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2/10/22, 5:27 AM
You cannot possibly write these chapters fast enough!
2/9/22, 1:28 PM
This is equal parts scorching hot, intimate, and a little heartbreaking! Well done, guys!

2/9/22, 3:22 PM
That was the goal! It was a whole mess of lust and emotions all tangled up, and it was really fun to work with Josh to thread those things through the story. I'm glad it hit. @Dace
2/9/22, 3:21 PM
is his brother doing this just to humiliate him, or is there more his brother wants?
hairyartist
2/9/22, 2:06 PM
Great chapter Man, Thanks!

2/9/22, 2:21 PM
@hairyartist thanks for reading!
Kyle Cicero
2/9/22, 12:43 PM
A great job as usual.

2/9/22, 1:13 PM
@Kyle Cicero thanks man!
Martin
2/8/22, 9:53 PM
I'm a late reader of this chapter... but I have to chime in to add my praises. This chapter is a lot of exposition, but man how much fantasy and creativity is there inside of you. I wonder where you get this from. What it must be looking like inside of your head. Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the final chapter!

2/9/22, 1:13 AM
@Martin Thank you Cap'n, and I appreciate you reading this even though it's not your normal material.
Martin
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
Such a bitter-sweet story. Forbidden love indeed, and it always invokes anger that people had (and still have) to suffer this. Thank you for this great experience. 5/5 for writing and romance.

2/9/22, 1:05 AM
Thanks, @Martin! I appreciate the feedback :)