Recent Comments

4/16/23, 10:05 PM
Great story mate! Congrats.
4/16/23, 12:52 PM
That was fun! I wanna go to that party.

4/16/23, 8:31 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks man, I'm really pleased you're comin' on the journey. Hope you enjoy and DM me or comment on any story for things you'd like to see in the future
Anonymous
8/19/19, 2:42 PM
Excellent. A little more development would make it better. Loved the idea!

4/16/23, 8:30 PM
@Anonymous Hope you enjoy the reworked version to answer your comment from 2019 :)
4/16/23, 6:54 PM
incredible. Exceptional. Amazing writing.
4/16/23, 5:56 PM
This series has a lot of potential so far. The MC aspects have been very downplayed, but sometimes I like it when they are secondary to a story, rather than the focus. Independent of those, this is still a very good story that seamlessly blends found family tropes and poly-adjacent fun around a poignant core of sexual self-discovery. Bravo so far, and eager to see what comes next!
4/16/23, 1:25 PM
I love your stories so much and this new one is just PERFECT! Thank you so much for writing stories in the “dumb jock” genre. These are my favorite stories ever and I will never not want more and more stories just like this one and Brocurious. Can’t wait for more, man!!! Thank you!!
4/14/23, 9:02 AM
Excellent work!I read this three times and noticed that coffee could make the emission of Courage caffeined. Does that also mean Dr D make Courage’s cum ego-altering by spiking his tea and since he drink so much cum that he inadvertently change his own ego(become less evil)?

4/16/23, 2:08 AM
@[goodpuppy](/user/show/10023640) Thanks! Yes, Dr. Darkness sets up his own downfall here by trying to poison Courage with caffeine, not realizing specifically what it does in this universe.
4/16/23, 12:55 AM
Too bad Christian chose the miserable route. I was hoping he could be brave and be honest with himself and Jacob.
4/15/23, 9:55 PM
i love this guy. He is so lovable and gullible. Thanks for the great storytelling.. You really are GREAT

4/15/23, 10:45 PM
Thanks for keeping me motivated I’m happy you enjoy Jake’s character. @[MChicago](/user/show/10024403)
4/15/23, 8:11 PM
Love the story! Can't wait for more!!

4/15/23, 10:44 PM
Glad you love it, can’t wait to write and share more! @[Taylor](/user/show/2690062)
4/15/23, 1:32 AM
A very good start!

4/15/23, 10:43 PM
Thanks for the Feedback!@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171)
4/15/23, 6:19 PM
Wow. You know what? I really loved that.

4/15/23, 8:49 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you! I was unsure about publishing it on this site but your comment already made it worth it.
4/15/23, 10:18 AM
That was a fun ride, thanks

4/15/23, 6:00 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Glad you enjoyed it. There's a stand alone Fantasy Models story coming shortly then I might move to another or maybe new series
Nutiper
4/15/23, 3:38 PM
I love that the nerds' Magneto-helmet protections against Carter's powers are literally just tin foil hats disguised as cultist hoods. Also, the idea that Carter's going to try turning the entire nerd army into enthusiastic self-lubing buttsluts is somehow very funny to me. That's right, nerds! Sublimate your misguided rage and aggression at the world into enthusiastic power-bottoming!! Aah, brings me back to my college days...
4/15/23, 12:27 AM
I’m so happy to see you continuing this. I love Ig, Brook and Carter, and love the tension between the three of them. Fantastic characters.
4/14/23, 10:48 AM
Great story!
4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!
4/13/23, 11:59 PM
The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.
4/13/23, 12:23 PM
Amazing writing. It's electric ⚡⚡

CasualWanderer82
4/13/23, 3:54 PM
@[Test](/user/show/10000638) Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
4/13/23, 12:48 PM
What a FUN WONDERFUL STORY!
4/13/23, 6:09 AM
“Luca” feels like a good name for him.

Martin
4/13/23, 9:06 AM
@[RevivedKelsier](/user/show/10003625) :thumbsup:
Oct 30, 2021
CasualWanderer82
4/12/23, 9:42 AM
This was a wonderful read. Great storytelling. Great characters. My kind of erotica!

Papa Werebear
4/13/23, 8:35 AM
@[CasualWanderer82](/user/show/10035964) I'm very glad you liked the story. If you want to read more, Ursus Major And I Have a blog "The writing bear's cave" . https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com/p/blog-page.html Hope you find more stories there to your liking.
4/13/23, 6:44 AM
Really good! you definitely have left me hanging desperately for the next revelation.
4/13/23, 3:06 AM
What an amazing chapter! It’s full of genuine excitement and surprise twists. And you’re able to do it all without sacrificing the sex scenes. The moment where Carter—an all-powerful sex god—has a flashback to a D&D game is both hilarious and ADORABLE, which summarizes so much of your work. And finally, I really want to applaud just good you are at representing groups that traditionally aren’t seen on this site. You’re one of the best! :)
4/13/23, 2:43 AM
Incredible. This is distilled shaping slut smut and I LOVE it. Pushes so many of my buttons over and over. The old self resisting and the changes sweeping over him and bringing him to a new need. Desperate need and slipping just that little bit further into being a true slut for these guys. I'm only part-way and so wrapped up that I have been neglecting commenting so I wanted to remedy that before I dive under again.
4/12/23, 7:14 PM
This came across as more of a transitional chapter than anything else based upon it's diminutive position (in terms of length and action) relative to what we have received previously. At least, that is my hope as we have been so previously spoiled in this series.

4/12/23, 7:19 PM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) There’s more! Sorry if that wasn’t clear. Waiting till after the contest gave me time to stretch out the story some. Expect more in the days and weeks to come!
Anonymous
4/12/23, 3:44 PM
This is such a fun series, looking forward to more if there's chapters not out yet!
4/12/23, 12:09 PM
That was hot as hell. Knew what was cumming, but loved that lil bro saw
DD
4/12/23, 11:57 AM
Whoops... what's going to happen now?
Oct 30, 2021
4/12/23, 9:10 AM
Some how I missed the end of this amazing story. It really draws the reader in and makes the climax seem obvious-no spoilers though.