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7/10/21, 1:37 PM
I love this story concept, but the end of this chapter feels sad :(

7/11/21, 8:25 PM
@RikuS Just wait, it all will be okay at the end.
7/6/21, 5:20 AM
I think I know who this is. Did you participate in the Halloween 2020 contest? This was great. It gave me the cellar of the "Cabin in the Woods" image with the "Friday the 13th - the series" feels. I really enjoyed this and hope that there will be more stories from this. Good Stuff!

7/6/21, 1:10 PM
@Redneck Cubby I think I described this as "Cabin in the Woods but a karmic justice fantasy" when my boyfriend asked what I was writing! I'm glad you enjoyed!

7/7/21, 2:32 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) So So Good. I totally got it. I picture myself grabbing the sheriff badge hanging from the fishing line. Unless a pair of Motor Patrol Boots fall out from somewhere. 😉 You are one of my top 3 so far. I'm reading everyone's entry just to be fair Please continue this somehow.
7/6/21, 11:06 AM
really loved your writing!! everything felt super well paced and steamy with a nice dash of spooky! wish i could find a cursed teddy bear 😅 i really appreciate the happy ending and i hope to read more of your stories!

7/6/21, 10:16 PM
@oxly Thanks man! I was worried it might be dragging in the front but I'm really happy with how it turned out in the end!
7/4/21, 4:18 PM
i really enjoy this story i even have a twisted idea for it hahaha but. still looking forward to the continuation of this.

7/4/21, 4:22 PM
@Hypnobot - mmm... you make me wonder about it... please let me.know... maybe I can add it to part 2 of this

7/4/21, 4:23 PM
can i ask for your email i will send it there if you want @Math_Reez 💙

7/4/21, 4:24 PM
nvm saw it above will be sending it there though @Hypnobot

7/4/21, 4:28 PM
@Hypnobot - ok, looking forward for that :) thanks for sharing 💙💙💙💙

7/4/21, 4:40 PM
its sent already and you can reas it, hope you like it. btw when will the next part be out?@Math_Reez 💙

7/4/21, 4:50 PM
@Hypnobot - mmm... didn't get it yet... :/ please check you write the address right: comar_91@hotmail.com ... and right now I'm working on the translation of part 1 of this series (this point is the half, still pending chapters 4-6, so I guess that should be done in the next few weeks... and currently working on chapter 1 of part 2, and I will try to post both (spanish/english) chapters together... so maybe you could see that in a month... maybe? hope the wait is no too long O.o

7/4/21, 4:53 PM
yup correct email address and sent . so i guess i will be waiting for the continuation for quite some time. hahahah but still gonna w8 for it. try looking for an email named goodejj677@gmail.com @Math_Reez 💙

7/4/21, 5:03 PM
@Hypnobot - not sure why is not coming, I send you something to that address so you can reply... i don't know why I don't get your original emal.

7/4/21, 5:05 PM
replied to it @Math_Reez 💙
7/4/21, 1:42 PM
I hope you write more Warehouse stories!
7/4/21, 12:48 PM
Thank you so much for deliver this piece of fantasy out of this world. I just found out your page this morning and decided to read all of the chapters. I love every details that you portrait the characters, especially Willem of how complex his thought and personality. Can't wait for the new sequel and all of your works in the future. Thank you for giving the readers such a fascinating experience!
7/3/21, 1:10 PM
I really enjoyed the twist toward the end and that it turned out not to be a "bad end" despite this being in the revenge genre! Nicely done!

7/4/21, 12:11 PM
@time.to.occur yeah at the end of it all I figured Ollie wouldn't be so cruel as to like, leave them disgusted and horrified at being cursed. He wants them to suffer but then he wants to fuck the hot guys that have been bullying him for years. Maybe something for a follow-up story!
7/3/21, 2:03 PM
Awesome story!

7/4/21, 12:10 PM
@Cutlerfan thanks man! I really appreciate it! :-*
7/4/21, 8:47 AM
Well done bro. Good pacing throughout and the ending was a pleasant surprise!

7/4/21, 12:09 PM
@Ruffcub thanks man! I was worried that the beginning was hanging a little but I wanted some characterization before the curses took effect. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
7/3/21, 6:58 AM
What a great story! I absolutely love that Levi's foreskin grew back. Wish that could happen in real life! Lol

7/4/21, 12:08 PM
@Freckleman64 yeah there's a little wish fulfillment in there haha! Glad you enjoyed!