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3/31/24, 12:09 PM
Welcome to the site! I'm confident you'll find an audience. People love corruption stories.

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:44 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Thank you so much! I have been following your stories for a long time now, I'm really glad for your comment!
Ab3
3/31/24, 10:58 AM
It's damn hot story... Please continue where william and his Father spread this pleasure to whole world... Peoples resisting in start and falling for it and asking for more

Pcm
4/1/24, 4:42 PM
@[Ab3](/user/show/10036556) I'm really glad that you like the story! And of course, our horny demons will not rest until every man in the King become as depraved and horny manly demons like they are. Currently, I'm planning four more stories for this series based around kinky fantasy scenarios; being taking place during a feast, a tournament, a war, and one big finale. I hope that you will find the rest of the story as enjoyable.
3/30/24, 10:27 AM
Hey dude, this is a nice story, but the amount of basic spelling and grammar mistakes that popped up on the first page.. kinda showed that while you might be passionate about this, there's a lack of attention to detail. That makes the story feel like a rushed out the door, never looked at again draft rather than a sexy work of erotic fiction. And when authors don't do basic checks, it lessens the impact of the writing, takes away the passion and main point of the writing. None of this is meant to be discouraging: run this through a spell checker just once and there's a bunch of small, easily corrected mistakes. Incredibly useful tools are available to all authors, especially if English is not the authors native language. > masterbaiting while smelling his underwear masturbating > feeling ashaed ashamed > stoping his feet on the ground in anger. stomping > Moreover, if that wasn’t enough embarrassing, embarrassing enough > Not only you like to smell Not only do you

Hey
4/1/24, 3:37 PM
Thank you, I have revised a lot of the mistakes, and i have made some minor changes for better experience. They will be available within 48 hrs after my edit is allowed to proceed. Please read once more and share any other ideas i can use for my future work. @[Nipstug](/user/show/10023878)
Hey
4/1/24, 3:36 PM
Hello, Author here.Thank you for reading this and please excuse some of my mistake as I’m still new to writing and English isn’t my first language. (I have revised a lot of them, if you find anymore please leave a comment) Im hoping to continue this with 2 or more stories (one about divulging into the past when they first met). Please suggest some kinks/fetishes that you would like them to do. That’s it, peace out
Anonymous
3/31/24, 6:06 PM
I love how Mike is slowly becoming a whore and still dominates his friends :yum:

4/1/24, 2:25 AM
@Anonymous Mike is a great captain both on the field and in bed. But her fat ass make it inevitable to want to eat those buns :tongue: :peach:
3/31/24, 7:50 PM
I echo the other commenters thoughts. This is becoming my favorite. Its blending hot and sexy and well written story into one. And i also am a sucker for good or happy ending. But a bad ending makes me curious too. Its your choice on how you will post the branching finale but im looking forward to read all the remaining chapters.
3/30/24, 9:16 PM
This story is simply amazing. I'm almost sorry it took me so long to discover it... now for the next chapter (my dick leaking...)
3/30/24, 7:22 PM
Matt you better come back to your boys especially to Jared. I like it that he is more knowledgeable about his powers that he could temporarily control Mark. I cant wait to read the next one. Hope theres no other Hunters coming. (Maybe he could control and add Josh instead so theres no death involvement. But i just hope theres nothing bad will happen to Matt and Daniel.)
3/30/24, 5:29 AM
Keep up this amazing story premis. Really looking forward to seeing where this goes
3/30/24, 5:18 AM
Right to the point. Loved it!
3/30/24, 2:41 AM
Take a little longer. Your writing is good. People will appreciate longer chapters! Hot story!

3/30/24, 4:10 AM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you, I will take time to write longer chapters for you guys, and I will try to sync the other websites I post this on (except patreon who'll read it the minute I'm done writing) so online publishes might get delayed from time to time. I will try to make it fair for everybody tho and in the end all The Fates canon chapters will be out and public. Thanks again for the support <3
3/29/24, 4:54 PM
I tend to be a bit romantic so I like a happy or sweet ending. But that also depends on your definition of dark. Either way this story is my new favorite. Hope we have some chapters to go before the conclusion.

3/29/24, 10:41 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) 2 more chapters until the branching finale (so 4 more chapters to read: 6, 7, and 8a/8b). The real question is: Do I post 8a and 8b on the same day? Or space them out?

3/30/24, 3:33 AM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I think I’ve written and deleted my reply about four times already. I can’t come up with an answer. Maybe if you planned two endings all along then both at once? Otherwise go with your original ending first? Gaaaa!
3/29/24, 9:09 PM
This is funny and hot and so well written! Thank you for sharing this here <3
3/29/24, 3:54 PM
This is great will it continue i really want to see what happens to them
Anonymous
3/27/24, 10:20 PM
Man, that training dildo really fucked Brad in more ways than one, huh This is such a great series and I eagerly await each chapter. You have the perfect blend of hot scenes and great plot! Really want to see where this ends. Do you know or will the characters surprise even you, Naedre?

3/28/24, 12:03 AM
@Anonymous The endings are written and being edited. There is a sweet ending and a dark ending I planned from the beginning. The characters did surprise me a bit, especially in the dark ending. It’s still dark, but I expected someone to end up being evil when they were just human. Only human, yet all the dark stuff happened anyway. I don’t know if that makes it more or less dark.

3/29/24, 3:25 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I'm personally more excited for the bad ending lol. Thanks for another great chapter!
3/29/24, 2:47 PM
Great story u can go anywhere with it, turn them in sex objects
Anonymous
3/29/24, 10:52 AM
I guess the author has given up and abandoned this story. It's a shame, really.
3/29/24, 4:30 AM
❤️❤️🖤🖤❤️❤️
PupBama
3/29/24, 4:24 AM
Keep going! While a familiar trope, these series are always great!!
3/28/24, 6:13 PM
Campus magnum? Idk what that’s about but I would love to see more & where the cards will come & take them maybe it might even interest me to try my own story….who knows. Wanna c it through though
3/28/24, 6:52 AM
Nice. Simple. Let’s see what happen nexts
Anonymous
3/28/24, 6:12 AM
Well written. Enjoyed this very much and hopefully will get to see this game played out!
3/27/24, 5:21 PM
Long time reader, first time commenter - this story is why i read this site. I’ve recently started hooking up with this older couple and I’ve felt some of the way Brad feels here- I haven’t gotten the happy scene Brad enjoys here but I’m really rooting for him. Keep up the amazing work🙏

3/28/24, 12:07 AM
@[BeezingKing](/user/show/2230179) Thank you sir. I have not personally been in a relationship like that, but I have several poly friends who have, so I have witnessed the good and the bad from the outside to try to draw on.
3/27/24, 11:50 PM
I've always loved the straight to gay game stories. I can't wait for more.
3/27/24, 11:04 PM
Reread it and it was amazing.
3/27/24, 9:47 PM
Very good
3/27/24, 7:46 PM
Beautiful. I love when the Bottom is in charge.
3/27/24, 6:50 PM
Me gustaría saber la opinión de lo que piensan de la historia, algo que les quedará de incógnita, que les gusto más, cual culo les pareció que disfruto más, cual trasero o traseros les gustaría probar… o lo que quieran opinar. Estaré contestando los comentarios, sino desean que les responda (lo cual es comprensible dependiendo de la persona y sus gustos) solo deben poner un “*” al final del comentario. Gracias siempre. (Si soy muy perezoso y es el mismo comentario que antes, pero creo que es el que acapara bien todas las partes, que no se note mi pereza) :writing_hand: :penguin:
3/27/24, 6:47 PM
Bienvenidos a la zona de comentario, las nalgas tatuadas del matón de Liam en esta ocasión estarán “sujetando" cada comentario que coloques. :peach:
Ark
3/27/24, 5:02 PM
TFTC