girl are mutually attracted to each other, they go into "The Zone" and start mindlessly fucking each other; despite what she says, has many consent concerns, such as almost causing a fuck session in the middle of the airport and causing this whole misunderstanding based mess in the first place; also gives a dude Nick trusts ultimate control/veto power over him Curse 2 - supposed to drain muscle from Darius (b) and give to Nick (a) when a orders b around; was accidentally draining muscle from all dudes (fixed); makes b give into a's commands Hypnotism - makes D into an Alpha Douche King who orders everyone around, and S into a subby bottom; D is currently effecting Nick, S is not effecting anyone (intended for Darius) Twue Wuv: Darius has feelings for Nick independent of all of the above, Nick was under Curse 1 when he asked Darius to date him I think that's everything? PS: I'm going to miss Nick's muscles ☹️

The intertwining approach of past and current is so fucked up but it works. Like talking about your childhood while having sex kind of fucked up, but it does justify(?) coach's thought process. And that he thought Luke would be his son in law... awww. One thing though, I did not expect Coach to be such a level-headed and coherent person. He's also a lot younger than I expect, in the way he speak (read: the way this chapter is written), but it also feel distinct from Luke's (read: previous chapters), which is drown in clueless-ness and lust. Might just be stereotyping, but when I think of coaches (or any father figure) the first thing that comes to mind is "incapablility of articulating thoughts in the way they think should be expressed". Maybe bc he's a single father? Or maybe he's just not a stereotype. Kinda refreshing, but also make me feel guilty of thinking of him that way.

Always great to see a new chapter. Things are really heating up now. Nice reveal that the fight was never really between the families having sex or not but rather abuse and care. It is a bit sad that the uptight religious values that Peter has been struggling to uphold does not seem to have any actual relevans with the powers "upstairs". I do wonder how kinky this love based sex is allowed to be. Is it monogami? Will Peters new online friends get to see them have sex on the webcam? Spying on him in the shower was use and abuse but if they both agree to it, then a webcam show might still be in the cards and could teach the other men about the difference between lust and love. Perhaps the guys have already gotten a show if Peter has already managed to put a camera up in Blakes room. I can't wait to read the conclusion.

Omfg man this is heating up to an amazing conclusion

Love this story so much, I've read it multiple times :) any chance we will see the next chapter before the 1-year mark of this chapter's release (April 21st)? Hope things in real life are going well!

in addition to being hot, this is so so charming! i love superhero media, but don't always click with superhero themed porn? this, though, is absolutely perfect, ticks all my boxes. i know you're juggling a lot of plates (and i love all of them, so i won't be disappointed no matter what you put your energy into), but i will definitely be keeping my eye on this :-)

Okay I know this is kinda a dumb thing to fixate on, but I love how you wrote Ig's jealousy of Brook at the start of the chapter. I feel like it's so easy to write jealousy in a way that feels ugly, or possessive. Instead, the way Ig gets jealous (and how he unknowingly reveals his actual tender feelings) makes him feel _more_ lovable. It makes us realize, too, that even with all the sexy smirking and babyboy-ing, he really _likes_ Carter. (And also it's just very very funny how terrible he is at hiding it. And how Mr. Ignacy himself fixates on Brook's _name_, of all things...) I feel like Ig and Carter had such fantastic sexual chemistry in the previous chapter that of course I couldn't help but want more of them. Like, wow! But I was still thinking of Brook and Carter as the "main couple" of the story... up until the opening of this chapter. You managed to get me rooting for a power _throuple_, all from the little jealousy scene alone.

I love this story SOOOO much. I really want it to just continue forever. My heart skips whenever I see another chapter posted. I’m going to be so sad when this comes to a conclusion but dear lord I love it. Excellent work all around!