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7/4/21, 4:18 PM
i really enjoy this story i even have a twisted idea for it hahaha but. still looking forward to the continuation of this.

7/4/21, 4:22 PM
@Hypnobot - mmm... you make me wonder about it... please let me.know... maybe I can add it to part 2 of this

7/4/21, 4:23 PM
can i ask for your email i will send it there if you want @Math_Reez 💙

7/4/21, 4:24 PM
nvm saw it above will be sending it there though @Hypnobot

7/4/21, 4:28 PM
@Hypnobot - ok, looking forward for that :) thanks for sharing 💙💙💙💙

7/4/21, 4:40 PM
its sent already and you can reas it, hope you like it. btw when will the next part be out?@Math_Reez 💙

7/4/21, 4:50 PM
@Hypnobot - mmm... didn't get it yet... :/ please check you write the address right: comar_91@hotmail.com ... and right now I'm working on the translation of part 1 of this series (this point is the half, still pending chapters 4-6, so I guess that should be done in the next few weeks... and currently working on chapter 1 of part 2, and I will try to post both (spanish/english) chapters together... so maybe you could see that in a month... maybe? hope the wait is no too long O.o

7/4/21, 4:53 PM
yup correct email address and sent . so i guess i will be waiting for the continuation for quite some time. hahahah but still gonna w8 for it. try looking for an email named goodejj677@gmail.com @Math_Reez 💙

7/4/21, 5:03 PM
@Hypnobot - not sure why is not coming, I send you something to that address so you can reply... i don't know why I don't get your original emal.

7/4/21, 5:05 PM
replied to it @Math_Reez 💙
7/4/21, 1:42 PM
I hope you write more Warehouse stories!
7/4/21, 12:48 PM
Thank you so much for deliver this piece of fantasy out of this world. I just found out your page this morning and decided to read all of the chapters. I love every details that you portrait the characters, especially Willem of how complex his thought and personality. Can't wait for the new sequel and all of your works in the future. Thank you for giving the readers such a fascinating experience!
7/3/21, 1:10 PM
I really enjoyed the twist toward the end and that it turned out not to be a "bad end" despite this being in the revenge genre! Nicely done!

7/4/21, 12:11 PM
@time.to.occur yeah at the end of it all I figured Ollie wouldn't be so cruel as to like, leave them disgusted and horrified at being cursed. He wants them to suffer but then he wants to fuck the hot guys that have been bullying him for years. Maybe something for a follow-up story!
7/3/21, 2:03 PM
Awesome story!

7/4/21, 12:10 PM
@Cutlerfan thanks man! I really appreciate it! :-*
7/4/21, 8:47 AM
Well done bro. Good pacing throughout and the ending was a pleasant surprise!

7/4/21, 12:09 PM
@Ruffcub thanks man! I was worried that the beginning was hanging a little but I wanted some characterization before the curses took effect. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
7/3/21, 6:58 AM
What a great story! I absolutely love that Levi's foreskin grew back. Wish that could happen in real life! Lol

7/4/21, 12:08 PM
@Freckleman64 yeah there's a little wish fulfillment in there haha! Glad you enjoyed!
7/4/21, 5:13 AM
please continue
7/1/21, 7:48 PM
hotttt. I so love this story.
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6/30/21, 11:09 PM
Hope some real personality changes happen. Like language change and more coarse or swearing since he seems like such a good boy, maybe things like smoking cigarettes stuff like that, things that really change who will has been

6/30/21, 11:19 PM
Yes, actually in the next chapter he will get a very different personality.