Recent Comments

4/13/23, 5:57 PM
Just read the most recent comment and realized I never submitted a rating. Shame on me. Fixed! Now, the important bits: I too vote for choice 3 but maybe with complications. Like maybe Gerald turns out to be away for a period of time so Noah can’t get in touch right away. Meanwhile Danny is desperate to be fed. I don’t like choice 2, but maybe Noah has to take him to a club or gloryhole so he can get his “fix” until Gerald returns. As far as the dilemma of what Danny shot all over the floor ( and Noah), maybe Noah can collect enough of the residue to convince Danny and get his original personality back. Name? There are several I could suggest. Did Danny have a middle name? Personally, I like Ethan.

Martin
4/14/23, 6:14 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thank you for this input! It's nice to know that people care about this series. I've written myself into a dead end, as I realize that people are not so fond of slutty Danny. Myself included, tbh :) Let's see if I can get out of this again. Thank you for your suggestion!
4/13/23, 11:59 PM
The first part is hot and sad for me. I am curious of the “taken care of” Jeffrey is talking about.
4/13/23, 12:23 PM
Amazing writing. It's electric ⚡⚡

CasualWanderer82
4/13/23, 3:54 PM
@[Test](/user/show/10000638) Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
4/13/23, 12:48 PM
What a FUN WONDERFUL STORY!
4/13/23, 6:09 AM
“Luca” feels like a good name for him.

Martin
4/13/23, 9:06 AM
@[RevivedKelsier](/user/show/10003625) :thumbsup:
Oct 30, 2021
CasualWanderer82
4/12/23, 9:42 AM
This was a wonderful read. Great storytelling. Great characters. My kind of erotica!

Papa Werebear
4/13/23, 8:35 AM
@[CasualWanderer82](/user/show/10035964) I'm very glad you liked the story. If you want to read more, Ursus Major And I Have a blog "The writing bear's cave" . https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com/p/blog-page.html Hope you find more stories there to your liking.
4/13/23, 6:44 AM
Really good! you definitely have left me hanging desperately for the next revelation.
4/13/23, 3:06 AM
What an amazing chapter! It’s full of genuine excitement and surprise twists. And you’re able to do it all without sacrificing the sex scenes. The moment where Carter—an all-powerful sex god—has a flashback to a D&D game is both hilarious and ADORABLE, which summarizes so much of your work. And finally, I really want to applaud just good you are at representing groups that traditionally aren’t seen on this site. You’re one of the best! :)
4/13/23, 2:43 AM
Incredible. This is distilled shaping slut smut and I LOVE it. Pushes so many of my buttons over and over. The old self resisting and the changes sweeping over him and bringing him to a new need. Desperate need and slipping just that little bit further into being a true slut for these guys. I'm only part-way and so wrapped up that I have been neglecting commenting so I wanted to remedy that before I dive under again.
4/12/23, 7:14 PM
This came across as more of a transitional chapter than anything else based upon it's diminutive position (in terms of length and action) relative to what we have received previously. At least, that is my hope as we have been so previously spoiled in this series.

4/12/23, 7:19 PM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) There’s more! Sorry if that wasn’t clear. Waiting till after the contest gave me time to stretch out the story some. Expect more in the days and weeks to come!