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7/1/21, 7:48 PM
hotttt. I so love this story.
Anonymous
6/30/21, 11:09 PM
Hope some real personality changes happen. Like language change and more coarse or swearing since he seems like such a good boy, maybe things like smoking cigarettes stuff like that, things that really change who will has been

6/30/21, 11:19 PM
Yes, actually in the next chapter he will get a very different personality.
6/30/21, 5:36 PM
hotttt. Hope there is more to come.

6/30/21, 9:27 PM
@Jonanator as the corrector of the translation, I can affirm chapter 3 is on the horizon. And that Math_Reez and I are very happy you find that chapter hot.
boi98229
6/29/21, 8:18 AM
Very nice! i'm a sucker for a happy ending too, but happy and so kinky as well, that's a real winner!! Master is exactly the kind of Master i would love to find. It is fine to fantasize about being abducted, tortured, and used like a real slave, but in the end i know i want something akin to what Robin has found with his Master. At the very least it is a wonderful story! Thanks.
boi98229
6/29/21, 7:32 AM
Wow! So so hot, so thrilling yet so subtle. In a big way the subtlety added to the thrill. i'm still not sure quite how Robin's mind was swayed. i'm still not entirely sure he was controlled to any extraordinary degree, and yet somehow i know he must have been. i expect i am just as confused and enthralled as Robin. Like Robin, all i can do is accept Master's hospitality and go on. Just before i go though, i wish to thank you for the magical way you conjure magical stories. ;)) ~david
6/29/21, 5:41 AM
Fascinating perspective and an intriguing development! I'm excited to see where you take this next!
6/26/21, 5:37 AM
this is great hoping you can continue it and make it more perverse in the follow ups.

6/26/21, 5:43 AM
@Hypnobot - it has its turns... the next one is more into romance... but after that things will change...

Anonymous
6/28/21, 6:19 AM
@Math_Reez 💙 Puedes escribir la nueva historia sobre el padre y sus hijos?
6/27/21, 4:21 PM
Really enjoying the beginning of the story. Already read it in Spanish, so I know where the first part is going, but I will be reading it again on GSS because I really like this story.

6/27/21, 7:24 PM
@BobbyBlobfish - glad you like it, and thanks again with all your help with the translation :3 💙💙💙
6/27/21, 1:30 AM
This was a great start. I also liked how Mike did it to get one over Will rather than for some sexual purpose - which allows the 'brother' to be the one to make it all the more fun. Honestly, taking advantage of something someone else did is a really fun element and so thumbs up on that. I look forward to seeing where and how this progresses and the nature of the changes that Danny puts into Will. Also I am really glad that the pov is the controller and I hope that Danny is a top rather than a bottom (and maybe he can rim Will as well, hehe). Also the potential for Mike to be hypnotized somehow as well could be fun. But yeah good story, thanks for posting it.
6/26/21, 9:56 AM
Can't wait to see more. Would love if we can get a comeuppance on Mike and really make him pay.