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11/14/21, 5:21 PM
Another excellent chapter! The deftness of the writing in the last scene really impresses me. Sam and Gabe chilling for once in bathrobes and Sam acknowledging Marc as his friend was really sweet. And well-paced after all of the hot sex earlier in the chapter. And I loved that Tyler, mentioned in passing in one of the first few chapters, came back into the story. He was such a lazy, hot d-bag. And I loved that Marc had to help Sam and Gabe out in order to resist the spell of Tyler’s dick.

11/15/21, 4:16 AM
Thanks! Credit where credit is due -- Nutiper wrote a lot of the last scene. @MonsterMash62
Anonymous
11/14/21, 2:30 PM
woohoo! so hyped to get to continue this! youve made something great here man!

11/15/21, 4:09 AM
Thanks! Couldn't have done it without help from editors and beta readers! @
11/14/21, 10:50 AM
Definitely worth the wait!

11/15/21, 4:08 AM
Oh, thanks! We definitely put a lot of work into it! Hopefully the next chapter will come sooner. @italianstalian1987
11/14/21, 11:11 PM
I already told you I reread this earlier, but I just had to leave a comment to express how much I loved your description of Seeders and what the "pregnancy" terms mean in this world. You manage to pack in so much fun along with intriguing world-building!

11/14/21, 11:50 PM
I’m really happy about this! I’ve worked hard in this world for a long time and I’m glad it shows—and that it’s hot, too. I’m glad I’m keeping it fun! @Razz TFs
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
As always, your transformations are so clever and fun! You didn't drag it out or make it overly repetitive; their dynamic really helped keep it fresh the whole time. And I enjoyed the times that you waxed romantic on their relationship dynamic; it really upped the romance factor of the story. This was wonderful!

11/14/21, 11:14 PM
@Soren Fitz you're too sweet!! and i can't help but fawn over their relationship. i'm super excited to post the "conclusion" of this little episode at the end of the month
11/12/21, 12:26 PM
that was super hot Martin! love the straight boy control. hopefully our protagonist learns to take advantage ;)

Martin
11/13/21, 8:51 AM
@Mrdick He certainly does, but he has a lot to learn. The second chapter is close to be finished.
11/13/21, 1:40 AM
The timing of that ending is very suspect! The natural development is that dad will fuck him, but I think there's another twist coming.
11/12/21, 7:26 PM
this was soooo sweet

11/12/21, 8:36 PM
@Razz TFs Awww thank you!
11/12/21, 4:17 AM
Beautiful.

11/12/21, 5:34 PM
@Beaner Thank you!
11/8/21, 7:11 AM
You know it's a good story when you check for the next chapter multiple times a day :) (not trying to sound impatient, just a compliment)

11/8/21, 9:21 AM
@italianstalian1987 same

11/8/21, 11:20 PM
Thanks! It's written, just needs another round of editing. @italianstalian1987

11/9/21, 4:04 AM
@bluesuedewho Nutiper and MonsterMash told me to tell you that no edits need to be made :)

11/12/21, 4:14 AM
@bluesuedewho if anything, Sam and Gabe have only shown us how important it is to edit before you publish something :) and so sorry to hear real life has been rough, but hope things are getting better!