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4/23/23, 7:59 PM
There are people willing to edit, if you're willing! I know some people don't want their stories touched though.

4/23/23, 8:05 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I don't mind assistance. More so that I don't really seek out any help.
4/16/23, 8:57 PM
There is a fantastic mind control story here, between the truly boggling grammatical errors and malapropisms. They don't do this story the justice it deserves. Someone needs to edit this, because it's an amazing classic hypnosis piece.

autoDream
4/23/23, 7:38 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Apologies, I usually just spit these stories out in one sitting, and don't really re read or edit. Just like getting some fantasies out into the world. More of an idea person, rather than a writer perhaps. Haha. But I do appreciate that you like the story <3
4/23/23, 11:25 AM
This story about Theo and his roommate is absolutely fantastic!! I LOVE it and I hope there will be a lot of sequels. Maybe there will be some other teammates. Or just Jon and Teddy taking turns during classes in the restrooms. Or Teddy has a game and needs some relive... Or a brother (or - quite naughty - a dad in great shape and with a monster between his legs) during the holidays.... Soooo many opportunities...
Anonymous
4/22/23, 5:33 PM
this story gets hotter and hotter…
4/22/23, 1:17 AM
A lovely start ! Waiting to read the rest soon
4/20/23, 7:14 AM
You really do the best classic hypnotism sex scenes, though this one story I didn't quite get how the induction happened.
4/15/23, 9:05 AM
Congratulations. And thank you. This was an incredible ride and the most creative use of branching paths I've ever seen. To have each path be part of the major story and end result was very clever. Lots of hot sex with a variety of types. Incubus and Gerri definitely win from me. Gerri's comment about just wanting Xavier to be happy melted my little heart. I also love that you had some romance in here and that it ended with a poly finale so everyone can share the love.

4/19/23, 11:45 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) I'm so glad you liked it — thank you for your incredibly generous comments! I had a lot of fun coming up with the 'branching' premise and the way it would ripple out and affect all the Xaviers at once, and I'm really glad it's been working for readers. 😄 Thank you!
4/18/23, 4:43 PM
This is the kind of stuff that turned me gay...
Martin
4/17/23, 9:41 PM
I guess the heavy focus on a straight relationship is putting off a lot of readers here, but your writing is impeccable as you've proven in your other stories. And the sexual tension between the man and the boy is extremely tangible. The ending is really surprising and heavy, I wonder where this is heading. Please don't let the slow reaction on that first chapter keep you from posting the remaining chapters!

CasualWanderer82
4/18/23, 8:45 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you for the boost! I'll post soon. I'm actually really proud of how this story as developed.
CasualWanderer82
4/18/23, 8:42 AM
Thank you ALL for the positive feedback!