Recent Comments

7/6/25, 8:57 PM
Nice! I just hope that some unscrupulous neighbor/ex-con/cop doesn't take advantage of the cop in the future (evil grin)!
7/6/25, 6:40 PM
I've been enjoying your story, however, if I were to name one criticism it would be the overt religiosity in this chapter. Maybe other readers have a different take on it, but that is a turn-off for me. That's just my feelings on it and is not meant to detract from your otherwise excellent and creative story.
7/6/25, 10:25 AM
Aside from everything else, I have to say I rather love the use of footnotes!
Anonymous
7/4/25, 9:19 PM
The level of detail and immersion was intense at the start but it’s so perfect as a way of “journaling”. Really really enjoyed this start to the story. Definitely interested to read the horny way they physically changed but if that’s planned for far into the future that’s also fine, I really enjoyed your writing style and keen to see more!
7/4/25, 1:54 AM
I've had this series bookmarked for ages and it's a crime that I didn't read it sooner, this was SO good!! I really loved the worldbuilding and this checked a lot of my boxes. I'm excited to read the rest of the series!

7/4/25, 9:11 PM
@[JimsJorts](/user/show/10008527) Oh great! Well you know what they say, better late than never!
7/4/25, 5:26 PM
Hot story Bro

7/4/25, 5:34 PM
@[Chav lad](/user/show/2652549) thanks brother
7/4/25, 11:42 AM
What a fun start! This kind of Drama is right up my alley. Can't wait to see what happens next!
7/4/25, 4:15 AM
Incredible. Hit all my notes. Jealous of Willy lol.

7/4/25, 7:22 AM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Thanks!! I’m a huge fan of your work so that means a lot. Hehehe Willy is definitely living his best life. ♥️
Grieyson
7/4/25, 6:21 AM
I, too, hope we get a new chapter soon. Father/son corruption is 🔥
7/1/25, 3:42 AM
I stumbled across this tonight and as some of the other commenters have mentioned, I wanted to sing the praises of this story. It was raw, it was magical, it was full of fear, and trying and hoping that you'd find your place. This story is magnificent and it left an impact

7/4/25, 12:00 AM
@[Knighte](/user/show/10018571) Thanks for the kind words!