Recent Comments

10/1/21, 7:47 PM
great start, can't wait to see the "gift" Jimmy gets and what he does with it
9/30/21, 9:06 PM
Very good. I like the potential here. Dom/sub ethics in BDSM is such a ripe topic.
Anonymous
9/30/21, 11:30 AM
Woof! Charles was quite the dog, wasnt he. Going in raw like that, he sure deserved what he got.

9/30/21, 12:06 PM
Can't keep treating everyone as if they're beneath you without expecting someone at some point to snatch the lead away from you. But do you think he's really learned his lesson?

9/30/21, 12:06 PM
Can't keep treating everyone as if they're beneath you without expecting someone at some point to snatch the lead away from you. But do you think he's really learned his lesson?

Anonymous
9/30/21, 2:15 PM
@HunkLover Honestly, with how Charlie acted towards Brett, Id say he still has some ways to
9/30/21, 12:11 PM
What next!? Is he dead? What's going to happen now??? So many questions. Can't wait for the next part.

9/30/21, 2:11 PM
@Jonanator All will be answered! Stay tuned, and thanks for your continued support!
9/29/21, 10:27 PM
I loved the way you told the story in this chapter, alternating between the present and Charlie's past. Is there more to come?

9/30/21, 10:04 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Oh, we're not quite done yet! To be honest, I wondered jumping between time periods might be confusing for the audience, but I guess and I hope it wasn't! I'm happy you liked it.

9/30/21, 12:14 PM
Looking forward to more, @HunkLover. Thanks for writing such a great story.
9/30/21, 6:18 AM
This has been such a wonderful story

9/30/21, 10:03 AM
@GiveInToTheMusk Thank you so much! I'm so glad people are enjoying it!
9/29/21, 11:34 PM
Hmmm, as they get closer to each other and share intimacy, I'm beginning to wonder if the same power that turned Charlie from dog to man or vice versa, could start to work its magic on the narrator. This is a delightful story and very well written character-wise.

9/30/21, 10:03 AM
Hmmm, @PupScout... you certainly raise an interesting idea.. but I won't spoil the story for you by giving away any spoilers. Thank you so much for your kind words - I've really enjoyed writing it!
9/29/21, 9:09 AM
Loving this! The imagery was vivid and enthralling. I like how Trey's hold on Chui is continuing to escalate in a way thats certain to take him by surprise soon. Hoping to see Chui even more helpless and brainwashed as his body opens up and accepts Trey as its owner. Can't wait to see what's next!
9/29/21, 12:06 AM
Oooh, I really enjoyed this! Very sensual and descriptive, without losing any emotion.
Anonymous
9/28/21, 1:27 PM
I kind of hope for an ending where the world is put back to normal. Maybe thanks to the black suits or the shawled ladies, but somehow Sam and Gabe lose control of the book and the world goes back to how it was before they got their hands on it. But thanks to their own edits to safeguard them, the changes made to them cannot be reverted. So while the world returns to normal, Sam and Gabe (and maybe Marc?) remain these sex-beasts and of course no one finds it unusual in the least. Only the boys remember something is off, but are helpless to fix it. I dunno, I both wish and don't wish for an ending like that.