Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/1/22, 10:35 PM
i never comment on any stories but i cant resist for this one. ive been a fan of your writing from the works you posted on nifty and ever since i discovered it the JPS series has always been top tier. im absolutely loving how this reboot has been going so far and cant wait for the rest. i love the similarities as well as the differences between the original JPS to this reboot. its just as hot if not even hotter than the original already and i love the extra details we establish early on in this one. i really appreciate how naive Luke seems to be in this version and simultaneously how relaxed and openly attracted all the other jocks are to Luke and his "assets". Cant wait for Sammy's actions to open the floodgates for the rest of his buddies and possibly others outside their group. keep up the good work!

SC Walker
3/1/22, 10:41 PM
Thank you so much I truly appreciate such a detailed comment, receiving comments like this really helps motivate me to write. I'm glad you like all the extra stuff I've added, I feel like Luke and Sammy are more fleshed out now. And don't worry eventually Luke's teammates will get a shot at his bubble ;)
2/22/22, 10:49 PM
dying for a new chapter!

3/1/22, 7:56 PM
@Kurtis311 Stay living! It's coming! And it involves a boat, a lawn mower, and a birthday cake.
2/22/22, 9:12 PM
Hi S.Q.Neemie. Any news on when the next chapter is ready? I am anxiously awaiting the next step in Tanners plan and I know others agree.

3/1/22, 7:55 PM
@Lytcom Hey, man, I'm very lucky to have you as a reader. I'm hopeful I'll have the next chapter (well, the next short transition chapter plus a full "story" chapter) up by next week. I've been moving and performing this last month and I haven't had near the time I've wanted for writing. Things are settling down now, though, so I'm hopeful to get back to it. I have the next 7 chapters mentally planned out and now it's just a matter of finding a moment to write. Thanks for sticking with me!
Jack
2/20/22, 8:49 PM
You've gotta keep doing this series, man! It's incredible. There's nothing on GSS quite like it, and I might actually die if I don't read about Devon learning how incredible it is to get fucked by his daddy's massive cock.

3/1/22, 7:52 PM
@Jack Aw, man, thanks! I hope you don't die if you have to wait a while on that specific scene. Next few chapters will focus on Tony's family. Keep reading, though, we're building up to the fucking, I promise.
hairyartist
3/1/22, 1:26 PM
so hot man, thank you

SC Walker
3/1/22, 4:39 PM
@hairyartist You're very welcome!
2/28/22, 9:18 PM
I'm in literal pain waiting on chapter 10, please give us a treat!! Love this story so much ❤
2/28/22, 2:49 PM
That was about as nice of an erotic coming out story as I remember reading, great job! I should hope that I get to attend a latex wedding at some point in my life.
Anonymous
2/27/22, 7:50 AM
im so happy to see this continue. its so good and I love the characters!
swngbthways
2/27/22, 7:50 AM
I LOVE this series! I LOVE there's a GOOD balance of free will ang hypnosis. I LOVE the characters. I just love everything about it. WELL DONE! BRAVO!
2/27/22, 3:44 AM
Please continue!