Recent Comments

Apr 4, 2017
8/14/21, 2:14 AM
This story is really something. At times I wasn't sure where it was going and I certainly was unprepared for where it ended up but the characters and storytelling were genuine - Both Roger and the narrator have faults but importantly they have redeeming qualities and that's what really hooks me as a reader.

8/15/21, 4:25 AM
@amul I really wanted this to be a story about a man who is sincerely trying to make the young man better, and to join with his lost love in the best possible way. Not a death of personality, but an enhancement though joining. It really should go over to the new Cupid site, I think. Most of my stuff probably belongs there.

Martin
8/15/21, 6:08 AM
@Papa Werebear You can simply use the edit function to publish any of your stories on Cupid. Just select it as an addition publishing site!
8/14/21, 2:34 AM
You're a gifted writer. The personality merging that you write about in your stories has a completely different tone from everyone else's mind control stories. I hope you write more stories that explore this theme.

8/15/21, 4:28 AM
@amul It's how I like to write merging. Mutualism rather than parasitism.
8/14/21, 3:25 PM
Please give these boys a happy ending.

8/15/21, 1:21 AM
We'll see @amul! :)
8/14/21, 11:08 AM
Wow! What a chapter! Your skill in characterization extends to the other people in the story, I see (I love Eric's passive-aggressive commentary). Plus the sex scene in the car was achingly hot. I love the hints of magic and mystery in the tale, too. 10/10 all around! :)

8/15/21, 1:20 AM
Thank you so much! @Feed Your Head
Aug 12, 2021
8/14/21, 11:33 PM
Wish I was the guy rimming. hehe Honestly, good stuff!
8/13/21, 5:55 AM
Thanks for all of the comments guys! They're all greatly appreciated. I'll be uploading Part 3 tonight!
8/12/21, 10:50 AM
This is the sweetest, cutest thing!
8/11/21, 7:50 PM
All the previous comments are dead on. Can't wait to see where you take the story.
8/11/21, 12:33 PM
Came for the smut, staying for the story!
8/11/21, 10:47 AM
I totally agree with Amul! You're amazing at telling the story and getting me invested!