Recent Comments

6/13/21, 1:05 AM
Hit me up if you want someone to take an editing pass at the next chapter
6/11/21, 11:51 PM
Grammer could use some clean up, but otherwise you did pretty great! The story is almost entirely erotic. I like the fantasy are massive muscular men being hypnotized by smaller guys! I Hope you write more.
Martin
6/11/21, 9:32 PM
Yes, please let us know how this goes on... how both the boys succumb to their master...
Martin
6/11/21, 9:21 PM
Very promising... I'm really looking forward to read more of this!
6/11/21, 1:29 PM
As much as I like pure smut, this does scratch that itch in me for more of a narrative to make the smut that much more enjoyable! More so, I am obligated to add some applause to the attention to "Master's" cock and the cock trance idea, cock trance is underrated, thanks so much for havin' it!!! can't wait for more!
6/11/21, 12:16 AM
I loved this first chapter and your setup, I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it next!
6/10/21, 7:19 PM
Love the story and with so many places you could go, very much looking forward to the next installment
6/10/21, 12:45 PM
Great start! excited to see where you go next!
6/10/21, 12:40 PM
I absolutely Love the set-up, the thing about cumming out his will is Something I've seen before but this has to be one of; if not the hottest executions of it I have ever seen. Please keep writing this story. I'll be eager to see whatever comes next.
6/10/21, 9:35 AM
hottt. hope you do more.