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5/17/23, 3:56 PM
What a beautiful, happy and sad story. I urge you to keep it going thru Jacob, casy and Christian's son. Also you could change it a bit so there are more than one immortals souls.
5/17/23, 5:01 AM
So much heart.......

CasualWanderer82
5/17/23, 3:48 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Is that a good thing...? :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
5/17/23, 1:21 PM
This has been a great series.
5/17/23, 2:15 AM
Oh, I have been WAITING for this--and it didn't disappoint. "Twice-told-tales"--the same story retold from multiple perspectives--are among my favorites, but they're very tricky to pull off...and this was PERFECT! Seeing the previous events of the story--the first practice with Coach, the discovery in the bathroom stall, the first time Sammy fucked Luke--from Sammy's perspective, in all of its confusion and longing, completely reshape how we see those chapters. And I love how you paint Sammy with so many dimensions: a fuckboy with a heart, someone motivated above all by love but not afraid of the sexual aspect of that love. Even Anwar gets a bit of development, which speaks volumes about your ability to provide excellent characterization with just a few sentences. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! :)

5/17/23, 2:30 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) “Fuckboy with a heart” oh my god that’s exactly Sammy haha Glad you enjoyed. You’re one of my most enthusiastic readers and you always give great comments, so thank you for that.
Anonymous
5/17/23, 12:54 AM
You knocked it out of the park with this one. Great character work! While the erotic bits were brief and recaps, you still managed to make them fresh and super hot. Can’t wait to see what comes next!
5/16/23, 9:40 AM
Luke has so many people who care about him and not just for his fat ass <3 heartwarming and hot at the same time :) Poor little himbo Luke needs all the support (and fat dongs) he can get
more
5/15/23, 1:53 AM
The passage where Danny puts what he's devised into the chest and expels the rest was one of the most entrancing I've read on here. Part One drew me in and was hot and beautiful, but I'm also loving seeing it move forward with what Danny has dreamed up (and what consequences there might be that even he didn't imagine). This is what he wanted so badly; I imagine any unforeseen twist wouldn't have deterred him. So many things... the way "Hungry" (new name?) gets enough food... the ways Noah could potentially bring him back for the check-in given that spill...or maybe if he can't and it winds up being a long time before Danny surfaces... I absolutely cannot cannot wait to read what's next!!!

Martin
5/15/23, 5:53 AM
@more Thank you! Unfortunately, my life is so busy lately, but I hope I can find the time and the muse to tell more about Danny's and Noah's adventures into depravity...
5/13/23, 10:58 AM
God, I was wondering what this title had to do with the Batman series until I remembered that Bruce _(did)_ go by Matches Malone...

Spandexlad
5/14/23, 4:10 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yep, you got it. Also Dick went by Dan Smith in a, I think, more recent story. Since I was hiding Bruce's ID, I also wanted to hide Dick's so I googled if he had any other alias and that was the only one I found.
Anonymous
5/13/23, 11:59 PM
Please keep writing. Good ABDL stories are so hard to find
5/13/23, 12:13 PM
Please keep this going! Great story
5/12/23, 6:37 AM
Thanks for an interesting story, would like to see this develop further.
5/11/23, 1:40 AM
Absolutely brilliant! You've teased us with more on every front, and gave us one very arousing bathroom scene that was still sweet. Loved the twist at the end, the three of them are growing closer and it's so enjoyable to read. Loved the detail when Cody describes his sexuality as imagining himself as the sidekick!

5/11/23, 2:47 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Well thank you. Cody is so difficult to write because he's such a blend of different viewpoints. Hopefully people are enjoying finding out what is actually going on with the title characters inner thoughts at this point!
Anonymous
5/8/23, 8:18 AM
I LOVED this!! What happens next?
5/8/23, 6:00 AM
This series is upper tier erotica par excelsnt! I am torn between Papi and Achilles as to which i want to suck seed, er, succeed! I look forward to reading the rest of this sex-full frat frenzy! Excellent job! Fantasy within a fantasy; Maybe a fourway with the Escalade Escapees?
Kipper
5/6/23, 3:27 PM
I can hardly wait to read the actual adventures of Little Master Muffet. He was determined to tough it whenever he sat down on anything, but he did love to sit so very much! Though he was initially frightened by the eight long-legged Spider brothers, he could hardly choose which rough fucker had the tastiest curds. The horny young master quickly decided he should combine his love of sitting on stiff pricks, with his desire to taste loads simultaneously. In the end, his tuffet was quite sore, but swimming with whey.
Kipper
5/6/23, 2:06 AM
Poor Theo! He can't go to the cafeteria with two football studs, while jizz is leaking from his jockpussy! Perhaps Teddy could think of a way to push Jon's load up inside Theo. That would be so helpful if he could figure out how to do that. Perhaps his big cock could push that spunk safely inside, so none of them are embarrassed in the cafeteria. Teddy is the best pal Jon or Theo could hope for!
Kipper
5/6/23, 12:03 AM
I appreciate you inviting others to add stories in the dumb jock trope. It's so hot thinking they are unaware they are satisfying their friends lustful needs. We need more guys like that who accidentally shove their meat into a willing hole without intention. I expect you're holding off on actual fucking, but this chapter suffered a bit from the routine of swallowing spunk and eating boypussy until it's sopping wet. It could have used a third character, to break things up, so I hope that's where you're heading.
Kipper
5/5/23, 11:39 PM
So glad you're adding more chapters. I'm already wondering if Billy created Jon's inability to recognize the sexual fever his monster cock brings out in others. If so, Billy is a genius creating a clumsy giant who stumbles cock-first into hot willing receptacles. Clearly, Jon's friend Tommy back home and several others enjoyed his fucking cock whenever he faltered. I'm kind of hoping Billy and Tommy will visit campus, but the clueless Teddy should also spend more time in their dorm room. 😉 I'm not bothered by the mild typos, because it still makes sense and you keep your characters clearly identified. Keep up the great work!
Kipper
5/5/23, 11:08 PM
I thoroughly enjoy this subgenre of the dumb, hung, full of cum dude who simply wants to help a buddy, completely unaware of the predicament which resolves when they both blast a load. Coaxing these gentle studs along in their efforts to ensure a buddy is safe, protected by their massive meat, is a satisfying bond. You do it quite well, and I look forward to the further chapters in their adventures.
5/4/23, 1:56 PM
I’m glad I finally read this! As much of a softie as I am, I think it’s cool that you’re making this setting which is admittedly gritty and ‘redeeming’ a portion of it with this wholesome sexually charged little corner of the world. I’m looking forward to seeing Jack’s cock do its worst to the alpha’s ass.
5/4/23, 1:44 PM
i really love all your stories. i find it so easy to get into the characters. i can really picture the coach. i am not super clear about Joe's appearance yet. His body- yes. but, i wanna know what his face looks like. Also, I love smelling his pubes... that was perfect.
5/3/23, 7:35 PM
So... Now that there's a writers strike, any chance this "reality series" might come back to fill the void? (wink, wink)
5/3/23, 4:32 PM
Goldilocks & the Three Bears. It practically writes itself. :)
mic
5/3/23, 11:21 AM
so fucking hot, love it, more tricking manipulating , would love to have such a roommate, hope he holds the sub in chasity after losing a bet
5/3/23, 3:15 AM
Something new with Matt's power. He just made Rob and Luke fall in love with each other. And i agree with the other commenter, i hope its not a foreshadowing with Jared. Matt and Jared is the endgame couple.
5/3/23, 12:49 AM
It's been so long I was afraid I'd lost the momentum of the story. But no, you brought it back so wonderfully, SQ. I gotta admit, this chapter is bonkers, but I'm still with ya. I keep thinking at the end, everyone is going to be "straight" again except for Cart and Brook who are now going to express their feelings for each other without magic. :)
5/2/23, 6:12 PM
I knew the next chapter would be worth the wait. It doesn't make that time any easier to find out what's going to happen with these characters we have come to enjoy, but so worth it once we get that next installment.

5/2/23, 9:04 PM
@[John Manning](/user/show/241691) Hey, I'm grateful for your patience! Hopefully I can keep up a good pace as we head toward the end of this tale.
5/1/23, 10:43 PM
[@Martin](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/user/show/125990) This romance arc is soo good and sexy I would love to see continue. This is one of the best romantic sex scenes I have seen written in forever.

Martin
5/2/23, 4:32 AM
@[nature1490](/user/show/227325) Unless CasualWanderer82 happens to be called Martin as well, your praise was directed at the wrong person :) But I can only agree to the sentiment!

CasualWanderer82
5/2/23, 8:46 AM
@[nature1490](/user/show/227325) On my behalf and Martin's 😜 thank you. Glad you're enjoying James and Brian's story!