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1/5/25, 12:30 PM
There's so much going on in this story, I'm impressed at how much you've packed into it. It's another one of those where I'm more invested in the characters/plot than waiting for the tfs, which is the highest praise I can give really. This chapter reminded me of the quotation "Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way." Like... wow, poor boys. Particularly fuck Victor's parents tbh, honestly it makes me just root for him/all of them to be happy no matter how they turn up. There were some sweet spots at least, I like Ray becoming more comfortable being gay without having realised that's what was happening really. And some interesting 'lore' stuff this chapter as well, in summary no one has any idea what the hell they're doing which is... promising?
1/4/25, 7:54 PM
Well this just warms the cockles of my heart! Charlie, you should be incredibly proud of the wonderful story you've created and shared with us! So full of character, life, and - yes - juicy jock cake! :drooling_face: Can't wait to see what Luke, Sammy, Mark, and the gang will be up to! I know I'll be eagerly waiting!
1/4/25, 6:08 PM
I'm impressed at how much is going on here and the detail and thought you've put into every strand. Like straight to gay is a um, not exactly uncommon kink around these parts but it's really fascinating how it's playing out here. Them knowing in advance that it's going to happen and dealing with the creeping change of sexuality, I enjoyed the spectrum of attitudes to it, from Yeong's eagerness to Ray's more tentative embrace of it. (Given my proclivities I enjoyed Yeong realising that yes indeed gay guys will enjoy straight guys turned gay jocks and just going for it haha). And of course there's Victor's decay which is very grim to start with but as we progress gets just a dash of sweetness mixed in with the bitterness, particularly given what they all go through I found Victor asking to be next to Liam in the vault quite a touching way to end the chapter. And in general it's sweet to see the support and acceptance the students get from others despite their self-perceptions/self-esteem issues.. mostly. (tell Ms Terrell I hate her smh)
Anonymous
1/4/25, 6:03 PM
More please
1/4/25, 4:42 PM
My life depends on this getting continued
Island Jock
1/4/25, 4:12 PM
Loving this story!
1/3/25, 11:17 PM
This is fast becoming another favorite story from you. Brilliant!
1/3/25, 11:13 PM
great story, i want to read about round 2 with them
1/3/25, 10:23 PM
Brilliant idea for the start of a series, and for the vector of hypno/MC. Love the idea of a collar *making* somone submissive breedable.
1/3/25, 1:33 AM
Awww our little love birds <3 and Luke finally says he's gay :))) took a lot of vigorous fucking for him to get to that conclusion lol When Sammy said that he knew Luke needed his cum inside him I wonder what JPS uses all that cum for 🤔 does it use cum to produce its lube? Is cum converted to energy to feed big jock bodies? Mysteries for JPS scientists lol