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10/13/21, 5:24 AM
An interesting plot twist.

10/13/21, 5:29 AM
@Cutlerfan as long as you don't call me M. Night Ramalamadingdong, we're good. 😂

10/13/21, 6:25 PM
@Uncle Arctos No, I like a bit of a twist but nothing as extreme as M. Night's work.
10/13/21, 1:50 AM
Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

10/13/21, 5:16 AM
@amul Ass to a 500 lb Whit and going to work, well when you're high on that muscle growth you don't think about reality even if you should. Let's just say the medallion is fulfilling their desires and maybe the rush of getting everything you want has them a little addled. How many bad decisions are made when you're high on something because you thought it was a good idea at the time? Fear not gentle readers all will be revealed.

10/13/21, 10:01 AM
@Uncle Arctos Well yeah, I probably would offer my ass to a 500 lbs. Whit. I'm only human, after all. ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/12/21, 9:19 PM
Awesome story,hope there's more.
10/12/21, 2:29 AM
Very nice story. No matter how much a cunt Charlie was in his past life, I can't tolerate the idea of cursing someone to turn into a dog and having their only thought be "I'm a bad dog". That fucking broke my heart.
10/12/21, 12:48 AM
The term "fuckboy" is anachronistic for the period you portrayed here. I know you're playing in a slightly adjacent alternate universe. I just provide this information as an FYI. It's a good idea to nail down little dialogue details like this when you are going to time jump a story. It can really help sell a jump, or possibly confuse it. Almost all of the curse words that we use now existed in the 70s, 80s, and 90s but people used them less. The further back you go the less frequently they were used and the more shocking they were to the ear.
10/12/21, 12:35 AM
The dog arguing through the kids toy was hilarious but from the perspective of the barista it would have been terrifying. Also, intelligent people take it seriously when a dog communicates (through available means) that they do not like you.
10/11/21, 11:15 PM
What a great pup story. Most, if not all, dog transformation stories are against their will (not complaining). However, you broke that mould by telling a perfect story of transformation and romance, tender but also dark with Charles' past human side. It ended beautifully. 5 Woofs.
10/11/21, 3:43 AM
Damn! This story had me hard right at the beginning! Excellent descriptive writing, Sir. Your attention to detail draws you into the story and keeps you there, lusting for more. I read on for more hairy muscle domination.....
Anonymous
9/25/21, 11:43 AM
waiting for sam and marc have more moments together

9/25/21, 8:35 PM
They get some scenes in the next chapter! @

10/9/21, 7:54 PM
Yay!!!!@bluesuedewho

10/11/21, 12:32 AM
@bluesuedewho yesssss
Anonymous
10/9/21, 6:06 PM
Was just reading this again and this is insanely hot! I can't stop reading it. The way Tanner corrupts Pastor Peter gets me going every time I come back to it.