I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. Axel and Tao are so well-written, and the way you slowly unveiled their world kept me hooked. Also, I really enjoyed the veteran bits - it almost seems like you might have some military experience yourself. I hope you win the cumpetition!

I love your style and I'm eager to see more work from you here. Both of your pieces fit in well with the themes of the sites, your writing is great and the approach is so hot. The bullying wasn't favoured by me either but it very starkly showed how much he was being changed by Dyl. Even if the bullying was just in his head, a memory that wasn't real but informed his new jock powerful-canine self. I am telling myself that his old friends aren't to be trusted either. Little troublemakers, the lot of them. I am sure they'll get detention themselves soon so won't have a chance to experience any actual bullying from him. A totally different personality as well as body. His mind slowed down. The way that was done, by telling him things like how he'd been in detention before because he'd cheated on the test because he's a bit slow like many of his kind. That was awesome. I got the feeling Dyl was trying to pull the right levers and push the right buttons to get Anthony to emerge. Given his comment at the end about finally having it happen it was like he was frustrated with the resistance or difficulty but in the end he won. Almost like they were playing a game of chess with our main character throwing up defenses and pawns and Dyl taking his pieces a different route until... Checkmate. The mind and body transformation totally out of the main character's control was so good. It's also got a great background worldbuilding going on. Questions and potential for the universe. The principal who I suspected at the start was actually the same principal but with a new coat of paint and brain - But we don't have any evidence of whether he's just a regular replacement and the instigator of all this canine takeover or if Dyl was behind it all and got to the head of the school first to smooth the path. The ability for Dyl to change fellow students into different fellow students. This has a (less scary, more hot) feel of the teen movies where aliens take over the school via body control or copying or whatever. I like this version much better. Especially the subtlety of the detention method. Good students convinced it's a mistake, showing up to sort it out and then losing themselves. Will the remaining humans be able to avoid becoming like the others. A life of a canine subservience to Dyl? Let's hope not.

Aaaaa I can't believe it took me so long to read this! It was as beautiful and heartwrenching as I expected. I could feel Clement's pain as I watched Andrew in the club with Brian. The flashbacks you used were just perfect, always right on time, and slowly building up Andrew's past and what led to his feelings today. It pained me that Andrew couldn't vocalise what the actual reasons were that he wouldn't open up, wouldn't share. I also thought that you did a _very_ good job of making this a "lived-in" world as a friend once said to me. You take a bit of time to explain how merging works; you explain some of the consequences—and I can immediately predict how Sergio actually feels about Brian, and suspect that Sergio really dislikes Brian but is stuck with him as with an abuser. (I also have a general preference for transformations like this that are only temporary, so you can build a real, sensible world around them. So that was extra fun.) All in all, awesome worldbuilding, exceptional story, beautiful character development. A smashing addition to Cupid.

This was hot and sexy. Fun story.

I seriously cannot wait for the next part! Love this story! Love the details. So well written!

love this a lot, and really well-written!! looking forward to reading more from you :>

I loved it. I like furry stuff. I feel like it's just missing some knotting. I will say though that bullying is a turn off for me.

Not into the furry elements, but when I tried to ignore them, I thought this was a well-done jock transformation story.

Finally getting around to this series! I enjoyed chapter 1 — very hot, and great worldbuilding. You’ve got a good knack for putting the reader in the sensory experience of the characters, which I really respond positively to. I look forward to seeing what’s up with the prince, as well as seeing how you work Talley into the story. I am curious though. How do Seeded guys get anything done, like, say, studying and keeping up their grades, when they’re constantly in heat?

Hi there 👋 and thank you for your message. I actually read that very story today as well and loved it. I located your story site through the link you had provided here and added it to my home screen. I just re-read The Spirit of the Bear, which is a story that I truly loved from the first time I read it years ago. 🐻