Loving this! The imagery was vivid and enthralling. I like how Trey's hold on Chui is continuing to escalate in a way thats certain to take him by surprise soon. Hoping to see Chui even more helpless and brainwashed as his body opens up and accepts Trey as its owner. Can't wait to see what's next!

Oooh, I really enjoyed this! Very sensual and descriptive, without losing any emotion.

I kind of hope for an ending where the world is put back to normal. Maybe thanks to the black suits or the shawled ladies, but somehow Sam and Gabe lose control of the book and the world goes back to how it was before they got their hands on it. But thanks to their own edits to safeguard them, the changes made to them cannot be reverted. So while the world returns to normal, Sam and Gabe (and maybe Marc?) remain these sex-beasts and of course no one finds it unusual in the least. Only the boys remember something is off, but are helpless to fix it. I dunno, I both wish and don't wish for an ending like that.

What....Oh man you got me on my seat here. I need more.

OK, so ... Charlie used to be a human who got cursed by this lady? He is a lot nicer and happier as Charlie. He's immortal?! It sounds like he can die (and just did) but the curse just brings him back to keep him suffering. Decades?! Eternal?! How old is he?! Sounds like he got sent back in time too or something. Getting real Beauty and the Best vibes now. The laptop was a brilliant idea, and a funny scene, that would freak me out too...

Really enjoying this story! I love that you "threw us a bone" as to Charlie's backstory and a hint to the cause of his doggy transformation. Looking forward to find out more about Charlie and what happens to Brett in the next chapter.

Ooo, some backstory to Charlie! Looks like he has some karmic bills to pay. Im really enjoying this story.

Not sure where you're going, but I'm in for the ride.

Hey, glad to see the story is still going strong. Allow me to say as a person who has legit WIRED nipples and also gets super turned on by playing with guys similar to myself, that tutoring scene was amazing! Feel free to keep it coming though at this point writing Sam's sex scenes might be getting more a more like juggling with all of his erogenous zones lol Predictions: 1. Given the recent texts from TylerXXL, I would guess that he's still a student. Previously had the book but maybe a roommate donated it back to the campus bookstore without asking. Per previous edit he can't know about the textbook, BUT, he does apparently still have a "monster cock" that everyone wants to ride and heard Gabe, and possibly now Danny, raving about how good Sam is at sex and wants a go himself. 2. I predict given Danny's newly "obsessed" status with Sam's nipples, we'll be seeing more of him, and hopefully some more nip action. I also anticipate that since he and Tyler don't really have a reason to consider Sam's feelings like Marc and Gabe, they'll be working much harder to legit top him. Maybe a certain superhero will need to come to the rescue? 3. Speaking of, with the latest edits, I came up with an idea of Marc's Kryptonite... being topped himself. When presented with a dick larger than his, or a bigger alpha attitude, he turns into a helpless bitch in heat, maybe even to the point of some S&M mind control play. Story implications could be Tyler using this against Marc who will automatically want to ride his dick and therefore become powerless (or a power bottom) and Sam, having "the perfect tool for the job" will be the only one who can break Marc out of Tyler's trance... only for Marc to fuck himself silly on Sam of course ;) I could even picture them having to figure out how they need to fuck each other simultaneously to get around Marc's weakness (possible given how Sam now also has a magic dick) and to satisfy Sam's urges. 4. Given the athleticism equating to sexual activity, I predict all the guys on campus are suddenly going to be MUCH more muscular/athletic which seems to really do it for Sam. In particular, I foresee now upper class men Teddy and Freddy completing there change from freshman twinks to hung studs who continue to proposition Sam in a fun/casual sort of way, possibly making him even more distracted and prone to rushed edits. 5. Still struggling a bit with the suits but given the scene at the comic store I can at least feel confident saying they are NOT a result of an edit and instead can be attributed to the greater powers at work along with the female staff (on the opposing side obviously). I will say I think I would have enjoyed reading the last 2 chapters together as it was originally drafted since the first one by itself felt unfinished compared to the previous chapters, but that's just my 2 cents. Again, keep up the awesome work!

interesting story. can't wait for more.