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10/14/21, 11:44 PM
An exciting highly erotic story. This father should join the pastor as a parent rep. in the church boy's club. Hope Tanner continues to influence the behavior of the club members: including group masturbation [led by the pastor], perhaps some 'fun' in the church rest-room, the development of some individual kinks & perversions among the different boy's, heavy exhibitionism, 'piss'-play, extreme size worship & humiliation of the un-hung boy's, etc: lots more heavy swearing, smoking...just total perversion & corruption !!!!!
10/14/21, 9:12 PM
you should do another chapter to this.
10/14/21, 8:14 PM
This story gets hotter with every chapter!
Anonymous
10/14/21, 5:33 PM
This is sooooo hot. The way Tanner corrupts the father and brothers is so sexy. Thank you so much for this great addition to the series.
10/4/21, 3:47 PM
Love this series! I keep checking back since I can't wait for the next part. loving the corruption element and can't wait to see what else is in store!

10/4/21, 4:32 PM
@Kurtis311 Hey, thanks man...feeling a little down about writing in general and this story in particular, and your comment was really well-timed to give me a shot of enthusiasm and self-confidence. Really appreciate it.

Anonymous
10/9/21, 6:09 PM
@S. Q. Neemie Just spent the last few days reading your stories, lol, and I love them! You really nailed what I love about incest and corruption kink.

10/14/21, 1:48 PM
@ Hey, dude, really glad you enjoy them. They've been fun to write. :)
10/6/21, 10:07 PM
Saw you were a little down on this story and a lot of people going anti-Tanner here in the comments and thought I'd drop by and offer some encouragement. I've been a reader of this site for a long time (only have one story written, how do you get ANY writing done when you're turned on?! I'm literally a professional writer and my dick just goes "then just write that they have sex and say the end so you can touch yourself dude" basically every time I try to write a fantasy down) and my favorite stories are the ones that serve as metaphors for queerness. I don't know about you, but I thought I was straight until I hit puberty and my own personal Tanner came along and showed me, over and over, how very wrong I was. This is one of, if not the hottest stories on this site for me. If it was real life, or a non-erotic story, I'd be anti-Tanner too, he's a psychopath. But as fantasy? Let me tell you, I was actually a little disappointed to find out in this chapter that there's ANY sort of chance he loses. I love how he seems to derive power from embarrassment and humiliation, and the way he forces his victims' minds to justify everything he puts them through but lets them keep that nagging sense that something's NOT QUITE RIGHT HERE. The scene where he's got all of the boys kissing and play-wrestling like boy band porn twinks then REMINDS them of how much they shouldn't be doing it is one of the sexiest, most honestly RELATABLE mindfucks I've ever read here. I especially loved how Ethan gave in almost right away, all Tanner had to do was poke at his need to be seen as cool. And that little note of hope in Devon's voice as he hesitantly ASKS Tanner if they can keep kissing in secret? Perfection. So yeah, this is buttering you up a bit, but man I love what you've done with this story so far. And if Tanner has to lose (and he probably does, that "dead wife" comment is a real heel turn, even for an already established villain,) I hope it doesn't happen for a long, LONG (hard) time. And if I could possibly offer one teeny suggestion? I think the sacred circle needs to learn the power of sexing themselves up, wearing more revealing clothes. In public. But that's just a suggestion. I LOVE this story.

10/14/21, 1:46 PM
@SillyBoyz Hey, thanks man, I really appreciate it. I couldn't have written the next chapter without encouragement. Here's hoping it doesn't disappoint!
10/13/21, 5:24 AM
An interesting plot twist.

10/13/21, 5:29 AM
@Cutlerfan as long as you don't call me M. Night Ramalamadingdong, we're good. 😂

10/13/21, 6:25 PM
@Uncle Arctos No, I like a bit of a twist but nothing as extreme as M. Night's work.
10/13/21, 1:50 AM
Whit and Sid are incredibly hot, but mean as fuck and scary. I got a chuckle at the thought of either of them showing up to work as a 500 lbs. hulk - I don't think that's going to fly! I wonder whether Sid will leave Whit as an emaciated zombie or absorb him completely the way Whit was planning to do to him. Of course I feel sorry for their victims, Bobby in particular. Jimmy, well. Jimmy needs to *do something*. Of course this chapter was about Sid and Whit, but so far Jimmy has really just been acted upon. As a protagonist, he's coming off like the Twilight girl. That's assuming he's meant to be the protagonist! Maybe this story is about Sid and Whit - the story did start with Whit after all.

10/13/21, 5:16 AM
@amul Ass to a 500 lb Whit and going to work, well when you're high on that muscle growth you don't think about reality even if you should. Let's just say the medallion is fulfilling their desires and maybe the rush of getting everything you want has them a little addled. How many bad decisions are made when you're high on something because you thought it was a good idea at the time? Fear not gentle readers all will be revealed.

10/13/21, 10:01 AM
@Uncle Arctos Well yeah, I probably would offer my ass to a 500 lbs. Whit. I'm only human, after all. ;-) Can't wait to see what happens next!
10/12/21, 9:19 PM
Awesome story,hope there's more.
10/12/21, 2:29 AM
Very nice story. No matter how much a cunt Charlie was in his past life, I can't tolerate the idea of cursing someone to turn into a dog and having their only thought be "I'm a bad dog". That fucking broke my heart.