Razz, you are allowed to crosspost this story on GSS if you want to. Soren Fitz has done the same. The demon does qualify this as far as I'm concerned.

cannot wait for more!!

Amazing!

That's just so romantic, it should be posted on gaycupid, too!

Absolutely in love with this series. The slow-burn is perfectly paced and the writing is exceptional. I can't wait to hear about how the boys' fathers get integrated into their group, even if it's just through them relaying their experiences at home to each other. Also hoping to hear about one of Pastor Pete's initially guilt-ridden but ultimately explosive masturbation sessions with his big dong!

hot so far. can't wait for more.

Really enjoying this story! Found this chapter to be especially hot.

Loving the progression so far! Excited to read more

... What? Guess I needed to wait this chapter. Your chapters 2, pffffieewwww. They tend to introduce a shit ton of stuff to open. 1) Putting mind control, given the fact this site is still a spin-off of a mind-control porn site, is interesting. Not sure how we are supposed to take it. Probably more horrifying than some will take it (I read things on GSS or Tumblr. I don't think you wanna know). But, okay. You continue to show a lot more ideas that seems better thought-out than in "The prince and I", which was suffering, as stated before, of questionable stuff that led nowhere and things that came out too late. Here, the hypnosis could have come out in the first chapter if he received messages from his parents (should have, probably, even.) but it's nicely done. It seems in character (except the whore part. I hope this get explained. Maybe simply sold to women.). 2) But I must confess with the beginning of the chapter, what I'm used to read, I was expecting Ahmed to brainwash Zane. Maybe he'll take advantage, maybe not. Your story is your own, and my curiosity was sting (French expression. I'm interested.) on what the brainwash element add to the mix. 3) However, as soon as I read "Father's good slut", I almost facepalm. I wasn't there to comment during the writing of the previous part and so you didn't have a block of text about questionable tropes to hold with precaution. But, WHY IS THIS THE THIRD STORY WITH THE ROYAL LEAD SAVING THE COMMONER FROM A SEX-RELATED SITUATION??? I don't read a lot of Harlequin and co, but is this a massive tropes? A relationship can be build without a partner needing to get away from his home and being near-dependent on the other. Especially when the one who is taking care of the other has a much higher position. This is filled with power unbalance. Also, we are definitively reaching sex assault and abuse as a tool for easy drama. =(=(=(=(=(= 4) Also, something I didn't comment on for a while. Your writing. It's getting better, slowly but surely. The phrase are better built, there is a style that his starting to be defined, I notice less errors, and they are much more minors. The only issue still present is how fast everything happen, but you seems to be interested in short chapters so I can get over it (and I don't like long stories, so I'm not complaining). =)=)=)=)=)=)=)=)=

Oh, I like the idea. The "commoner meet royalty" is really cliché and your at your third story, but this is not the most common set-up for the role. The relationship... i would say Zane changes his mind fast, but it's not too distracting for now. I do say THANK YOU, this feels a lot less like a "love at first sight" situation than the previous one. For Jae and Kai, there was a previous relationship, but Kai wanted him without having met and Jae had a love than went from 5-10 to 90 in a rape save. Austin and Cole it was hard to buy. Here, there is attraction, but it's not love yet. (or I should read chapter 2 first and it's gonna be speed).