Recent Comments

6/16/21, 6:41 PM
The Caesar is still relevant! I was expecting him to become a nameless soldier. Nice to see he still has a arc and a purpose. Darius took everyone by surprise! Really interested in how the snake god is going to manage anything. If this story is like part 1 and 2, we're roughly at the mid-way point. Yet, the pharaoh is winning by a landslide for now.
Scott
6/16/21, 5:47 AM
will there be more of this story??? i find it rather enthralling.
6/16/21, 4:33 AM
Great start, hot sensual sex between buds. Gotta read on!
Invisible Potato
6/15/21, 7:39 AM
I realy enjoyed this series, i read it all, was jealous some times, but at the end, i feel like it was more like blessing then curse, I dont like that happy ending, its not earned in my thinking, but i still enjoyed it. Thanks for a ride :)
6/11/21, 3:53 AM
love the x-men, love spinel from steven universe, really hope yoi keep going with this!!!

6/15/21, 4:39 AM
@Hypno_boy The X-Men are one of the biggest fandoms I'm in and yes Spinel from SU was a partial inspiration for the Spinel in my story. Prince Gumball being another. I've already started on Chapter 2. I hope you continue to enjoy it :-)
6/11/21, 2:46 AM
Such a sweet romantic story! I hope that you'll be inspired to write more chapters.

6/15/21, 4:37 AM
@Hypnoguy67 I really appreciate that! Originally this was going to be a purely kink story, but i decided i wanted to build a world within a world with these characters and have an actual ongoing storyline hence the romance aspect. I am very glad you like it and hope you enjoy the chapters i will add in the future :-)
6/11/21, 2:01 AM
really like this hope you can continue and do other things with the x-men especially what ice man or other mutants

6/15/21, 4:35 AM
@RedEnd Hey there! Thanks and as a matter of fact i do have a story in mind for Iceman to have an encounter with Spinel. Chances are it'll involve some tickling and edging. Hopefully, that will be of some interest :-)
6/11/21, 12:05 AM
Nice story. Hope there is more to come.

6/15/21, 4:22 AM
@Jonanator Thank you! and yes already started on the second part!
6/14/21, 5:56 PM
Hey y'all, hope you liked the story! I wanted to reach a firm conclusion, as I see too many stories on here whose overarching stories get snarled up in episodic formats until the author gets bored and never finishes. Hopefully this was a satisfying conclusion, I'm a sucker for a happy ending. :)
6/13/21, 2:18 PM
Hey, I think the story is good, but the formatting really through me off. It kind of looks like things got screwy maybe when it was copied and pasted. It was tough to read. If you can switch the bullets and dashes for quotations, it would all the difference.

6/13/21, 2:31 PM
@The Influencer Thanks for the heads up, let me see what I can do.