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11/12/21, 12:26 PM
that was super hot Martin! love the straight boy control. hopefully our protagonist learns to take advantage ;)

Martin
11/13/21, 8:51 AM
@Mrdick He certainly does, but he has a lot to learn. The second chapter is close to be finished.
11/13/21, 1:40 AM
The timing of that ending is very suspect! The natural development is that dad will fuck him, but I think there's another twist coming.
11/12/21, 7:26 PM
this was soooo sweet

11/12/21, 8:36 PM
@Razz TFs Awww thank you!
11/12/21, 4:17 AM
Beautiful.

11/12/21, 5:34 PM
@Beaner Thank you!
11/8/21, 7:11 AM
You know it's a good story when you check for the next chapter multiple times a day :) (not trying to sound impatient, just a compliment)

11/8/21, 9:21 AM
@italianstalian1987 same

11/8/21, 11:20 PM
Thanks! It's written, just needs another round of editing. @italianstalian1987

11/9/21, 4:04 AM
@bluesuedewho Nutiper and MonsterMash told me to tell you that no edits need to be made :)

11/12/21, 4:14 AM
@bluesuedewho if anything, Sam and Gabe have only shown us how important it is to edit before you publish something :) and so sorry to hear real life has been rough, but hope things are getting better!
11/7/21, 4:09 AM
might not have updated yet as there are still out of place perspective changes. otherwise great story

11/11/21, 4:20 AM
@Human Dragon Fruit I did some more work on it. Thank you and everyone for the feedback.
Martin
11/10/21, 11:06 PM
This has been a very lovely experience. Cute and really well written. A bit long for my usual taste, but I'm really looking forward to the second chapter!

11/10/21, 11:39 PM
I really appreciate that! Thanks for trying it even despite the length, haha. I’m not sure I could have divided it any further without having no-sex chapters, but hopefully people will still read it! (And thanks for advertising mine and Diego Blue’s Cupid exclusives on Spiral!) I hope you enjoy chapter 2. Chapter 3 should come out in a week or two! @Martin
11/10/21, 10:12 PM
Wow, that's another steamy chapter! I didn't expect the outcome action for this family, but l sure enjoyed the vivid description of the depraved yet oblivious tongue-ass intercourse! Please carry on with Tanner's tour around town in corrupting every family in ever more depraved ways...all in the name of improving them! ;) One thought though, seems like the families visited so far are all like broken/trashy. Are you planning on also "improving" the lives of some more clean-cut, well-behaved families...or perhaps some upper class snobbish ones that need some proper "teaching" in manners? Of course, it is up to you to plan out your story as you wish, I look forward to reading whatever you have on mind for the rest of the congregation! ;)
11/10/21, 6:19 PM
your pacing is so tortuously good!!!

11/10/21, 9:47 PM
@Razz TFs I do know how to keep people hooked!
11/10/21, 2:40 PM
You tease! But that was very good timing and you kept the sexual tempo up just right until the crash. I’m looking forward to seeing if Chris can get over this.

11/10/21, 9:46 PM
@Soren Fitz We love a good tease!