Recent Comments

11/14/21, 11:11 PM
I already told you I reread this earlier, but I just had to leave a comment to express how much I loved your description of Seeders and what the "pregnancy" terms mean in this world. You manage to pack in so much fun along with intriguing world-building!

11/14/21, 11:50 PM
I’m really happy about this! I’ve worked hard in this world for a long time and I’m glad it shows—and that it’s hot, too. I’m glad I’m keeping it fun! @Razz TFs
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
As always, your transformations are so clever and fun! You didn't drag it out or make it overly repetitive; their dynamic really helped keep it fresh the whole time. And I enjoyed the times that you waxed romantic on their relationship dynamic; it really upped the romance factor of the story. This was wonderful!

11/14/21, 11:14 PM
@Soren Fitz you're too sweet!! and i can't help but fawn over their relationship. i'm super excited to post the "conclusion" of this little episode at the end of the month
11/12/21, 12:26 PM
that was super hot Martin! love the straight boy control. hopefully our protagonist learns to take advantage ;)

Martin
11/13/21, 8:51 AM
@Mrdick He certainly does, but he has a lot to learn. The second chapter is close to be finished.
11/13/21, 1:40 AM
The timing of that ending is very suspect! The natural development is that dad will fuck him, but I think there's another twist coming.
11/12/21, 7:26 PM
this was soooo sweet

11/12/21, 8:36 PM
@Razz TFs Awww thank you!
11/12/21, 4:17 AM
Beautiful.

11/12/21, 5:34 PM
@Beaner Thank you!
11/8/21, 7:11 AM
You know it's a good story when you check for the next chapter multiple times a day :) (not trying to sound impatient, just a compliment)

11/8/21, 9:21 AM
@italianstalian1987 same

11/8/21, 11:20 PM
Thanks! It's written, just needs another round of editing. @italianstalian1987

11/9/21, 4:04 AM
@bluesuedewho Nutiper and MonsterMash told me to tell you that no edits need to be made :)

11/12/21, 4:14 AM
@bluesuedewho if anything, Sam and Gabe have only shown us how important it is to edit before you publish something :) and so sorry to hear real life has been rough, but hope things are getting better!
11/7/21, 4:09 AM
might not have updated yet as there are still out of place perspective changes. otherwise great story

11/11/21, 4:20 AM
@Human Dragon Fruit I did some more work on it. Thank you and everyone for the feedback.
Martin
11/10/21, 11:06 PM
This has been a very lovely experience. Cute and really well written. A bit long for my usual taste, but I'm really looking forward to the second chapter!

11/10/21, 11:39 PM
I really appreciate that! Thanks for trying it even despite the length, haha. I’m not sure I could have divided it any further without having no-sex chapters, but hopefully people will still read it! (And thanks for advertising mine and Diego Blue’s Cupid exclusives on Spiral!) I hope you enjoy chapter 2. Chapter 3 should come out in a week or two! @Martin
11/10/21, 10:12 PM
Wow, that's another steamy chapter! I didn't expect the outcome action for this family, but l sure enjoyed the vivid description of the depraved yet oblivious tongue-ass intercourse! Please carry on with Tanner's tour around town in corrupting every family in ever more depraved ways...all in the name of improving them! ;) One thought though, seems like the families visited so far are all like broken/trashy. Are you planning on also "improving" the lives of some more clean-cut, well-behaved families...or perhaps some upper class snobbish ones that need some proper "teaching" in manners? Of course, it is up to you to plan out your story as you wish, I look forward to reading whatever you have on mind for the rest of the congregation! ;)