Recent Comments

5/8/22, 7:29 AM
I love the way you write, I can see it all like I was watching Stanley Kubrick's 2001: A Space Odyssey. Congratulations, this is one of the most intriguing stories I've ever read and I can't wait to see more.

5/8/22, 6:37 PM
@Papa Werebear Thanks man! I really appreciate your feedback!
5/8/22, 3:17 PM
A part of me REALLY wanted Sam AND his two muscle tower friends to get fucked stupid by Mr.Taylor lol
5/8/22, 12:13 AM
Ah, that part did get lost, hiw jack get locked out of the b and b if later chapters say he lived with his mom Then again least of intentionally fuzzy details Small town gay circle of firemen...who fear pda? South is weird. News at 7
5/7/22, 7:05 PM
What a great, great great, story! Love the idea, the characters, the ship design, the sex. Such a great idea and such a great story/chapter. Also I totally like the characters, and would totally enjoy seeing Frank getting fucked. hehe So yeah, great stuff. So cool.

5/7/22, 8:46 PM
@Heru Kane Thanks for the inspiration! Like we discussed on the Discord there's lots of potential in this vein and I'm hoping to tap some! Glad you liked!
5/7/22, 1:51 PM
Not only is the story excellently crafted, but the world building and lore begin to shine. The story is undoubtedly sexy and our protagonist is just such a treat. I liked the shift in focus and that Finn is on the edges but not yet back into focus. The djinn consciousness was a very interesting surprise, but most of all, you started talking in gaming/mmo language and you totally got me there! I hope you continue building this up as it has a lot of promise for fun.
5/7/22, 7:48 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. So happy that you have plans for continuing this story. Definitely enjoyed the exploration of how djinns and their powers work in this universe. I would certainly enjoy a spin-off chapter that explores what other djinns have done if you ever wanted to take a break from the main story-line. Can't wait to see more!
5/6/22, 4:43 AM
Yay! The boys found their place and Jack found how to have fun with toys. And having said that, how fantastic is it that the story evokes such tenderness and brings forth such emotion? In the end they found love in their sharing of themselves in the way that works for them and reality shifts to allow it. Brilliant.

5/7/22, 7:33 AM
@Essex Thank you so much for your continued support! Jack of Hearts of loads of fun to write for sure!
5/6/22, 5:44 AM
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