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7/28/22, 8:53 AM
Oh, this twisted story of the father-son bond really excites me. I liked the way the protagonist's despair was combined with the happiness of seeing his father again.
Evan
7/28/22, 7:33 AM
Hot, fun story. What cream? Hmmmmmm.
Lavender Lad
7/28/22, 2:14 AM
The description of the memories being changed and him helplessly trying to resist was very hot
7/27/22, 10:25 PM
Love this! This was super hot and sexy.
7/27/22, 8:24 PM
Hot story! Love the mantra of repeating “Hair hair hair” as he grows hairier. Will it be continued?
7/27/22, 5:08 PM
I love this story so much! The naïveté of the dad and son, and the implication that they both have the itch. Can’t wait for them to explore more ways to take care of it. Keep up the good work!
7/27/22, 2:39 PM
Hope we get to read more of this! 😁
7/26/22, 3:02 AM
You do a great thing of building anticipation as all the different gods visit these young guys, while also making the eventual outcome feel natural and inescapable! Thanks for another amazing, lore-rich hot-as-hell chapter!

7/26/22, 4:58 PM
@time.to.occur Yeah, one of my favourite parts of this chapter was writing the gradual realisation, and I felt like the climax at the end was singularly fitting to Talley's final conclusion. And, yeah, this definitely had the densest lore of the bunch! It was great fun putting it all together.
7/26/22, 4:23 PM
Really loved the progression of how his mind slipped and his body changed to the suggestions of the anthro! I love a slow burn like that and the descriptions were phenomenal. I don’t know if you took inspiration or if you read Nex Anima Canis’ story before but it had a vibe similar to his old stories settled in school (that’s a big compliment!). Loved the corruption aspect of the transformation and the details of how big he was changing and growing! I hope to read more of your stories in the future!

7/26/22, 4:34 PM
@Bigger Thanks for the compliment! I absolutely took inspiration from NAC's Knothole High series, as well as jockedguy's [I Saw This Bro](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/1471056) series. In a way this story is like a fusion of both of those ideas, but I tried to take it a step farther in this case by intentionally making the outcome a bit darker. I did like how KH improved all of its main characters in one way or another by making them happier, more confident, etc etc. And while I enjoy that a lot, I wanted to intentionally turn the main character into a bully instead of just a himbo dogboy. So this was a lot of fun. Thank you again for the support! Have a good one.
Gasuda
7/26/22, 6:29 AM
I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. Axel and Tao are so well-written, and the way you slowly unveiled their world kept me hooked. Also, I really enjoyed the veteran bits - it almost seems like you might have some military experience yourself. I hope you win the cumpetition!

7/26/22, 1:41 PM
@Gasuda This is such high praise! There’s little I love more than drawing readers in to real characters and an immersive world. I’m glad it pulled you on, and I hope to keep accomplishing the same thing. I don’t have any military experience, but I have a good sense for the vibe that draws people into the idea. I hate it as a concept in the real world, but as a set piece for kink for someone who adores sadism/masochism, it’s perfect. I’m looking forward to diving more into the kinkified military in some Collar stories. I ended up getting third place, which I’m super proud of! Thanks for reading and commenting—I live off of this kind of feedback.